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It would seem our twins got rid of their male friend and plan an intimate evening...Give me FEEDBACK!!!!! What i have done wrong? You like it? You would like more? I FEED on your FEEDBACK !!
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Comments: 32
SloshWerks [2013-05-07 04:59:31 +0000 UTC]
I like it a lot. You asked for feedback and I wouldn't actually change much of anything. If you wanted more realistic, I would have chosen a better wood texture for the floor and put some gloss and reflection on it. Also, a white hotspot on the candle flame and a flare would have made that a bit more realistic. Otherwise, the girls look great, their skin is natural. The nipples and areola on the first twin could stand to me more perked up, but otherwise
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MarinaIbiza In reply to SloshWerks [2013-05-07 08:31:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much
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MarinaIbiza In reply to chutonon [2013-04-24 19:31:41 +0000 UTC]
SΓ, lΓ‘stima lo de los shorts y todo eso...
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chutonon In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-24 19:32:21 +0000 UTC]
pero sorprendeme con otras ropas, mira en mis gallerias las ropas que le he puesto
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MarinaIbiza In reply to chutonon [2013-04-24 21:15:36 +0000 UTC]
Bueno, dame links y te dire si tengo el prop o no
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Silvinx [2013-04-24 10:14:52 +0000 UTC]
Very nice scene, so warm and intimate
If i may give you an advice, the bracelet on her left arm is a bit distracting from the mai focus, probably the ambient value of its surface is too high
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MarinaIbiza In reply to Silvinx [2013-04-24 10:41:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
And give all the advice you want, that's why i ask for it
Yeah, i thought to get it out, but then i thought it would be a contrast to the softness of the image... or something
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Metal-Bent [2013-04-24 08:14:18 +0000 UTC]
AWWWW YEAH... things is getting the way metal-men like 'em...
What I've always found with such lighting is to bring the light slightly closer to the camera than the object that is supposed to be the light source. This way, the object is illuminated in a more realistic way. Did I explain myself proper?
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MarinaIbiza In reply to Metal-Bent [2013-04-24 09:29:30 +0000 UTC]
GREAT advice. Ill try next time, or maybe i rerender this one!
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Metal-Bent In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-24 10:06:01 +0000 UTC]
You do WHATEVER gets me more of these HAWT BABES!!!!
There is an advanced way to make the candle look like it's projecting light more realistcally, but it's a little hard to explain... for now.
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MarinaIbiza In reply to Metal-Bent [2013-04-24 10:42:25 +0000 UTC]
Besides, the Poser way i cant use
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Metal-Bent In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-26 06:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Lol... duh, I keep forgetting that you use Daz.
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westcpw [2013-04-24 06:09:55 +0000 UTC]
great work on the lighting...
only critique - the candle does look realistic...
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MarinaIbiza In reply to westcpw [2013-04-24 07:41:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Not, not really, but the point light just above it don't help... and i couldnt find a more realistic one (that was a freebie i mean)
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westcpw In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-24 11:15:24 +0000 UTC]
cool
WDJ Freebies (not sure on url I got it from) but he/she makse good candles and varied ones..
also have a Christmas candle that had a light set too.
all in all good job though
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MarinaIbiza In reply to westcpw [2013-04-24 12:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Yep, ill look into it. Besides, someone told me a trick: you put the light a bit in front of the candle, not just in its place, so it can lit the candle more detailed. I might rerender to see
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westcpw In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-24 12:39:07 +0000 UTC]
cool - yes good trick
im trying to do a camera flash effect
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MarinaIbiza In reply to westcpw [2013-04-24 13:45:12 +0000 UTC]
You mean the actual flash, not the red eye or the glare, i suppose... Mmh this cant be easy.
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westcpw In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-25 01:45:20 +0000 UTC]
ahh not that 'hard' really
I created a primitve to server as the phone and positioned a spot just outside of it... still rendering in Lux as the render in Daz was pissing me off... will post when its available
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westcpw In reply to MarinaIbiza [2013-04-25 07:06:55 +0000 UTC]
coool
the current render for somereason has not picked up the camera flash... will try again
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Dewani90 [2013-04-23 19:47:54 +0000 UTC]
things may get sexy but the candlelight will add to the romantic atmosphere
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MarinaIbiza In reply to Dewani90 [2013-04-23 21:21:19 +0000 UTC]
romantic is always sexy, if not it's just atmosphere and nothing more
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JediMasterEeth [2013-04-23 18:55:54 +0000 UTC]
Looks like it's about to get all kinds of sexy in there.
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bryte-rockx [2013-04-23 07:30:55 +0000 UTC]
They sure made the right decision ditching that guy Love how intimate this scene is with the candle being the only light source--the bracelet round her arm really pops that way as well as making their piercing green and blue eyes come out great
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