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Valley of Angels: Chapter 02My own original manga. Comments and critique welcome
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Comments: 19
spudfiend [2012-11-25 21:22:10 +0000 UTC]
Finally giving up the chase. Sure, she's probably going to be some hero and it'd be in the bad guy's best interest to kill her now...but they can't possibly know that.
Looks like not eating and continuously moving is catching up to Suzume.
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Fierce-Dities-Link [2009-04-13 22:22:52 +0000 UTC]
Ah man. I hate seeing a girl suffer like that. I hope something good happens to her.
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ThenAgain [2009-04-09 10:39:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh noes! She is getting sick!
I hope she'll be alright in the end... We actually never got to see what happened after she passed out in the first chapter, so I'm pretty worried!
Strange of Hensen to decide to simply let them go...
There's definitely more to this man then it appears!
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Nightscream452 [2009-04-09 04:53:11 +0000 UTC]
Ah Ha! Are we catching up to the beginning of the first chapter!?
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LunarLadyLupa [2009-04-09 00:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Good back ground work... I do hope she's... not too sick. I'm going... back to nap.
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Artemis347 [2009-04-08 22:48:13 +0000 UTC]
Good page. The forest scenery look nice.
So, I realize she's getting sick from walking around in wet clothes, but is she in a colder climate? I mean, why doesn't she take a break from walking, hang her clothes to dry, and lounge in the sun... or perhaps she thinks that the military is still following her...
SO thought of another connection to Hensen. So Suzume's about 17 right? Hensen looks about 30ish... so he's too young to be her father, BUT long lost sister. That's gotta be it! She looks just like mom who ran off when Hensen was younger and had Suzume and died in childbirth. Dear old mother must of been a trollop so the father was unknown hence Suzume being an orphan.
Oh dear, I'm rambling again...
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mattwilson83 In reply to Artemis347 [2009-04-08 23:13:29 +0000 UTC]
Suzume is actually 14, and no.
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Artemis347 In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-08 23:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Oops, don't know why I thought she was 17, you probably even said at some point that she is 14, guess I just forgot.
So, if she is fourteen, then I'm going back to my first theory, long lost daughter. OR perhaps a niece...
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mattwilson83 In reply to Artemis347 [2009-04-09 09:59:57 +0000 UTC]
I said on I think... page 4 or 5.
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Ultimate-Zelda-fan [2009-04-08 21:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Looks like she's coming down with something.
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Onihikage [2009-04-08 21:06:15 +0000 UTC]
I sense an impending intervention by supernatural forces! (possibly through a traveling couple discovering her and nursing her back to health, though destined to die later)
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