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Published: 2014-06-20 23:30:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 954; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Dedicated to my 13 year old dog, BakiFor those who wish to see Baki, there are some pictures in the beginning of my gallery (golden retriever)...as for this background, it's his paw :3
P.S. I've written many, MANY sad poems...but I admit that this is the only one that caused me to cry while writing it...
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WolfieInTheWillow [2018-10-06 17:29:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm way better at drawing my feelings, but I wish I could write them.
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WolfieInTheWillow [2018-10-06 17:28:56 +0000 UTC]
Awwww this beautiful, your Goldie sounds like a sweetie. I can tell by the paw and the poem.π’ππΎπΊβ€ Your such a good poet, I used to write poetry, but I haven't in years I'm really bad at it.
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Silver297 [2014-06-23 03:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Aw, this is a great one, very well written. It really is sad how dogs only live for so short as they do...
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Marija343 In reply to Silver297 [2014-06-23 12:06:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... but even though it's short, I think they enjoy every single second spent here with us Β Thank you ^^
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jcpeters726 [2014-06-23 00:29:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you have a way with words! Great job as usual!
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TheArtfulJellyfish [2014-06-21 06:29:59 +0000 UTC]
This was genuinely touching. Very nicely done, I could tell this came straight from the heart.
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Marija343 In reply to TheArtfulJellyfish [2014-06-21 12:00:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it did...thank you
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Blitzheart [2014-06-21 02:13:56 +0000 UTC]
This is an amazing poem! I love the idea of "Is it your speaking, in such a small voice, Or is my hearing slowly starting to fade?" How you're questioning if it's the world changing, or you. I absolutely love this <3
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Marija343 In reply to Blitzheart [2014-06-21 12:01:23 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was thinking about how he could be actually feeling and I came to realize that he is actually very confused...he trips and falls, but he doesn't understand what's happening to him at all...sad :/Β Thank you ^^
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