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Valley of Angels: Chapter 02My own original manga. Comments and critique welcome
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Comments: 56
Borelloman [2014-01-21 20:45:39 +0000 UTC]
really funny. poor guy. she would crushing him at a tree or at the ground.
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Flyerscurse [2012-11-28 17:17:10 +0000 UTC]
classic comedy... hey, I'm assuming you didn't design her as a "pretty" woman... so if we add this and when the bad guy recognized her plus angels...
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spudfiend [2012-11-25 21:26:22 +0000 UTC]
Foot in mouth, Mak.
Bit of pervy comedy always helps.
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lady-hp-lover [2009-09-18 13:26:20 +0000 UTC]
Realy nice story^^
this joke realy fitts into the story
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VixenTFox [2009-04-18 23:41:48 +0000 UTC]
Nope.. not foot in mouth disease. Naruto disease....
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SkyMightFall [2009-04-15 03:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Poor them.Right in front of Mak's parents?If she slaps him, I wonder what will happen then.
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Fangthorn [2009-04-14 21:34:27 +0000 UTC]
This page is funny! I like the part where Mak says is trying to explain... lol
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Fangthorn In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-05-06 19:45:59 +0000 UTC]
good job keep it up and I will keep reading this comic
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Artemis347 [2009-04-14 21:15:34 +0000 UTC]
It seems this boy has foot in mouth syndrome. I forsee pain in his immediate future.
Great page. IT's nice to see Suzume interacting with people who aren't trying to apprehend her.
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ThenAgain [2009-04-14 08:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Great work Mak, that was really the right thing to say!
The last panel is awesome, those poor desperate parents!
Great work on this page!
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FifteenthApostle [2009-04-14 06:36:49 +0000 UTC]
Finally some clasic hormonally imbalanced teenage awkwardness! This story is starting to get interesting.
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mattwilson83 In reply to FifteenthApostle [2009-04-14 09:31:48 +0000 UTC]
she runs from salvery, hit's soldiers, gets shot at, jumps off a bridge, gets injured... and NOW it gets interesting?
lol
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LunarLadyLupa [2009-04-14 03:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Awww... Mak. You shouldn't have said, no one would've been the wiser.
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basketballgurl14 [2009-04-14 03:48:07 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHAHA great page matt!
that poor boy...(and i mean mak) XD
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journey-across-ocean [2009-04-14 02:44:32 +0000 UTC]
Bwahahahaaha! i like makoto he's funny
I can see we will love this character
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monxie20 [2009-04-14 02:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Poor Makoto, he's gonna get slapped.
This is awesome Matt, I love your manga
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SulliMike23 [2009-04-13 23:17:29 +0000 UTC]
lol!!! That's a good way to relieve the tension.
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alpha168 [2009-04-13 23:06:39 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! She would probably kick his ass if she weren't hurt that badly, but then again he was just trying to help. In any case she's fortunate. I wonder if something will start between them? But she's only 14 and needs to get to Tempu asap. Anyway, nice twist.
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Fierce-Dities-Link [2009-04-13 22:32:30 +0000 UTC]
Poor guy. But I can't really blame him for looking, she's cute. ^_^ Great work Pal! It was a great idea to finally add some other people, especially a guy around her age. Great work Pal! You're the Best of the BEST!
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Ombreon [2009-04-13 22:01:38 +0000 UTC]
lul! I can see a handprint on his face in the near future!
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MissWriter4Ever [2009-04-13 21:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh my how cute! lol Poor Mak... hehe oh well he'll learn some day.
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MissWriter4Ever In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-13 22:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Lol well smile away, because this is truly amazing. now if only i can get people to read and comment on my work.
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Onihikage [2009-04-13 21:05:49 +0000 UTC]
He ought to be saying, "I only stared for a minute!" so as to be more natural ^/_\^
Lol, hilarious XD
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Jumife [2009-04-13 21:05:13 +0000 UTC]
XD... wooow... i dont think it goig to happen... (sorry about my englis)... XD...
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