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Markus43 β Triangular Trance
Published: 2018-02-23 15:19:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 0
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As I stood by the lake, my gaze transfixed on the play of light on water and I fell into a trance.Fully awake, yet transported into another dimension, I left my body. Walking into the cool waters, I turned and saw myself looking into the air towards the mountains.
Turning and looking up, I saw myself rising in the form of a bird. My body was no longer old and decaying. Gravity no longer had its hold over me.
I was free.
Truly, truly free.
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Ha ...yeah like I have enough issue dealing with the one "me" let alone keeping track of three of me
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You've created a bit of magic here, Mark...both in form and verse. Kudos on a job well done
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A mystical experience...the image transports and transcends; the verse reveals the moment.
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This piece reminded of a friend of my youth who played bass and harmonica for our band. He related some excerptsΒ from the books written by Carlos Casteneda. He was convinced of their reality, even though Casteneda admitted to being under the influence of peyote during these periods of transformation.
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I never read Castenada but I remember those books, how popular they were and how people believed them.
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