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Published: 2014-12-13 18:22:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 20133; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 70
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Things didn't go as Rainbow Dash planned...[Next Page]
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~English isn't my first language, so if there are any kinds of misspelling or usage of the wrong words please let me know!
~I'm not pleased with the comic's title!! Now that the story is about to change, i need a new one, but i can't come up with anything! So if you have any suggestions i would like to hear them!
Fonts used: Anime Ace (Bubbles)
Time taken: A lot!
All characters (c) Hasbro.
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Comments: 15
Pegasi sense? Does this sense have any connection with Pinkie sense?
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Would make an awesome headcanon
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Hello there!
The comic is super awesome!
the one thing I saw on this page is frames 3, 7, 8 and nine.
You made their necks a bit too long and made them look alittle like alpacas
other than that it looks great!
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Yeah now that you mention it
These pages are quite old tho, i will keep an eye on it and hopefully improve, (or maybe I improved already) ~ thanks for the critique ^^
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As they say, familiarity breeds contempt. You're not the perfect gods you used to be.
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I don't get the "pegasi sense" Help?
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This is turning into a really exciting comic!
I love it so far! 
Since you want people to point out any errors, I saw only one, where Spitfire says "I wanted to be kind once" you should add in "for" to make it "I wanted to be kind for once". That's all. Everything else is great!
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