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Published: 2006-07-31 15:54:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description This started out being a picture I drew because I was tired of being so depressed.

Then it became a 'hm, let's see how well I can draw with just colored pencils'. Well, actually I drew it with a ballpoint pen and there's a bit of orange marker, but still.

So whether it's explanations of how the body is off (though I already know her arms are off) or comments on how I should change my style, please critique away.
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Comments: 18

Mornhaven [2006-08-03 06:33:52 +0000 UTC]

all i would suggest is shortening her torso, I like the rest a lot!

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jinebiebe-arekisu [2006-08-01 01:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Thirding the anatomy dealio, but to be honest, the tutorial ~clonie linked ya to isn't that helpful. The easiest way to learn anatomy, I think, is to just watch people moving.

That's how I'm attempting to learn, anyway, and I still suck so I should NOT even be talking. -slithers away- If you find a good anatomy tutorial, tell me, and I will be ever so greatful.

Who's Shiwi, though?

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lightedcandle [2006-07-31 20:48:23 +0000 UTC]

I agree about the anatomy thing. Everyone has trouble with anatomy though. and there are a bunch of good tutorials on DA that are reallly helpful, I'd go chack some of those out...Luv the purplr hair though! XD

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-03 06:30:06 +0000 UTC]

damn the turkey!

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lightedcandle In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-03 07:09:01 +0000 UTC]

What in tarnation are ya thinkin'; dearie!!??

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-04 16:30:47 +0000 UTC]

YOU JUST SHUDDAPANDLISTEETOMEBECAUSEIAM...IAM....AHHHHHHHGGGGGG........ *bang* ehhhhhh.... *dead*

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lightedcandle In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-04 21:16:33 +0000 UTC]

>_>...

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-05 01:59:03 +0000 UTC]

<(-.-)> May the force be with you!

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lightedcandle In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-05 03:33:07 +0000 UTC]

O-o

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-05 20:50:41 +0000 UTC]

*.* i died!

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lightedcandle In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-06 05:48:10 +0000 UTC]

*tongue out* mleehhhh

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-06 06:46:26 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO BE UPSET!!!!! DAMN YOU!!!!! I DIED! HE-LO?

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lightedcandle In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-06 07:03:43 +0000 UTC]

die again then dammit!!! stop spamming me!!! *glares*

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-06 19:58:40 +0000 UTC]

hun?

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Mornhaven In reply to lightedcandle [2006-08-06 19:58:36 +0000 UTC]

hun?

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Mornhaven In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-03 06:31:12 +0000 UTC]

This is lightedcandle.....How dare they kill an innocent turkey!! Feel my wrath of doooooom! Bitches!!! Fwehhhhhh!

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Mornhaven In reply to Mornhaven [2006-08-03 06:32:42 +0000 UTC]

IT WAS BLOODY THANKSGIVING SO GIVE UP ON IT!!!!!!!!! oh, and math_dunce, this has absolutely no relevence or relation to anything except us, so please ignore the spam and don't take offense!

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clonie [2006-07-31 15:57:00 +0000 UTC]

It looks like you've got great potential with this! The face and hair are lookin' swell, but the anatomy's a little off. I have a tutorial that might help you: [link]

Enjoy!!

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