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Thanks!! (the translation into English) ^^
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
second part of the fourth chapter hope you like it
merry christmas!!
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Comments: 736
Count-Author In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 01:38:40 +0000 UTC]
Don't mention it, partner!
Don't menti- HEY!
Too slow!
....Urg... You win this time...
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AppleCider1412 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:22:37 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME!! can't wait til january
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nitron100 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:20:53 +0000 UTC]
hooray! part 2- oh wait, what's he gonna do to aj D:
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Abei34 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Woah.... Applejack proven herself as a little badass.
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Moonofthedarknight In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:19:29 +0000 UTC]
Man I love these so much! Can't wait to read more!
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Blazingdave25 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:18:37 +0000 UTC]
Who's the guy hiding his face in the hood who was manipulating Dash and is now confronting AJ THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!
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hamcon In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:17:27 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I jave to ask, why is Luna evil? Shouldn't it be Nightmare Moon who is trying to take over?
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Sunstar2 In reply to hamcon [2013-12-24 01:23:48 +0000 UTC]
So what I think happened is that in this world,the human Luna was told of her pony reincarnation and what happened to her as Nightmare Moon.But what (I think) Discord did not tell her WHY she was sent to the moon or something.
I dont know,but its still really good!
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Icipall In reply to Sunstar2 [2013-12-24 08:13:39 +0000 UTC]
Actually it was probably Chrysalis, since it was mentioned earlier that she was the one who grew up Luna.
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mauroz In reply to hamcon [2013-12-24 01:21:47 +0000 UTC]
this story is not the same as my little pony, is different
but nightmare moon appears at some point in history
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hamcon In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 05:13:08 +0000 UTC]
I just find it odd that you made Luna the villian, and not Discord.
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mauroz In reply to hamcon [2013-12-24 05:28:09 +0000 UTC]
but discord is the main villain (he is named in the introduction) o.O
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hamcon In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 08:42:10 +0000 UTC]
Okay, so why is Luna a villian if Discord is the main villian.
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wolffanmarching In reply to hamcon [2013-12-24 16:37:30 +0000 UTC]
Luna seems to be an "arc villain." That is, she serves as an enemy to the protagonists, but only for part of the overall story. Arc villains usually end up removed as enemies in some way at the end of the arc, either being imprisoned, killed or reformed. Luna will probably end up being one of the latter. Arc villains that come to mind include: the Koopalings (Mario), Freeza (Dragonball Z), and pretty much any level-end boss character in any video game.
Discord is what we call the "Big Bad." The Big Bad is the overall villain of a story. He/she arranges all the obstacles the protagonists face. Everything the lesser villains do usually works into the Big Bad's ultimate plan. The Big Bad is usually defeated (rarely reformed) as part of a story's end game. Other Big Bads include: Sauron (Lord of the Rings), Voldemort (Harry Potter), Dracula (Castlevania).
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LyricalxM0nst3r In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 02:47:14 +0000 UTC]
I just screamed i was so happy xD
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horrorcrusher In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 01:34:14 +0000 UTC]
Something tells me there'll be infighting for the Shadowbolts.
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Dreams-hold-Ambition In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 01:07:36 +0000 UTC]
Rainbow's free of the cursed necklace but not of being a hostage.
DUN DUN DUN!
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Dreams-hold-Ambition In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 01:12:10 +0000 UTC]
But I wonder if Luna has a backup plan for that? Celeste could easily help Twilight find Rainbow and I doubt Rainbow's gonna want to take anything they give her. Especially when her element is nearby.
And who's that one Shadowbolt talking to AJ exactly? Is it Big Mac in disguise? (Going by those tombstones AJ saw earlier)
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tazkol In reply to Dreams-hold-Ambition [2013-12-25 20:15:27 +0000 UTC]
judging by his use of black magic i doubt it's macintosh. if luna got to him we're all in trouble.
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Dreams-hold-Ambition In reply to tazkol [2013-12-25 20:17:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but we already have some people assuming after Twilight's first encounter with Luna that guy who walked to her is Shining. It could be anyone.
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