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mashi-tsushiro — Older Tim Drake. The 3rd Robin
Published: 2009-04-23 02:51:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5144; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 2553
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Complete Version.I fixed it here and there and tried to draw the body. It really took me a whole day to finish it. I've never done any drawing like this before, but it's all paid off! Since this is the first time I feel satisfied towards my piece, which I have never felt before. It's all thank you to =moeT-moeT for tutoring and telling me what the right things to do and ~LONLOTRILILI for giving my any advices here and there.
Thank you guys ;____;
I'm planing to clean up my submissions and learning this new style. What do you think?
It really is a new style for me. since all this time I only drew Japanese comic style. Now I'm crossing to American superheroes comic. Why? Why? Cause I've been having a crush to Batman series, and Batman and Robin series, since i was in Elementary school!
And have never gotten a chance to learn this new style cause I was always in my comfort zone and didnt want to come out of it. But after browsing and reading so many Young Justice, Teen Titans, JLA lately, I'm obsessed even more!
*ryou-0013 said if I'm obsessed with one person, I will get a long term effect. Haha. Maybe she's right.
Man, I've never written an artist's comment as long as this too. Hahaha. It's all brand new to me! XD
Comments, and also Critics please. It will be much appreciated than if you only fav and tell nothin ;___; please? Thank you!
PS: Grammar Beautifully edited by =moeT-moeT . Thank you so much baby~
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Comments: 37
Very nice, impressive muscle definition. The shading is also excellent, more than I could ever hope to achieve with just a pencil. And I see you're fluent in Bahas as well!
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Thank you so much master Jedi! Yes im your neighborhood. Indonesia. so i can speak bahasa. ehehe.
Terimakasih Tuan Jedi. hahaha 8D Nice to meet u btw
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You're very welcome! Nice to meet you too.
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Batman is cool, I love alllll the villains :3
I think this is really well done. To me it looks well proportioned and very US-style.
I looove the flow of the cape and the crotch (*evil cackle*) Also those fists <3 They're amazing
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OH YEAH TRUE!!!!! Batman world is too awesome!
The Villain is soo mentali disorder and so cool become a bad guy!
Not too proportioned though and still left some asian style. will do better next time.
Yeah ppl always mention bout the crotch LOL
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IYAAA AKHIRNYA BROOO!!! AKHIRNYA!! BWAKAKAKAKA
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wakakakakakakaka
mana kon nya
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g suka dr kepala sampe pinggang
TP bagian pergrlangan tgn sama kaki emang masi rada aneh rasanya mash D:
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Iya masih perlu belajar lebih lagi! Ehehe. Makasih mpe udah datang dan comment!
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sami2, g salut sm u berani gt style ^^
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yer welcommee mash ^^
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Wow, amazing job, it looks like you worked very hard on it Mashi. Well done making it look so real. I will not give you critique because most people have already told you the parts they think need work.
<3
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Woah Saku chan! Thank you for spent more time commenting in this piece!
I really enjoy making it than working hard, actually.
It's really Okay if you want to give more critics. I will gladly accept it!
Thank you~
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Firts thing first, no, he's not looking old at all. lolz.. i told you that through Ym
but yea, I think ppl already told you about getting out of comfort zone. Jumping from manga style to americano style
I can see american style there with all muscle and shades while his face in manga style, so I see a bit combination actually ^^
There's a slight odd pose from his right hand, it seems he bend his wrist to deep, if you look at it carefully. But if you look overall pic, you might not notice it at all
Oh, and I'm a bit confused with his..boots? It's supposed to be boots, rite? 'cause you draw his toe separated and I thought it was ninja socks or something
Anyway, good work Mash. Better than the one I draw for you actually. lolz...
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Not look old. Oh you're may saviour! Wahaha. It's becos he looks really angry or a lil bit mature here.
Wahaha. Yes my old style is dragged here! TT__TT will try harder next time!
