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Published: 2015-11-17 18:36:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 6871; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description This is just a new style of pacing I am testing out.....tell me what you think! Does it work? I'll be posting two pages today because this one doesn't really count......

Anyway, enjoy!

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akitku [2015-11-23 13:43:10 +0000 UTC]

What a pretty chapter title page. I love how you captured her movement. She seems so lonely! And the contrast between her graceful, somewhat fragile form and the solid, dark figures behind her is so well done!

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Matakoura In reply to akitku [2015-11-28 00:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That is so kind of you  

The fact that it comes across as a chapter title page probably means that my experiment with pacing didn't work XD

Thank you, though!!

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akitku In reply to Matakoura [2015-11-28 14:45:08 +0000 UTC]

O gosh! I see what you mean! Actually, I don't think it failed. I looked at the pages again and now I see that it is of course not the title page. I feel so stupid for writing that! The thing is, I follow a number of web comics and I don't view the pages consecutively on one sitting. So I forgot what was on the previous page - hence in isolation there was no issue of pacing. After I looked at the last few pages consecutively I did pick up on the pace! I'm sorry for the crappy comment, it was the result of my not reading/viewing carefully. I still think the page, because it is just one large panel and very detailed and, to put it simply, pretty,  *could* be a title page. But that should not make you feel that it is a bad page! (Also I was working on my own test title page when I was writing the comment so I might have been primed! )

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Matakoura In reply to akitku [2015-11-30 03:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you so much!!! Haha no problem!! Don't worry, I can see how it happened XD No problem!

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Kristchin [2015-11-19 15:24:42 +0000 UTC]

H'm! When I look at a piece of art, I generally conduct my opinion through emotion; I am not a critic, to any degree.
But I do enjoy the theme and line-work quite a lot. Also, I am not knowledgeable enough in technical terminology to know if you've actually used it--but it seems to me that you have some interesting cross-hatching work.

Generally, I greatly enjoy the theme, and the focus model--being the woman--has a lovely expression.
I think that's what interests me the most.

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Matakoura In reply to Kristchin [2015-11-20 20:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Your comment means a lot to me, it really does

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Nirrian [2015-11-19 00:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Words can't even describe this. The details are amazing and it's clean!

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Matakoura In reply to Nirrian [2015-11-19 00:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you so much!

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Nirrian In reply to Matakoura [2015-11-19 01:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Super clean!

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Matakoura In reply to Nirrian [2015-11-20 20:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Nirrian In reply to Matakoura [2015-11-21 07:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome! 

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