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thanks Kimetose    
            Sanyo2100    translations

Please note this summary is designed to complement the comic I'm doing and therefore not governed with the series.



"Order," the Alicorn diety, was one of the four creators of the universe with The Architect of Equestria, Cosmos and Chronos. These last two were the parents of Celestia and Luna.

These four Alicorn had to fight a lord of darkness. Cosmos and Chronos were sacrificed to seal him away.

In ancient Equestria, they were its rulers, but when they died, the crown passed to their two daughters. However, because they were very young and inexperienced, Order was put in charge of Equestria.

At the time he ruled, Equestria suffered attacks of various creatures in which he was responsible to stop. But there was a race that posed a greater threat to Equestria: the Dragon Berserkers. These kinds of dragons had the power to defeat the Alicorn. In an act of desperation, Order decided to attack and eradicate them. The Architect of Equestria did not deem this as just, because even those creatures deserve life.

Because of Order's decision, she opted to leave Equestria, but not before asking if Celestia, his niece, remembered Order, as The Architect knew that he and celestia had a relationship (kept secret).

Sadly, Order had already gone to war together with some unicorns and pegasi.

At the end of the great battle, Order faced "Leviathan," the most powerful of all berserkers. When Order achieved victory, he appropriated Leviathan's power, revealing Order's true plot; to become the most powerful Alicorn of all time. Thus, absorbing the power of Leviathan and other creatures that attacked Equestria prior, Order had a drastic change in his body and mind (all memories celestia, even love, were lost). It was no longer the ruler of equestria that everyone respected. Now it had become an all powerful monster of darkness

Now calling himself, The God of Chaos Discord ...

I hope you liked aya drawing ^ ^




Atención este resumen es inventado para complementar el comic que estoy haciendo y por eso no se rige con el de la serie.

 

Este alicornio de clase divino se llama “order” antes era uno de los cuatro creadores del universo de equestria junto a la arquitecta, cosmos y cronos. Estos dos últimos eran los padres de luna y celestia.

Estos cuatro alicornios tuvieron que luchar contra un señor de las tinieblas. Cosmos y cronos se sacrificaron para encerrarlo.

En la antigua equestria ellos eran los gobernantes. pero al morir, la corona pasaba a sus dos hijas sin embargo debido a que eran muy jóvenes y sin experiencia el que se puso a cargo de equestria fue order.

En el tiempo que él gobernaba, equestria sufría ataques de diferentes criaturas las cuales él se encargaba de detener. Pero había una clase de raza que amenazaba más a equestria. Los dragones berserker. Esta clase de dragones poseían el poder para derrotar a los alicornios. En una desesperada decisión order decidió atacarlos y erradicarlos, la arquitecta de equestria no le pareció correcta ya que para ella incluso esas criaturas merecían la vida.

Debido a la negativa de order ella opto por marcharse de equestria no sin antes pedirle a su sobrina celestia que hiciera recapacitar a order ya que la arquitecta sabía que entre él y celestia había una relación de pareja (guardado en secreto).

Lamentablemente order ya se había marchado a la guerra junto con unos unicornios y pegasos.

Al final de la gran batalla order se enfrentó al berserker más poderoso de todos"Leviatán”. Cuando logro derrotarlo se adueñó de su poder revelando el verdadero plan de order el cual era convertirse en el alicornio más poderoso de toda la historia. Así, absorbiendo el poder de Leviatán y de otras criaturas que antes atacaron equestria, Order tuvo un cambio drástico en su cuerpo y en su mente (todos sus recuerdos incluso el amor a celestia se perdió). Ya no era más el gobernante de equestria que todos respetaban. Ahora se había convertido en una criatura llena de oscuridad pero de infinito poder.

Y ahora se  hacía llamar discord el dios del caos…

espero que les aya gustado el dibujo ^^

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Comments: 339

mattjohn1992 [2019-04-21 11:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Great Work, Nice, Hi

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Hierok [2018-08-14 12:38:09 +0000 UTC]

This is some awesome backstory right here. o3o
I think this 'lord of darkness' is Grogar, with Sombra and the Pony of Shadows as his henchmen. Great story!

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IrisxAioros [2017-02-09 02:09:18 +0000 UTC]

woooow soooooooooo cool 

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Shenronn [2016-07-19 18:08:40 +0000 UTC]

That backstory is epic

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FeanorKelsick [2016-06-25 21:17:35 +0000 UTC]

COol lookin dude, and nice story!