Ya its a boots. I forgot where i got that kind boots of reference. And now i cannot found it! D8>
ya i will change it sometimes with better reference D8>
Thank you so much that u want to spend your time for comments and critics! I really appreciate it! No la your robin is pretty cool too! Thank you so much for give me that piece also! <3
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boleh juga sis, gw suka kalau ada orang yang berani keluar dari comfort zonenya... it's so damn cool...
gambarnya gw bilang udah ok banget... yang agak kurang cuma tangannya doank... tapi overall udah perfect lah menurut gw
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Aiya sista apa kabar??? Giling udah lama banget ga contact2. wakaka.
Wah makasih makasih. Iya nih lagi berusaha keras belajar dasar2 menggambar lagi! Moga aja bisa!
Iya proporsi masi kurang disana sini sis! Tapi ga papa! Saya akan berusaha lebih keras lagi! Hehehe
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maap ya... kuliah membunuh saya, hahaha...
selamat belajar ya... gw juga mau belajar2 lagi nih, hehehe...
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Ayo belajar bersama sis! Hehehe.
Aduh iya ya kulia sibuk sih ya. Berjuang sis!!!
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Mama bilang art lamanya biarin aja papa. Kan papa sendiri yang bilang mo coba nyari titik temunya. Buat acuan dua2nya aja.
Anyway... ASKING JOCKSTRAP SIZE PLEASE??
And permission to sexually harrass him.
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Iya mau 2 2 nya cuma mau belajar gambar dari basic lagi mama. tenang papa akan tetep gambar gaya2 simplify kaya dulu kok. Yg imut2 juga. Cuma proporsi kan masih aneh banget. Jadi masih harus terus basak basic drawing and anatomy mama.
Akkkh jangan punya dia mama. D8 dia milikku! Wuakakaka. Permission ngga diberikan! XDXD Mama ama istri aja! Lebih manis! wuakakaka
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Iya sih tapi istriku kalo di-sekuhara... Berubah jadi seme soalnya mama pasti jadi uke banget. ;___;
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NANKA UNMEI DAAAAAAAAAAA. LOL
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HAHAHAHA!
Like what I said earlier, this is probably your best drawing ever I've seen so far
Very nice improvement dari yang cuma gambar flat line doank 
Ready for boot camp?
We will hammer you down with foundation skills, baby! hahaha
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Yes im ready, ShiFu! Iya mau bangettt XD Wakakaka. makasih loh udah mau take ur time buat lecture saya.
Iye ini bener2 satu2 nya gambar "mateng" di gallery gw kayanya. Wakakaka. Ya ga papa la bau manganya. masih awal jadi masih "amis" nanti kalau udah lamaan baru deh mulai ilang (kali ya)
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WOW COOL!!!
bisa jg american style
nice improve!! ^^
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Wahaha. masih belajar bebe. Makasih loh udah luangin waktu buat comments.
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Mashi this is beyond awesome! I had no idea you could draw him this amazingly! It looks like official art! Excellent job!
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Wah Matt!!! It was fast! wahaha.
Matt, did u see the musclesssss? THE MUSCLESSS LOL *died* Man maybe Demona is right i really sound like a fangirls. Wahaha.
Even it's still lack here and there Im really happy bout this piece! 8D Hehehe. Thank youu. I never expect i can draw him in this style too! XD
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I think the face and torso are really, really strong, and I like them a lot. It's the legs and arms that need work. The walk looks like a combination of being against the wind and trying to sneak. The placement of the arms, especially his left arm, implies a lot of stiffness. Relax his pose, he keeps quiet by staying loose. I also don't get a sense from the drawing of how far his cape is flowing behind him. It looks like it's really close, but the right arm suggests maybe it's flowing quite a ways backwards.
I say all this because it's still a really good drawing, I'd say just play around more; he doesn't need to be so determined and heroic, he needs a walk that embodies a lighter, more agile character.
Cheers,
Kyle
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Thank you so much Kyle! I'll try harde in the next piece! Yes i know thaat i need to work it out more. I really appreciate you take time to tell me what i do wrong.
And the cape, I will learning how fabric flow. I'm not learning it yet. Thank you for your clear explanations. It's really helpful. Thank You~
And your gallery is so cool! Good work, Keep it up!~
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