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masterdevil — My Place
Published: 2007-11-25 07:32:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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In a world that is upside down.I learnt to walk straight.
On a road that is so crooked,
I learnt to walk straight.
I tried so hard,
Not knowing how much it could hurt.
In a world that is so dark,
I learnt… that the only way to be happy is by being stone cold. By being ignorant to your cries. By pretending that I don’t care. I tried to fight my greatest fear, but seems like it has taken the better of me. I tried to fight the hatred, but now I have succumbed to it. ‘coz in a world where hatred rules, I had to find my place…
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world that is upside down...you'd need to walk on the same side or right side up...not straight. there should be a greater mode of narration as your message or rather what you intend to convey is lost before you even reach the end.
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now that you point it out... you're right.. ill take care next time...
thnx
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