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mauroz — Friendship Is Magic 04 P5
Published: 2014-04-17 03:35:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 119818; Favourites: 1283; Downloads: 1474
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Thanks!! and :icon ZaidFouquette: (the translation into English)^^
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
fifth of the fourth chapter hope you like it
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Comments: 698
Grrr, already I can't wait for the next one. The cliff hangers just don't end, and the story is just so good. I wish I could write a story like this. One that has been going on for quite some time now, but every moment has the readers attention. There is never a dull moment with your story.
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Woops, meant to put this on the chapter after this. I just had to come back to this after reading the other one because I kinda forgot what happened before.
Now I wish there was a way to delete comments on DA.
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If this was an anime I would so watch it /)^3^(\
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Just out of curiosity, how the next chapter coming?
Not to sound like I'm or anyone else is rushing you put can you at least let us know about the progress of the next installment?
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for me it´s seems like hace has a crush on aj but he doesn´t know it better . thats my Option
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Petty awesome but don't make rainbows hair to be dyed Cruz I feel like rainbows main thing about her is her hair/mane and she has the word rainbow in her name oh and our awesome happy b-day I just joined so yeah and then everyone was congratulating u so ya uh...happy late b-day blessings
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This series is really great so far. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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You need to go back to the previous Parts and add in links to the next parts. I had MLP4 part 3 bookmarked and didn't know there had been more Parts made till looking on your profile. I can't follow the story if you can't manage to provide a link to the next one that gets completed to make it easier to keep track and keep up with it all.
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You can also just watch the artist and get a notification every time it's updated...
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Doing that would send me a notification for every new thing the artist creates, and I only wish to follow this story. It'd be nice if the creators of the site would include the option to follow only a story like this, but it's not likely. This is the only story I am following that doesn't provide easy access to to nest part of the story. Most others are considerate enough to provide such a small detail; though they usually format it in the Previous, Next, and First Page links.
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!! This is a really good story! <3
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Pero cuanto tiempo más te vas a tardar ya va mas de un mes.
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I still think the dialogue needs some work from the translator. It really needs to sound "natural" and flow well. A good way to fix that is getting him to speak it out loud. If it sounds a bit funky, get him to change it into something more natural.
Other than that, I'm truly enjoying this! The story and characters continue to surprise me! Even the magic usage is surprising me, lol
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If i were Fluttershy i'd slap her and scream at her saying I don't have to do everything she says. Knock some of that bitchiness outta her...
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Why would anyone want to slap the Mane 6?
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I don't know, I think a good smack in the face would probably have stopped a LOT of problems, i.e. 'Lesson Zero', Rarity's insanity in 'Inspiration Manifestation'.
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Now all we have to do is wait for the ship(sailing boat) of Pinkie x Descent!... anytime now...
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Amazing. Big improvement on "cartoon" equestria girls I think. Wish I could read more immediately!
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It's a bit different.
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I havent seen the actual movie- just looked up mlp comics and found this. Thought it was the official mlp! Im a fan of a good story and the original 1980s ponies, so this has been lots of fun to read.
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Your visual technique gets better and better, but your inspiration seems neverending !
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Accept the Friendship in your heart Applejack for you know it to be true!
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Oooh, a sneak peek of a future summon~
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ME LIKEY THIS COMIC SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! MORE AS SOON AS YOU CAN PLEASE!!!!!!!! (^W^)
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