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Published: 2009-04-13 20:52:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 3052; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 41
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Description Valley of Angels: Chapter 02

My own original manga. Comments and critique welcome

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Comments: 56

Borelloman [2014-01-21 20:45:39 +0000 UTC]

really funny. poor guy. she would crushing him at a tree or at the ground.

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EvilpuppyofDoom [2013-07-06 23:07:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG that was hilarious!!! LOL

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Flyerscurse [2012-11-28 17:17:10 +0000 UTC]

classic comedy... hey, I'm assuming you didn't design her as a "pretty" woman... so if we add this and when the bad guy recognized her plus angels...

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spudfiend [2012-11-25 21:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Foot in mouth, Mak.

Bit of pervy comedy always helps.

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THEZEROANGEL [2010-06-20 21:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaaaand fail, good job kid.

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lady-hp-lover [2009-09-18 13:26:20 +0000 UTC]

Realy nice story^^
this joke realy fitts into the story

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mattwilson83 In reply to lady-hp-lover [2009-09-18 17:39:15 +0000 UTC]

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magmonkey [2009-07-03 20:14:41 +0000 UTC]

best page!!!

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mattwilson83 In reply to magmonkey [2009-07-04 00:29:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanx

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VixenTFox [2009-04-18 23:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Nope.. not foot in mouth disease. Naruto disease....

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missmybcmiyuki [2009-04-15 23:17:16 +0000 UTC]

whoops. looks like he's in for it XD

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SkyMightFall [2009-04-15 03:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Poor them.Right in front of Mak's parents?If she slaps him, I wonder what will happen then.

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Fangthorn [2009-04-14 21:34:27 +0000 UTC]

This page is funny! I like the part where Mak says is trying to explain... lol

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mattwilson83 In reply to Fangthorn [2009-04-14 22:59:14 +0000 UTC]

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Fangthorn In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-05-06 19:45:59 +0000 UTC]

good job keep it up and I will keep reading this comic

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Artemis347 [2009-04-14 21:15:34 +0000 UTC]

It seems this boy has foot in mouth syndrome. I forsee pain in his immediate future.

Great page. IT's nice to see Suzume interacting with people who aren't trying to apprehend her.

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ThatNinja [2009-04-14 18:49:42 +0000 UTC]

there goes my truck theory

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ThenAgain [2009-04-14 08:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Great work Mak, that was really the right thing to say!
The last panel is awesome, those poor desperate parents!
Great work on this page!

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mattwilson83 In reply to ThenAgain [2009-04-14 09:32:26 +0000 UTC]

thanx.

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FifteenthApostle [2009-04-14 06:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Finally some clasic hormonally imbalanced teenage awkwardness! This story is starting to get interesting.

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mattwilson83 In reply to FifteenthApostle [2009-04-14 09:31:48 +0000 UTC]

she runs from salvery, hit's soldiers, gets shot at, jumps off a bridge, gets injured... and NOW it gets interesting? lol

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LunarLadyLupa [2009-04-14 03:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Awww... Mak. You shouldn't have said, no one would've been the wiser.

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basketballgurl14 [2009-04-14 03:48:07 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHA great page matt!
that poor boy...(and i mean mak) XD

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journey-across-ocean [2009-04-14 02:44:32 +0000 UTC]

Bwahahahaaha! i like makoto he's funny

I can see we will love this character

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mattwilson83 In reply to journey-across-ocean [2009-04-14 09:28:11 +0000 UTC]

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monxie20 [2009-04-14 02:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Poor Makoto, he's gonna get slapped.

This is awesome Matt, I love your manga

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Ultimate-Zelda-fan [2009-04-14 00:34:33 +0000 UTC]

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Kinkatia In reply to Ultimate-Zelda-fan [2009-04-14 00:51:25 +0000 UTC]

I second that. xD

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Ultimate-Zelda-fan In reply to Kinkatia [2009-04-14 01:26:32 +0000 UTC]

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rageofkyubii [2009-04-13 23:30:27 +0000 UTC]

It's the "Super Embarassed Hinat face"! lol

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KdaAnimefan [2009-04-13 23:17:56 +0000 UTC]

tis good man ^^

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mattwilson83 In reply to KdaAnimefan [2009-04-14 09:22:24 +0000 UTC]

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KdaAnimefan In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-14 19:20:56 +0000 UTC]

^^

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SulliMike23 [2009-04-13 23:17:29 +0000 UTC]

lol!!! That's a good way to relieve the tension.

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alpha168 [2009-04-13 23:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! She would probably kick his ass if she weren't hurt that badly, but then again he was just trying to help. In any case she's fortunate. I wonder if something will start between them? But she's only 14 and needs to get to Tempu asap. Anyway, nice twist.

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Narutolover1993 [2009-04-13 22:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Ha! That's funny!

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gogeta408 [2009-04-13 22:33:49 +0000 UTC]

haha

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mattwilson83 In reply to gogeta408 [2009-04-13 22:35:05 +0000 UTC]

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Fierce-Dities-Link [2009-04-13 22:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Poor guy. But I can't really blame him for looking, she's cute. ^_^ Great work Pal! It was a great idea to finally add some other people, especially a guy around her age. Great work Pal! You're the Best of the BEST!

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mattwilson83 In reply to Fierce-Dities-Link [2009-04-13 22:35:01 +0000 UTC]

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Fierce-Dities-Link In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-13 22:50:31 +0000 UTC]

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Ombreon [2009-04-13 22:01:38 +0000 UTC]

lul! I can see a handprint on his face in the near future!

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mattwilson83 In reply to Ombreon [2009-04-13 22:07:35 +0000 UTC]

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MissWriter4Ever [2009-04-13 21:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh my how cute! lol Poor Mak... hehe oh well he'll learn some day.

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mattwilson83 In reply to MissWriter4Ever [2009-04-13 22:07:27 +0000 UTC]

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MissWriter4Ever In reply to mattwilson83 [2009-04-13 22:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol well smile away, because this is truly amazing. now if only i can get people to read and comment on my work.

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DJDaniCalifornia [2009-04-13 21:08:46 +0000 UTC]

xDDDDD That's awesome

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mattwilson83 In reply to DJDaniCalifornia [2009-04-13 21:53:26 +0000 UTC]

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Onihikage [2009-04-13 21:05:49 +0000 UTC]

He ought to be saying, "I only stared for a minute!" so as to be more natural ^/_\^

Lol, hilarious XD

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Jumife [2009-04-13 21:05:13 +0000 UTC]

XD... wooow... i dont think it goig to happen... (sorry about my englis)... XD...

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