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Martith — Relesksation in conservatory
#afternoon #agua #azul #conservatory #esk #laguna #relax #summer #sun #tree #water #twwm #sunny
Published: 2018-04-24 03:08:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 13388; Favourites: 1241; Downloads: 0
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Time for some relax and lurking in the back ;>
It started as a landscape fun, then I wanted to add some esks... some XD
I feel like it's one of my best landscape pieces, compared to previous ones I feel like I really improved, and I want to improve more!
So I'd like to recieve honest critique ♥
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Babies depicted, their rightful owners and their scores
(let me know if I made a mistake, it's so many different scores aaaa)
831 - Papina // standing on the branch // - Martith
Total GP per submission: 13
883 - Awan // evil pancake in the back // - Martith
Total GP per submission: 11
719 - Button // trying to not fall // - lyricalmime
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +2 GP (Full Body Bonus) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 13
608 - Sweet Pea // trying to save Button // - taking-ctrl
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +2 GP (Full Body Bonus) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus) +1 GP (Small Familiar/Swarm: 1 GP * 1)
Total GP per submission: 14
897 - Kell // big handsome head on the left // - taking-ctrl
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 11
382 - Wish // hanging from the branch // - Zoomutt
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +2 GP (Full Body Bonus) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 13
532 - Weaver // looking at Papina // - pepperfsh
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus) +1 GP (Small Familiar/Swarm: 1 GP * 1)
Total GP per submission: 12
619 - Faul // sleeping next to the bottle child // - VaalbaraCreeps
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +2 GP (Full Body Bonus) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus) +1 GP (Enchantment: 1 GP * 1)
Total GP per submission: 14
810 - Chupi // jumping happily to the water // - Syvaender
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +2 GP (Full Body Bonus) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 13
840 - Glynd // relaxing in the water // - starpatched
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus)
Total GP per submission: 11
906 - bottle child of Sedoris looking cute as usual, gazing joyfully at sleeping Faul ;v;
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration) +2 GP (Full Body Bonus) +6 GP (Full/Scenic Background) +1 GP (Conservatory Bonus) +1 GP (Enchantment: 1 GP * 1)
Total GP per submission: 14
My AP score:
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration) | +5 AP (Full Body Bonus) | +20 AP (Full/Scenic Background) | +10 AP (Conservatory Bonus) | +2 AP (Small Familiar/Swarm: 1 AP * 2) (Sweet Pea's & Weaver's) | +2 AP (Enchantment: 1 AP * 2) (Faul & bottle child) | +5 AP (Personal Work Bonus) | +90 AP (Other Esk Bonus: 10 AP * 9) | +10 AP (Personal Interaction Bonus: 5 AP * 2) | +90 AP (Other Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 9) |Total AP per submission: 244
BG Reference by Karla López de Nava, Iliana Brodziak y Gildardo Sánchez
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Comments: 102
Thank you so so much for your kind words!!! ♥
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This is so awesome, Mar! I mean, the background looks very natural, I'm in love with those little light beams, and the water is great!
Maybe... I miss something on the right side water, that small gap at Bottle bab's right, maybe some bright lines, or water waves...
Also, that really dark holes I think I would be better maybe lighter? Some dark green, maybe.
But it looks awesome anyway! I love the way you draw eskies, they look so fluffy and soft, but the bottle of little bottle child looks like real glass!
I mean, you made al the textures feel according to real world, and esks look both real-world creature, but also a "magic" touch, i love!
Hope you find this critique helpful!
It's subjective, and I'm not an art expert ^^"
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Thank you so much! I agree, there are some spots that lack some depth or color. I'll be sure to focus on such detail next time as well ♥ thank you so much for taking your time to write the critique ♥
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The vision was soo real like in real life you know, the shades, the shadows, the highlight look's like soo real. And the creatures !!! That was soo beautiful !...
Soo original, the color, crazy color that so original !...That's very super duper cool cool cool man !!! i love the creatures poses, it's like a peace... You can look the water colour, it was very soft color and the tree thoo....... The nature, that was soo crazy..... Love it! The Color ! The tree The creatures ! The water ! All is very great !!! ...Good job Martith... I hope you gonna be more talented someday !
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Thank you so much! I appreciate it ♥
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Thanks !
