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Thanks to translate this part2 ^^ ( corrected from page 1 to 5 ) updated!! thank you very much for your correction to ^^Thanks to
to offer their help and also to send their translations
(use the translation of gugorrak, being the first who sent him (not that the other translations will be ill) .. remember that not very good English XD)
use la traduccion de gugorrak, por ser la primera que lo envio (no por que las demas traducciones estarian mal) ..recuerden que no se muy bien el ingles XD
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
sorry for the delay
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Comments: 595
SammyW28 In reply to ??? [2014-07-09 19:59:15 +0000 UTC]
Actually, it's (mostly) background pony Mr. Greenhooves (at least for the time being).
And to think people look down on him for being a wretched blankflank...
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watermane2000 [2014-04-10 15:46:35 +0000 UTC]
So Pinkie's a water bender and Rarity's an earth bender. Pretty cool.
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ZuzannaPon3 [2014-03-16 03:47:40 +0000 UTC]
IT'S LIKE A VIDEO GAME
And I wanna see Sweetie Belle (She's my fave :3)
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Kat-Winn In reply to ??? [2014-03-15 10:33:35 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWW SPIKE~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ShadowLDrago [2014-02-25 08:55:35 +0000 UTC]
I think I like this Rariy, and this time aorund, Spike's crush on her is even more amusing.
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BC-Conde [2014-02-02 01:38:15 +0000 UTC]
someone should turn this into an actual game. It'd be class
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AHurdOfBronies [2014-01-02 07:25:52 +0000 UTC]
Uuuuuuuuuugggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
...If there's one thing I hate, it's spellcasters saying the name of the spell they are casting out loud.
It just feels so unnecessary and unnatural.
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DarkLordIsraphel In reply to AHurdOfBronies [2014-02-02 00:35:21 +0000 UTC]
Ikr, just wave your hands and make stuff happen! XD
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Ihniwid [2013-12-30 04:44:36 +0000 UTC]
uh.....
I'm pretty sure you meant "The power" on that one line from filly Faust.
Unless rarity really has Toe Power.......
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Cake4Fluttershy In reply to ??? [2013-12-28 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]
When ever will I find a girl that is as generous and beautiful as Rarity T~T
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Rai-Knightshade [2013-12-24 02:10:56 +0000 UTC]
OMG TINY FAUSTICORN CAME OUT OF NO WHERE AND I'M OK WITH IT!!!!!! She's just ADORABLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sparity FTW!!!! (I can actually ship it now that they're human!)
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bobbymonster In reply to ??? [2013-11-17 03:42:04 +0000 UTC]
I fell out of my chair when chibi!Fausticorn showed up.
Hilarious.
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DragonHybridTF [2013-11-07 04:12:25 +0000 UTC]
I'm beginning to think that the powers are based off "the last airbender" ...
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NicoleEirin In reply to ??? [2013-10-21 10:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Rarity, what a amazing generous unicorn incarnation... And that little Fausticorn, lovely!
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Anchy97 [2013-10-17 18:48:58 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe that nobody from a famous cartoon work didn't saw your work This is like Winx, but better
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tammy1a [2013-10-15 02:47:45 +0000 UTC]
I don't understand why Rarity is Earth actually. Applejack or Fluttershy makes sense but Rarity? Honestly this is becoming a lot like W.I.T.C.H and even though that's cool I'm not sure if it follows the logic
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notengousername In reply to tammy1a [2013-11-05 06:39:01 +0000 UTC]
The symbol representing Rarity is a diamond, the relationship with the earth is almost obvious. Furthermore the author is obviously not following the original plot, is creating its own version. Fluttershy cares for animals and can fly, does not have much to do with the earth. Applejack plant apple trees, it makes more sense the relationship with plants.
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DragonKingAlpha In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 21:39:21 +0000 UTC]
Dude this is way past awesome!
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sweetymimy22 In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 16:27:18 +0000 UTC]
oohh haha the little alicorn is so sweet :3
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CerealFaeries In reply to ??? [2013-10-13 06:00:20 +0000 UTC]
This needs to be a legitimate game, even if it's only a flash game like "DragonFable", it needs to be done.
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ThalkorthePyromaniac In reply to ??? [2013-10-12 04:40:46 +0000 UTC]
The Chibi Fausticorn made me squee. :3 I am enjoying this comic so far.
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xormak [2013-10-11 09:09:23 +0000 UTC]
i love that story though, the RPG parts are a bit confusing they are giving it a...special note^^
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luna-is-best-pony1 [2013-09-12 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]
the grammar isnt exactly perfect on some of it, but besides that its practically perfect in every way
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luk0i [2013-09-02 12:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Very nice drawings. and real cool story. I am too old for knowing Ponies closer, but maybe I will check them... who knows...
Anyway I will follow this story
thanks a lot!
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Tristanjsolarez [2013-09-02 10:11:32 +0000 UTC]
Faust Pony!!!!! This comic is now my very favorite!!
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Kustom95 [2013-08-15 23:06:10 +0000 UTC]
So Rarity is an Earthbender? Rarity is now best pony.
The little Faust is also a great addition
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saritasmith2013 In reply to ??? [2013-07-25 03:00:38 +0000 UTC]
i am beginning to think spike is a creeper... . .
_____
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OkamiJubei In reply to saritasmith2013 [2014-06-06 08:34:52 +0000 UTC]
Don't you mean stalker.
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WolvenVisions [2013-07-23 15:16:33 +0000 UTC]
I want so badly to correct some of the grammar but I don't want to be a jerk.
These are so good!
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LTblackcoat In reply to ??? [2013-07-21 15:40:08 +0000 UTC]
yep this is my favorite so far.
the hilarity of "faursticorn", Raritys powers I feel are very fitting (the rock elements fits her actual CM (mineral finding NOT fashion) and is what fascinates me about her.) and a heal thrown in nice job but then it is all lovely.
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JETJK3 In reply to ??? [2013-07-12 19:52:24 +0000 UTC]
Always listen to your elders or Lauren Faust will get you!
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TheKageKitsune000 In reply to ??? [2013-07-09 06:38:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow that was really moving, I actually teared up at the hayseed part. One last thing I noticed a minor typo when Faust is talking to rarity she says "bur your magic level..." just a minor one. I really liked the comic though
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AVasquezArt [2013-07-02 16:19:09 +0000 UTC]
You got Lauren Faust's OC into fight, cool.
I guess she the "Luna cat" to this team.
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somercet [2013-06-27 14:06:36 +0000 UTC]
I like the architect of Equestria more than the Architect of the Matrix.
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blackfang2 [2013-06-24 23:13:58 +0000 UTC]
I love how you bring stuff from the show and i love how you made Lady i mean Rarity so beautiful.
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Encyclone [2013-06-21 02:32:12 +0000 UTC]
Your art's so professional!~
There're some spelling errors towards the end like 'toe' instead of 'the' and 'bur' instead of 'but'...but other than that, marvelous job.
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konics [2013-06-20 19:27:21 +0000 UTC]
not to be an ass. but after rarity goes to check on twilight there are 2 typos. one is the speech bubble by lil fausticorn "You have toe power to move" I think you meant "the power to move". And the second one is in the panel right next to that. It says "Yes. Bur your magic" I think you meant "But your magic". Again not trying to be an ass but i just thought that in case you didnt notice I'd point it out before someone comes along and is a complete ass about it
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