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luk0i In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 12:55:15 +0000 UTC]

No no nononono!!!
That was TOO much of pages to read! I lost way too much of my work time

but it was WORTHY

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SachiKanashimi In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 09:29:39 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, even though you say the scene between Soarin and Rainbow occurred when they were 10 and 16, I still think she was just a tiny bit too small compared to him, or at least she looked more like a miniature version of her older self than an actual younger version of herself.

Other than that one little thing I noticed, it's all very well drawn and the story is pretty good. As good as the translation is though, I still change a lot of the words around in my head and imagine the characters saying things that sound very similar to what they're saying already but flow much more smoothly and sound more natural.

Perhaps you'd be interested in an English peer editor to make the translated dialogue sound more like how natural English speakers might say things?

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mauroz In reply to SachiKanashimi [2013-09-03 02:48:38 +0000 UTC]

ok, and good idea

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MightyMorphinPower4 In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 09:19:58 +0000 UTC]

C00p

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mauroz In reply to MightyMorphinPower4 [2013-09-03 02:45:38 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Acxelion In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 06:53:00 +0000 UTC]

WHY CAN'T THESE GET RELEASED FASTER! CURSE TIME! I MUST GET MYSELF A TIME MACHINE SOON!

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mauroz In reply to Acxelion [2013-09-03 02:42:42 +0000 UTC]

XD sorry

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brianMFpalmer In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 06:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic, as always! I love the way that the story is developing and can hardly wait for the next installment.

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mauroz In reply to brianMFpalmer [2013-09-03 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Xanna-Stardust In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 05:37:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG. EUWFBHJSKFGISGUEJKR,BESKEUWGHJKR,SB Must read moar!

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mauroz In reply to Xanna-Stardust [2013-09-03 02:41:40 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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BB-K In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 04:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Lol, very funny and yet a nice fanservice when Pinkie being knocked down by Twilight.

Anyway, nice job as usual, keep going.

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mauroz In reply to BB-K [2013-09-03 02:41:29 +0000 UTC]

XDD thanks

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BB-K In reply to mauroz [2013-09-03 03:21:37 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, hopefully you give another one when needed.

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galapin In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 04:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Need an evil laugh at the end ^^

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mauroz In reply to galapin [2013-09-03 02:40:51 +0000 UTC]

XD I had thought about it but believe me it seemed so predictable

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galapin In reply to mauroz [2013-09-03 03:25:06 +0000 UTC]

More than predictable, the way you did it is better

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NellzDaBlackKing In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 04:00:59 +0000 UTC]

See if you add anime artwork like this to MLP, you get complete badassery, this is simple badass arithmitic you guys must know

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mauroz In reply to NellzDaBlackKing [2013-09-03 02:33:55 +0000 UTC]

XD thank you very much

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Sl33pdeprived In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 03:17:00 +0000 UTC]

amazing as always

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mauroz In reply to Sl33pdeprived [2013-09-03 02:33:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Sl33pdeprived In reply to mauroz [2013-09-04 03:12:47 +0000 UTC]

u r welcome

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age3rcm In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 03:13:47 +0000 UTC]

>pinkie pie

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mauroz In reply to age3rcm [2013-09-03 02:33:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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sfwrtr In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 02:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Great comic with especially vivid color and good use of line.  The story is a great reworking of the original story line into something with the same idea but presented originally, and emotionally.  I like it.  Are you the artist and the writer?

The translation from Spanish is good, but there is one error in this panel.  Rainbow wants to demonstrate her ability, but Descent says, "Calm down. I believe you should take a two hours break."  In English, we don't make hours is not plural in this context.  It should read, "take a two hour break."

Can't wait for the next panel.  Had to read the P2 panel in Spanish as I could not wait and that's what I found.

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mauroz In reply to sfwrtr [2013-09-03 02:33:05 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you very much
if I draw and write

and also thank you for finding that mistake XD

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sfwrtr In reply to mauroz [2013-09-06 20:20:45 +0000 UTC]

de nada

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niffyhooves In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 01:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow this series is AMAZING!

I just found it and read the whole thing and I'm so happy right now. ^o^

Even though this is huge (and wonderfully done) for fanfic comics, I wish there were even more of this. You'd deserve a whole studio to make this into a whole proper manga series!

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mauroz In reply to niffyhooves [2013-09-03 02:31:08 +0000 UTC]

XDD thank you very much

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Kakashigirl13 In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 01:53:32 +0000 UTC]

OMS MOREEE XDDDDD

I CANT WAIT!!!! and I love how luna is portrayed differently XD

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mauroz In reply to Kakashigirl13 [2013-09-03 02:30:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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Kakashigirl13 In reply to mauroz [2013-09-04 01:44:26 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome XD I cant wait!

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Igniamatis In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 00:03:39 +0000 UTC]

wowww  un trabajo impecable debo admitir

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mauroz In reply to Igniamatis [2013-09-02 01:20:10 +0000 UTC]

XDD muchas hracias

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Mikkillerib In reply to mauroz [2013-09-02 09:10:45 +0000 UTC]

Are the pages always this small and unreadable when enlarged on ipads?

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mauroz In reply to Mikkillerib [2013-09-03 03:16:24 +0000 UTC]

sorry >.<

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Mikkillerib In reply to mauroz [2013-09-03 04:43:33 +0000 UTC]

You dont have to be sorry. Its just that its slightly annoying that they cant be viewed on ipad. Are there any change that you could do something so that they are viewable on ipad?

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DeJiKo07 In reply to ??? [2013-09-02 00:02:02 +0000 UTC]

This is getting more and more awesome!!!

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mauroz In reply to DeJiKo07 [2013-09-02 01:20:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much I'm glad you like ^^

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LittleB100Bird In reply to ??? [2013-09-01 23:28:20 +0000 UTC]

I didn't read it at all but its so pretty I love the pictures...

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mauroz In reply to LittleB100Bird [2013-09-02 01:19:20 +0000 UTC]

XDD thanks

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LittleB100Bird In reply to mauroz [2013-09-02 03:19:28 +0000 UTC]

XD welcome

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The-Letter-J In reply to ??? [2013-09-01 23:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Or they could let Fluttershy come and then they'd have two of the elements on their side. But Luna's plan works too.

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mauroz In reply to The-Letter-J [2013-09-02 01:18:39 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD

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NightmareZV In reply to ??? [2013-09-01 22:45:20 +0000 UTC]

oh boy I'm in love with you're story ^^ I just can't wait for the next part but it is worth it if you will give us (me) entertainment and awesomeness in each one

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mauroz In reply to NightmareZV [2013-09-02 01:17:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much I'm glad you like ^^

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patatachip In reply to ??? [2013-09-01 22:44:46 +0000 UTC]

PINKIEPIE OMFG XD THIS SERIES IS HELLA AWESOME I KNOW YOU DON'T SPEAK ENGLISH (AT LEAST AS A FIRST LANGUAGE) BUT YOU ARE THE BESTEST OF THE BEST OMFGGGGGGGGGG I LOVEEEE YOUUUUUUU I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE I'M GONNA SHOW ALL MY FRIENDS THIS YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAY

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mauroz In reply to patatachip [2013-09-02 01:17:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much I'm glad you like ^^

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patatachip In reply to mauroz [2013-09-02 16:24:52 +0000 UTC]

i looooveeeee eetttttt <33333333 you rock. i love you. thank you for sharing your talent ouo

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mauroz In reply to patatachip [2013-09-03 03:15:40 +0000 UTC]

XD ...thanks for giving such a show of support ^^

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