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EqDBot [2016-06-25 00:20:39 +0000 UTC]

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Zygnominous [2016-06-04 08:34:19 +0000 UTC]

I never really like this fan idea when I see it. Discord is an evil version of a being named 'Order'? I think in the context it's more likely a being on par with Discord(even when he's a terrible evil) would be just as evil and extreme in his own right. Order is controlling and regimented and never forgives, simply because it desires consistency. Seems like it would be an interesting parallel on how the extremes of two sides or ideology's are usually harmful to others.

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icepick823 In reply to Zygnominous [2016-06-26 00:01:16 +0000 UTC]

That's exactly what happens in The Elder Scrolls IV: Shivering Isles. The main antagonist is Jyggalag, the Daedric Prince of Order. He believes in certainty and determinism and seeks out to destroy the realm of madness.

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Rushanbo [2015-09-27 04:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Dude! This is AWESOME!!!! One of if not the best ponyfied versions of Discord, or Order, that I have ever seen. So much epicness!

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rociorRZ [2015-09-18 01:20:16 +0000 UTC]

pude haber fluttershy x discor   

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dulceprincesa0 [2015-08-16 09:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh see~~~     
Ya me emocionaba mucho este ship siendo sincera       
Pero algo me dice que terminará en tragedia sobre el comic   

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Fellmoon [2015-04-30 00:28:37 +0000 UTC]

I admit, I don't really like this idea as much, especially since it involves the Discord/Celestia shipping. Right now though, I think this is the only part of all this you have created I don't care for.

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Jamorson [2015-04-19 02:55:21 +0000 UTC]

...
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.............. KABOOM!!!!!!!!!
That is what you have done with my mind, good sir. Well, I hope he's still a troll, it'd give him something to work off of.

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klevrock [2015-04-08 15:02:44 +0000 UTC]

that's one amazing theory you got there.

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obelix1999 [2015-02-24 13:41:50 +0000 UTC]

gotta love the armor

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DarkNightMlp [2015-02-18 20:47:50 +0000 UTC]

wow discord que increibleeeeeeee

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Reaver75 [2015-02-15 05:12:38 +0000 UTC]

No hay orden si no hay caos

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Claw11 [2015-01-26 18:30:12 +0000 UTC]

He looks a lot like a Shendu in some weird way
jackiechanadventures.wikia.com…
Or its just me???

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Sweater01 [2015-01-13 21:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Me gusta el Ying Yang

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cara8bishop [2015-01-06 21:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm. I think the origin story is interesting, but the personality you gave Discord sounds more like Tirek. It's your story, so you can do what you want, but it seriously doesn't sound like discord at all.

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Lordofthememes [2015-01-06 09:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Freakin Awesome origin story

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DarkKnightofAnime [2014-12-26 18:38:50 +0000 UTC]

okay what I'm about to say will be considered blasphemy among the MLP fans but I gotta get it off my chest so please everyone try and take what I say with a grain of salt. In the very highly hypothetical scenario where your comic becomes an actual show I'm having a hard time imagining John de Lancie's voice coming out of this particular version  of Discord UNLESS he can make his voice sound extremely dark and menacing 

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cara8bishop In reply to DarkKnightofAnime [2015-01-06 21:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, as I stated in another comment, the personality of this Discord sounds more like Tirek's personality from the show. Doesn't seem to match.

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DarkKnightofAnime In reply to cara8bishop [2015-01-06 22:03:23 +0000 UTC]

ya I mean right off the bat I'm imagining either Michael McConnohie or Paul St. Peter's voices out of this version 

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rocketman732 [2014-12-14 12:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Love it.

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Deathwish111 [2014-12-12 05:29:40 +0000 UTC]

I love your backstory to Discord. I have looked at most of your fan art versions of the ponies and am very impressed. They are all done so well.

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DraginKYle44 [2014-12-08 07:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Badass

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Agent49100 [2014-11-14 21:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Hope he regains his previous form as Order. If he does though, will we see the return of the dragon king (at least, that's what I assume Leviathan is, since he is the most powerful dragon ever.)?

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ihamza995 [2014-10-30 17:03:57 +0000 UTC]

You think you can relinquish the God of Chaos? Why, the fun has only begun!

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ColonelBSacquet [2014-10-29 09:24:17 +0000 UTC]

"all memories celestia, even love, were lost"

Awww ... :'-(

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Gungelion [2014-10-14 07:04:40 +0000 UTC]

I have to be honest. Out of all the stuff you created, This is the one thing I don't like.
one question, are you going ignore everything from season four onward?

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Doctorwholovesthe80s [2014-09-27 18:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Very, very clever! I really like the idea that Discord is an uncle to Celestia and Luna!


I did think that if Discord had a cutie mark, it would be a yin-yang with a crack in it.

