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Mathell — Knight 05
Published: 2006-06-29 08:04:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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Here's the next one all up and ready.I left the heads on the bottom unrefined, I thought they looked preatty good unmessed with. That and I'm to lazy to finish them. Also, I know his sleeve magicly fixed itself but thats because he has mad sowing skills. I would of said its because I'm to lazy to fix it but I already used that excuse.
Anway, enjoy and comment please.
O, also, if anyone wants to see there charicter in the comic I'm getting to the point where I will add more people. Just send me a note and I'll see if your charicter will work in Knight if you want.
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Comments: 4
Thats... a buttload of text. Its actually written quite well, so all I can suggest is throwing in more panels so that there is a better Comic / Text ratio. Looks to be an interesting story. Darnit, now I'm gonna have to read the rest of 'em...
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I know I use a lot of text, why I tend to call it a story comic. I just want it to go faster but a lot of people agree with you so I'm going to have to figure something out.
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Hmm, you should size down the text and put more emotion intto what they are saying, you know, accent, humor, or serious etc.
just my opinion
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Yea, I see what your saying. It's still rather hard to get the text to feel right. I'll get it at some point though if not today.
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