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Published: 2007-03-23 14:33:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description 87. Food [link]
86. Seeing Red 88. Pain

There will be an explanation to this soon *its a story im working on* but i wanted this up so that people can see the pic normally without the story n then they can fullview n everything. i was trying out a new way of coloring. tell me what u think. i dont like the hair on the top of his head. but wat ever

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Kuroneko8813 [2007-04-26 22:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I am from the anime crit club, and here's my crit. For a chibi, you've got pretty good style, but the head looks funny. Try rounding the head a little more, on the left it looks square. Also, is he/she supposed to have a mullet? If not, the way to fix that is as follows: the hair strand should just slip off the head and fall down. That's the best I can do for that. Your colouring style has real potential, keep practicing.

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masterodamidget In reply to Kuroneko8813 [2007-04-28 16:21:55 +0000 UTC]

o hi!! thanks. ya ur rite it does look a little square. damnit. when im drawing chibis they dont normally have really square faces but well.... oops. ya for the hair *its really weird cuz about where his neck starts his hair stops, and then its rust furr down his neck so i cant really show that with a chibi (at least not my chibis cuz they have no neck)* its not suposed to be nessicarily that long *slightly shorter* but it is a little slanted because thepicture in my book is actually slanted so on ps i turned it upright so it looks a little funny if u really look at it. but thanks for the info ^^,

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DaDRK [2007-04-13 01:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Its cute and slighly chibi reminesance so I may have some problem giveing some comments on it

well here I go, I do like the how the hair has slightly different hued colors in it, it adds some depth that just one color lacks, its a bit messy right now you might want to follow how the hair flows a little more and I think you will have it right. I also like the scaling on the fish its a nice touch I would have probably just have skipped doing due to laziness . The lines on this seem a bit rough and slightly jagged if you could smooth them out a bit I think it would look cleaner. giving your speech/emotion a shadow is a nice touch but there is some shadow on the top of the bubble giving a weird illusion as to the possibility of the bubble being cut out of the background it may be better to remove that and possibly shade the bottom half a bit to give it some of the 3d pop I think you were going for.
Sorry for the long winded comment, you did a nice job here

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masterodamidget In reply to DaDRK [2007-04-13 02:38:42 +0000 UTC]

nonnoono thats ok thats ok! i do that some times too. thank yas for the crit *gaaahhh*i cant spell today*stabs keyboard* the bubbles shadow is actually a style effect on PS which i can only do so much too but i can try messing with it to get rid of it. thank yas. and the hair is all messy cuz i did it either on my mouse pad or my little crappy mouse *which i no longer need**s tablet* and personally i like adding the little scale touches. i had my friend looking at it before and i was asking him "Does this look like the coloration of a fish to u?" ".....no. not really" "*damnit!*goes off to find pic of fish*" n so the scales really gave it the fishyness hehe

soooo ARIGATO!!! gozaimasu

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DaDRK In reply to masterodamidget [2007-04-13 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem, glad I could be of some help

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masterodamidget In reply to DaDRK [2007-04-13 02:57:15 +0000 UTC]

haiiiii!!! ^^,

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manic-goose [2007-03-23 16:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Cute. What's wrong with the fish? is it bad? OR is he not supposed to eat it???

The hair does look good. He has a fluffy tail? That is cute.

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masterodamidget In reply to manic-goose [2007-03-23 18:02:01 +0000 UTC]

well not normally but i think he has a tail its just he hides it most of the time really well n i thought it was just too cute to leave out. n the thing with the fish is that its my dinner n im really hungery n he ate my food

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manic-goose In reply to masterodamidget [2007-03-23 18:04:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see.

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masterodamidget In reply to manic-goose [2007-03-23 18:51:09 +0000 UTC]

lol yup

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