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Valley of Angels: Chapter 02My own original manga. Comments and critique welcome
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those are the exact words on the comment on previous page
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'Coming on to me'? I guess in the UK that would be a normal thing for a teenager to say... but here in the States, I think the phrase would be 'sounds like you are flirting with me'... it retains the same meaning, but less adult sounding. I mean come on I just don't see Suzume saying the more adult version, even if was just as a tease.
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Hehe poor Mak....but that would be great if he did make the moves on her.
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i dont understand... T....T... can u mke me understand the last partpart? pliss... XD... sorri about my english...
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Suzume was teasing mak, saying that sounded like he was flirting with her, and the surprise made him fall down.
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Alright Mak! Go for it!
Great work Pal! I like where this is going.
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I really hope Mak makes a move on her. That will make him cool!
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Lol! It seems Suzume is having fun teasing Mak!
And he totally fell for it... Litterally!
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I see a romance developing between these two, unless disaster befalls Mak and his family...
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