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MattMiles — SATBS: Tails Experiments: Swap PG1
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Published: 2014-08-21 17:07:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 7864; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 12
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Page 1 of chapter 2
Sonic and Tails belong to SEGA
Colour: me
Line: Amandaxter
Sonic and the Bird Stone: amandaxter.deviantart.com/gall…
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Angry Sonic! Sonic in the first panel is cute! He may not think so but he is cute when he's big~!
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*Reposted*
Eh this page makes the last one pointless. This may as well have been page 3. If the consequence of page 3 goes away in a few minutes, then it really leaves no lasting impact. If something happened in the few minutes while Sonic was small, then there'd be a reason for it to exist. If it lasted longer and say Tails had to protect Sonic from a bird, then there's humour and significance...but instead nothing happens and he grows big again relatively quick. So essentially page 3 didn't really add anything but an extra page for the sake of a quick laugh. That's not too bad per say, but from a story telling perspective it doesn't give much of a lasting impression.
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i read it when u put it on A.D's
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0.0 Damn that was fast.
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Nothing to be sorry about...just didn't expect such a quick response. It wasn't the insightful response I was hoping for, but oh well.
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if you want a extra bit to chapter 1, i could try and do somthing
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Nah don't bother wasting time going back. It's better to move on first, then maybe go back after you're done if you really feel like it. I'm just one person. It's not like a bunch of people said the same thing. Don't bother using resources to fix something from one persons critique. If you truly feel the same was I do, then just keep purpose in mind with the gags for pages, and keep on trucking forward in the mean time.
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Cause and effect....that's what it's all about.
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