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Published: 2015-06-21 01:09:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 19096; Favourites: 132; Downloads: 78
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"The new Wonderbolt" is a sequel to "An unexpected encounter " !
~English isn't my first language, so if there are any kinds of misspelling or usage of the wrong words please send me a note!
~As promised, i got this one out faster... Might contain a few mistakes here and there tho because i was working a lot at night ^^'
Fonts used: Anime Ace (Bubbles), ObelixPro ("Part 4"), Always in my Heart (Letter)
Time taken: 30 Hours
Rainbow Dash and Soarin (c) Hasbro.
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Wow, I can't believe I was able to read that letter, and also the buck you doing here Soarin!
(I'll write down what I think I read on the letter on panel 8)
Dear Rainbow Dash,
Since you have some freetime this week, we thought making use of the beautiful weather a marvelous idea!
So we planned a camping trip to the Mountain Hills.
If you want to come with us, meets us at Sugar Cube Corner at 12.
-Rarity
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Oh wow, your correct
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I actually made it readable for those who really want to try xD
Funny that actually some of you tried it ! Thank you for your attention to detail
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Surprise! I wanted to invite you on a secret Wonderbolts camping trip.
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Soarin': "I just came here to- uh ... See you." :I ///-///
Rainbow Dash: "Wh- Why?"
Soarin': "Because I uh ..."
Rainbow Dash: "What???"
Soarin': .....................................................................................................................................
Rarity (In a hot air balloon along with Apple Jack and Pinkie Pie): "AH HA! I KNEW IT!"
Rainbow Dash and Soarin': "AH! WHAT'R YOU GUYS DOING HERE?!"
Twilight Sparkle: "Oh nothing, just making sure you got ur letter." ^-^
Rainbow Dash: "Is that really the reason you guys came here?"
Apple Jack: "Eeeyup."
Pinkie Pie: "AND to see you and Soarin' talk together, have fun, chat about why he's still here instead of st-"
Rarity: *Sticks hoof into Pinkie's mouth* "Eh heh he ..."
Rainbow Dash and Soarin': "WHAT?!"
Rainbow Dash: "YOU GUYS WERE LISTENING AND WATCHING THE WHOLE TIME?!"
Apple Jack: "Eeeyu- uh ... NNNOPE."
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WHERE'S THE NEXT ONE?!?!?!?! I NEED TO SEE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA DIE!!!!!! WAAAHAAAHAAAAHAAAAAAAH!
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I might finish it tonight
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clear !! *uses paddalsto shock her heart back to normal*
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Hiro Hamada: "NONONONONO! It's just an expression!"
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you sure *looks at you
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*Dies*
-Looks around-
"Where am I?"
-hears sounds in bushes-
"What the?"
-Sees skeleton and creepy things-
Skeleton: "Welcome!"
Creepy things: "THIS IS HALLOWEEN!"
Me: "AAAAAAAAAAH!!!! Wait a minute, am I dead?"
Skeleton: "ROAR- Wait, what? You should be."
Me: "Ooookay, I'm just gonna go..."
-Does Sonic Scene-Boom-
-Wakes up-
"That was weird"
-looks around. Sees ponies dressed up in Nightmare Night costumes-
"OH COME ON!"
Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, Rumble, Button Mash, and Pipsqueek: "NIGHTMARE NIGHT, WHAT A FRIGHT, GIVE US SOMETHING SWEET TO-"
Queen Chrysalis: "BITE!"
Kids: "AH!"
Me: -Hoof bumps with chrysie and Fluffle Puff-
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Yes it is but since she figured out she could reach it way faster by placing it in her front yard she took this opportunity rightaway.
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i Β love itΒ Β Β Β Β Β Β Β ican't wait the next !Β Β Β Β Β
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I really enjoy the way you use the panels and tell your story :3
I'm still a huge fan, keep on your awesome work
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Working on it already
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I feel someone is quite smitten kitten π
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DustyHooves is right, Rarity hates camping there was even an episode about it, it was like a Scootaloo episode, the first of the CMC that Luna visited in dreams...
and Soarin's dead if he lied to RD...
Marmo, are you making this casting with Rainbow and Soarin?
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What do you mean by casting?Β
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the story I meant, ya know...their..uhh...( zips mouth )
Β - Don't...you...dare...
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OuO now I'll die if you don't update soon!!! Not rushing you though ^^,
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Rarity planned a camping trip? Rarity hates camping...Β Β
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"Oh you know, I'm just spying on you to see if you follow my training seriously. Btw you don't mind that I borrowed your couch to sleep last night? Oh and I maybe have eaten an apple pie too...Β Β "
I love his face in the last panel XD
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So fast! Wow Marmo, this page was SUPER fast! And your Dashie is lovely. I'm so curious about the new plot, I really have no idea how could go on now (except for the meeting between Soarin the playpony and the main six ahah)
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What do you mean by playpony?.......*hopes you don't mean what I think you mean*
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ahahah it was a joke. I think Soarin has a crush on DashieΒ Β
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He was working out to impress her.. he's got it bad. But he works fast though, I mean she was on top of him a few pages ago.
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Actually i just wrote that gym scene because he (as a wonderbolt) got beaten in a race by a fellow Ponyville Pony and that's something he can't accept xD
But i didn't make it clear ._. so i kinda need to stick with what i got now... heheΒ Β
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Well, is this comic gonna have some more Soardash in the future? 0u0
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Not answering that just yet 
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*le crai* m'kay...I'll wait I guess..*sits in corner and checks notifications every 5 seconds*
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Eheh Soarin doesn't waste timeΒ Β
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