ste5ens [2004-01-07 03:18:00 +0000 UTC]

I like it bro, It brings up a great image into my mind. It definitely paints a picture

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dutdutdutdutta [2003-11-22 20:41:50 +0000 UTC]

short, simple, and well put. I know the feeling.

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jayku [2003-10-14 15:04:59 +0000 UTC]

hi glenn, haha yeah jon, and i agree with kenzieeer

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coldsoul [2003-08-20 23:46:20 +0000 UTC]

I liked the other one better, but this is an interesting style. I guess the idea is theres not much that can be expressed in words. Am i right?

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jsenn [2003-07-13 00:12:39 +0000 UTC]

Sweet and beautiful and so tenderly spoken. It like that very much.

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zen-x [2003-07-05 01:17:00 +0000 UTC]

*zen sings 'puppy love' by donny osborne then realises its 2AM and everyone can hear him*

I like it, simple and to the point but still manages to express that spine tingling emotion. I like the repetition as well, works well in context.

Peace

zen-x

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kenzie [2003-07-04 01:58:54 +0000 UTC]

this is very pretty, the repetition escapes redundancy by a hair, and is instead powerful, genuine, and beautiful. excellent poem; i love its simplicity

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woefulinfinity [2003-07-04 00:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I found you on recent submissions, Laoch.

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