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Published: 2009-02-09 01:16:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2565; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 36
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Valley of Angels: Chapter 01My own original manga. Comments and critique welcome
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he building a camp for worker slaves and is angry because two girls can escaping? he is a big asshole.
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meh i figgered he'd have used his and his regiments honor as crap paper when he agreed to take part in the enslavement of his citizens.
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You're blaming the solder?If I remember right it was only because of your own indiscretion and stupidity that they even knew in the first place (Thank you for that by the way)
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Come on, it's just two kids. What's the worst they could do to your army? That's a rhetorical question, BTW
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they outsmarted your boss, not your little soldier,
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Seems a waste of resources at this point to go after them. If anyone else tried to escape I'd make an example of THEM but not waste man hours on two children. But I'm not the evil oppressive military here, I guess.
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Oh my! It seems the captain is a bit short tempered!
Too bad for the poor sergent!
And for Suzume and Hana too...
I fear now that captain will seek to restore the honour of his regiment by any means possible!
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Hahahaha, loser. Got out smarted by two girls. Great Work Pal. I have a suggestion, You could have the girls come close to being found out, but Susume could have a trap or something set up to lead them off some other direction, or trap them and they get away.
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I have an idea, and it's closer than you think.
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Awsome. I guess great minds think alike, or almost alike. Can't wait to see it Pal!
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Ok dude, seriously? It's TWo girls. Don't freak out and just let them go.
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a couple of years late, but my thought exactly.
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pride can kill you, you know?
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