That was my job ( in my school )
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Nie przepadam ogólnie za eskami ale ten art jest przepiękny, atmosfera, światło, cienie; no cudna praca po prostu ;u;
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;3; Dziękuję
A tak z czystej ciekawości; dlaczego nie przepadasz? :> coś szczególnego Cię w nich razi, czy tak ogólnie jakoś Ci nie podchodzą? ^^
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Wiesz co po prostu jakoś mnie nie przekonują, sama nie wiem, nie mam konkretnego powodu, ładne są ale to nie moje klimaty czy coś...
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Nie no jasne, kumam 
Ja z "wewnętrznego" punktu widzenia mogę powiedzieć, że to, co tworzy najlepszą atmosferę wokół nich, to cała społeczność. Dołączyłam z nadzieją na jakieś dochodowe komisze, a zostałam dla ludzi, fajnych ludzi z całego świata, zafiksowanych na punkcie jednej rasy XD mam 3 eski, ale jakoś nie czuję potrzeby powiększania kolekcji
A część z nich przestalkowała mój profil i znalazła Tsavahi, i zaraz się rzucili żeby swoje postacie zrobić XD
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No społeczność nawet robi takie wrażenie sympatycznych, sama może bym spróbowała się zaangażować, ale z tym u mnie ciężko, bo może mnie to przerosnąć
Cieszę się, że Tobie się udało owo
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Holy, exquisitely phenomenal! This Enchanting Laguna Scenery is stunning and All of The Aqua-Esque Creatures look incredible. The designs, expressions, poses, river, water, reflection, ripples, manes, eyes, ears, tails, color sequences, markings, fur, fins, interaction fairies, insects, cuteness, tree, flowers, leaves, brush, plant life, sunlight, rays, shadows, wind, flow, movement, effects, perspective, realisticness, atmosphere, hues, textures, concept, composition, uniqueness, style, colors, lighting, and other details are also sensational. Amazingly Beautiful work!
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w...wow what a comment 
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Thanks Bruv! I'm really proud of this one!
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//Weeps
my beautiful children! You've drawn them so well! I love the atmosphere and the time you took to capture each Esk's personality!
Weaver looks amazing. I love her fluff so freaking much. and the murder pancake and the lighting and Papina being a cute noodle T^T!! Aaahh I just love it all so freaking much!!!
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Ahhhhh I'm so glad to hear that you like it sooo much ;; thank you for all the words they make me happy ♥
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I'm sorry for being so late with my reply I gotta admit I was a little grumpy about something these past few days and I didn't want that to seep into my comment on here!
I really love this. It turned out incredibly cute. Again congratz on scoring the front page with it!
I adore the way Zoomutts bean is just draped over the branch like that with dangling legs. I also love the interaction between Button an Sweet Pea it's so cute <3.
The bottle Ikkit child is also one of the cutest things ever <3
And ofc I love how you drew Chupi here. Him jumping into the water with such a happy expression is incredibly in character for him and Kell watching him doing that is just so loveable.
I really dig your painting style with this as well. The little sunspots on the branches are giving this piece a lot of atmosphere. I think adding a few of these high contrasting light spots into the shadow that the tree casts onto the water would have been a good addition but that's almost all that I can think of when it comes to critique. Really neat piece. Thanks again for including Chupi. It made me smile c:
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Thank you so much for all the kind words! And I'll be sure to use your advice in the future artworks! It was a very joyful experience to paint Chupi so happily enjoying the time ♥
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This is so detailed and amazing! You really have SOO much talent!!!
Keep up the gorgeous work!!
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This is absolutely stunning!! I love all the colors and the light too! Amazing work
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OMG that's such a compliment ;; I love this game's design aaa thank you so so much ♥
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Your welcome, its very well deserved! I LOVE IT ❤
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jksebftrjkwehjfbhserhjgfsdhfsdghfusjde SO AMAZING
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This is an awesome piece, I love the background and how peaceful the entire thing feels.
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i like it... the landscape looks really nice and the characters look great too
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I just KEEP loving on li'l red-eyes floofy hangin' out!
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Oh my good this is so beautiful! I like the warm feeling and colors in this, not to mention the flair and beam of light that's coming through leaves!
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Awh thank you! ;; it's so awesome to see your art in popular ; ^ ;
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