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mobius22 [2014-09-16 00:25:13 +0000 UTC]

A nice Origin story

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TIMESQUADPONY [2014-09-09 20:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Esta es la historia de origenes de Discord más interesante que he leído.
No puedo esperar a su primera interacción con Celestia cuando regrese

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shina1319 [2014-08-24 02:58:39 +0000 UTC]

woooooooooow impresionante toda la historia detras de este alicornio D: me quede con el ojo cuadrado

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SonicRainBoom706 [2014-08-16 05:29:59 +0000 UTC]

Muy buena la historia, el concepto y obviamente el dibujo (como si hiciera falta mencionarlo)

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mega-sander [2014-08-10 20:47:10 +0000 UTC]

con que programas dibujas ? y coloreas tu arte 

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Mia1503 [2014-08-09 20:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Noooo!!! ;___; Discord and Fluttershy are my OTP!!! ;_____; *Sad*

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tlecuahtli [2014-08-09 05:35:14 +0000 UTC]

O_O.................!TE QUEDO INCREÍBLE¡

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Dragomine [2014-08-05 16:26:52 +0000 UTC]

That dragon lock like shenron from dragon ball hehe nice art

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Nekotamer [2014-08-05 02:53:10 +0000 UTC]

If you look at discord at a certain angle, he's not a silhouette. I also noticed this with cutie marks on transformations. Was that intentional or accidental? Whatever it is, it's a really great mechanism of the art itself!

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KingArthur5 [2014-08-05 02:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow... Great work on that story!

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Katholico [2014-08-03 03:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Espera... Order era tío de Celestia y Luna? (pregunto porque pusiste que Celestia era sobrina de la Arquitecta) Si no fuera mucha la molestia quisiera que me aclararas ese punto porfa xD

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iamli3 [2014-08-02 18:12:08 +0000 UTC]

...sooo will this be relevant to the story?.....

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DanvilleBengal [2014-08-02 03:38:05 +0000 UTC]

....now I'm looking for the link that Spike is the descendent of those Dragon Beserkers from eons past...


It makes sense when the Architect spoke to Spike briefly and told him about the fire ruby (The Architect knows that Spike is a Beserker that is currently in hibernation,  and Spike doesn't truly remember anything about their history.

Sometime way, way later on,  I think that the Beserkers will come back (Spike discovers his powers like Twilight and the others), and even though the Architect warns about awaking those powers, possibly with the fire ruby,  they will be awakened, because basically if Discord or "Order" as he once was is as bad ass as he is,   I think the best thing that they could do to help save two worlds is to ally with the Beserkers.

Basically,  the enemy of my enemy is my friend.

And bonus,  I bet that the Spike/Rarity connection that it showed in previous pages would be similar to Spike's greed growth.  It's supposed to be uncontrollable and dangerous, but I bet that his relationship with Rarity (if there is one) will help tame those powers and he will help Twilight and her friends stop Discord.

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striberx [2014-08-01 23:42:04 +0000 UTC]

HEADCANON ACCEPTED!!!!!!!!!

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bronysonicyoutube [2014-07-31 00:37:17 +0000 UTC]

jaja me diran que soy un copion pero justo yo pense algo bastante parecido para mi fanfic, en relacion a lo de sacrificarse para encerrar a un antiguo dios de la oscuridad, en mi caso es mas como la historia de los 10 guerreros de digimon frontier pero tambien estuve pensando algo asi para los padres de celestia y luna, pero yo voy a usar a la arquitecta como madre y al padre me lo iva a inventar.
luego discord seria en realidad starswirl el barbudo que por cosas de la vida se acaba convirtiendo en discord, de Una manera similar a la transformacion de Aku del anime monster rancer. 

posd: mauroz adoro tu trabajo, tu eres una de las razones que me inspiraron para empezar mi propio fanfic:
(my friend pony:friendship is power)

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lobopla [2014-07-28 22:44:06 +0000 UTC]

    

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AqomXG [2014-07-28 05:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Interesante backstory, me agrada quisiera a futuro ver el diseño de los padres de celestia y luna, asi mismo con lo acontecido de la cuarta temporada saber que tanto afectara esto a tu comic, sin mas que decir felicidades por una pic excelente

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krolpie [2014-07-28 04:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Jajaja ahora le metiste dioses xdd y literatura jajaj TE ADMIRÓ eres tan creativo, siguió dicendolo mandaste una serié a otro nivel me encanta esto, pero tu si que mas va volver loca cada vez sacas algo mejor y me dejas como con mil teorías de como estos pj puedan alterar la historia hahahHah Gracias por compartinos tu trabajo me veras comentando cada rato xdd ps estaré por aquí Hasta dejes de dibujar espero q no ocurra c:

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