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Thanks to translate this part2 ^^ ( corrected from page 1 to 5 ) updated!! thank you very much for your correction to ^^Thanks to
to offer their help and also to send their translations
(use the translation of gugorrak, being the first who sent him (not that the other translations will be ill) .. remember that not very good English XD)
use la traduccion de gugorrak, por ser la primera que lo envio (no por que las demas traducciones estarian mal) ..recuerden que no se muy bien el ingles XD
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
sorry for the delay
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Comments: 595
TrueMadayar In reply to mauroz [2013-04-07 19:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking my suggestions! And you were completely right, I missed two panels - and some things looked worse this morning than they looked yesterday morning. Sent you the corrections of my OWN english text as well.
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LennyTribe In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 08:36:32 +0000 UTC]
Damn that element Rarity has...
It's pretty fucking awesome.
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Karach0s In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 08:13:10 +0000 UTC]
OK, so suddenly this looks more like a MMORPG than an anime.
Aw, hell, I still love it.
But yeah, as other commentators point out, your translator needs to take some English classes.
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Amira5 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 07:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah like others have said already, and really not trying to sound rude as I really do love this series, instead of just choosing the first translation that comes along maybe converse with a group and decide on which translation is best. I only suggest this because all the previous translations for this series were great outside of maybe 1 or 2 mistakes. But this? This was hard to read at times and if not for the pictures to go with it would have been unreadable at certain parts. Whom ever you chose the first couple translations from with previous chapters, might I suggest you go back to using that person?
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mauroz In reply to Amira5 [2013-04-07 15:03:32 +0000 UTC]
already corrected (I remind you that not much English so I can not subtitling XD) treatment that others have the opportunity to translate
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Rene7352 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 07:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Wild Steven Magnet use hyper beam.
It's super effective.
Twilight fainted.
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ImperfectXIII In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 07:38:28 +0000 UTC]
Steven Magnet! Filly Fausticorn! Rarity controls the earth!
AAH!!! It's too awesome!!! I can't take it!!!
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SchwarzerRitter In reply to ImperfectXIII [2013-04-06 08:39:53 +0000 UTC]
Also the Canterlot gardener.
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EonMaster In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 07:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Filly Fausticorn?! And Steven Magnet kicking tail.
Even more reasons for me to love this comic series!
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2tailedDerpy In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 07:31:04 +0000 UTC]
This truly is inspiring and excellent! But... why u hurt STEVEN MAGNET!?
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P3R50N-M4N In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 06:08:46 +0000 UTC]
I don't know how you translate the comics, and I can't exactly hold it against you (nor would I if I could), but there are tons of grammar mistakes everywhere that really bug me! I don't know how you do your translating, but maybe you should have someone pre-read it first or something so that you don't get swarmed by grammar nazis. Again, not trying to be rude, or insult anyone, but I'm just throwing this out there.
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mauroz In reply to P3R50N-M4N [2013-04-07 14:59:42 +0000 UTC]
if but already corrected (I remind you that not much English so I can not subtitling XD)
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P3R50N-M4N In reply to P3R50N-M4N [2013-04-06 06:09:33 +0000 UTC]
(forgot to add this) Other than the translation errors, this series is AWESOME!!! Keep up the good work!
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ArthurCrane In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:57:28 +0000 UTC]
For a moment, I forgot that you can't have a magic girl manga without a cute little sidekick.
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mauroz In reply to ArthurCrane [2013-04-07 14:58:43 +0000 UTC]
He will be more than a little fellow (I have something special you) XD
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Doculean In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:52:17 +0000 UTC]
Translation stuffs aside. This is amazing. I am really looking forward to the next sequential releases.
Pls, keep up the good work. these are coming out Awesome.
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RaikouArtist In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:42:36 +0000 UTC]
I hope Equestria Girls turns out like this.
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TheAnimeIsis In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:34:15 +0000 UTC]
This is so amazing
There's a few errors but it's readable. :3
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mauroz In reply to TheAnimeIsis [2013-04-07 14:56:25 +0000 UTC]
already corrected and thanks ^^
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SoulsInsanity In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:22:10 +0000 UTC]
ITS FUCKING SAILOR MOON WITH PONIES!
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Kissy-Fishy In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:17:45 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! All you need is an English editor to fix the translations and this comic will be perfect in every way!
I absolutely love these comics. I hope the Equestria Girls spinoff is something like this.
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mauroz In reply to Kissy-Fishy [2013-04-07 14:55:54 +0000 UTC]
already corrected, XD and yeah ^^
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Gecko303 In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:08:15 +0000 UTC]
I don't mean to sound rude, and I'm not claiming that mine's the best or anything, but I actually put some effort into not only being as accurate as possible in my translation, but also making it sound natural and conversational so that you wouldn't think it's a translation of another language when reading through it. I salute gugorrak for beating me to the punch this time, but it may be time to try another method of choosing an English translation for the next one. Your work deserves it.
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mauroz In reply to Gecko303 [2013-04-06 05:13:58 +0000 UTC]
Do you think you should put yours?
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Gecko303 In reply to mauroz [2013-04-06 05:26:03 +0000 UTC]
Do you want me to? I've never done typesetting before, but I could give it a shot.
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Gecko303 In reply to Gecko303 [2013-04-06 06:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Actually the more I look over it, the more errors I find in my own work. I'm not sure if my Spanish is up to the task, I keep misinterpreting certain points.
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WolfRaid In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 05:05:24 +0000 UTC]
umm.... mauroz, do you mind if i send you a note for the corrections?
because... there's a LOT of errors here...
i don't wanna have a wall of text in the comment sections just to correct them.
sorry.
anyway, errors aside, this is looking great so far.
filly fausticorn was unexpected, but awesome!
and rarity being like an earth bender, didn't see that one due to her hating dirt.
can't wait to see who'll be next!
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Reaper-Dragon In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 04:54:31 +0000 UTC]
I don't know how well it will help but try this for translations, [link]
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mauroz In reply to Reaper-Dragon [2013-04-07 14:54:51 +0000 UTC]
already corrected and thanks ^^
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sahunter In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 04:52:54 +0000 UTC]
I can read Spanish well enough to get the general idea of each line in the first version, so after reading the translation I noticed something neat; when hayseed describes people as differing by skin color -OR- by being occidental or oriental. I had to look up occidental. I've lived in the states my whole life and never once heard it used. When I tried to think of a more pleasing synonym the first thing that came to mind was 'white'. Most Americans probably wouldn't even think to separate a persons region from their race when generalizing about unspecified people the way Hayseed was. Funny how language can effect how we think as much as what we think.
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mauroz In reply to sahunter [2013-04-07 14:53:48 +0000 UTC]
already corrected, that part I was very complicated to develop ... In some places it is difficult to differentiate the color
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CYNDERnSPYRO In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 04:49:26 +0000 UTC]
I can help fix a few errors if you want.
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mauroz In reply to CYNDERnSPYRO [2013-04-07 14:49:42 +0000 UTC]
already corrected thank you very much for offering ^^
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Scarletts-Fever In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 04:42:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow Rarity's powers are awesome!
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