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Thanks!! and :icon ZaidFouquette: (the translation into English)^^
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
fifth of the fourth chapter hope you like it
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Comments: 698
ScottWolf In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 16:23:08 +0000 UTC]
For some reason, I hear Wolfwood from Trigun. Weird.
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nickthegrat In reply to ScottWolf [2014-04-17 16:31:00 +0000 UTC]
for me he just seems like toguro from yu yu hakasho the powerful badass who can ko anything in 1 hit
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Kerafym In reply to nickthegrat [2014-04-17 18:17:48 +0000 UTC]
for some reason i hear the voice of spongebob
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JumpingKumquat In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 15:18:49 +0000 UTC]
This just gets better and better!
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Punisher143 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 14:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Much epic, very cool.
Also I"m not very much under the impression that Soarin is like Kamina here. Did I say that before? Oh well.
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mauroz In reply to Punisher143 [2014-04-18 01:30:55 +0000 UTC]
everything will be known in due time
thanks ^^
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Punisher143 In reply to mauroz [2014-04-18 01:36:03 +0000 UTC]
If Soarin showed up with a gigantic cape and a giant robot, or becomes Rainbow's Stand, this would be the greatest thing ever.
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Zapper0113 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 14:32:24 +0000 UTC]
This is practically a world of warcraft version of My little pony where there are spells and magic.
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thespawnof66 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 13:48:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this just gets more and more interesting! Of all the various confrontations going down here, I never would have guessed that Pinkie would be the one in the best situation overall. And Rarity, oh my, between Spike and Applejack somebody needs to save her (my money's on Applejack. Spike would do it in a heartbeat, but I'm betting he's too far away). And Fluttershy telling off Rainbow...excellent! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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DarkLordIsraphel In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 13:42:46 +0000 UTC]
Pinkamina Diane Pie...Best part of this whole thing. Thank you so much man, this made my day...again...
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dcb2art In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 13:15:07 +0000 UTC]
Aww. And here I thought rainbow was finally going to open her eyes and get her powers. Oh well till next time with the next new chapter and here's to hoping it's a good one.
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metalsystem761 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:53:38 +0000 UTC]
This needs to be a series! Also the male shadow figure reminds me of Janemba from dbz!
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LuckyKittyxxx963 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:40:51 +0000 UTC]
Enjoying this sooo much!
Rawr.
I absolutly love all these tricks your pulling!
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LuckyKittyxxx963 In reply to mauroz [2014-04-18 14:54:47 +0000 UTC]
^-^
I wish to create a manga/comic thing, and your art is so inspiring ^^
I hope you create alot more!
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Aggeroff In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:38:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh... she wasn't joking about the being upset. *shivers* That will be scary.
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DreamVirusOmega In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:37:58 +0000 UTC]
And Haze becomes just that more mysterious. Who is he and why does he seem like he's playing all sides?
Speaking of Haze, slight error when he's saying he'll fight Rarity. He says "But I case you choose to fight..." It should be "But in case you choose to fight..."
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mauroz In reply to DreamVirusOmega [2014-04-18 01:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the warning and error ^^
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TriforceoftheGods In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:32:15 +0000 UTC]
Pinkie's such a flirt xP And I agree with her, it's better to be crazy and fun than sane and boring.
It's the right arm of Exodia!
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mauroz In reply to TriforceoftheGods [2014-04-18 01:23:57 +0000 UTC]
XDD I love that creature
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tigreanpony In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:31:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow I'm really loving this story well done this is getting good.
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Hugo-Seven In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:31:19 +0000 UTC]
And again, you have entertained me. Excellent timing, it is my birthday.
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TrueMadayar In reply to Hugo-Seven [2014-04-17 13:23:30 +0000 UTC]
Well then, be glad I was so slow in translating it, and happy birthday!
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OtakuBronyComics In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:28:26 +0000 UTC]
rainbow and flutters have been the most intriguing for me from the start
i'm really enjoying this
keep it up
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BladeSquall In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 12:11:43 +0000 UTC]
Well, we appear to have reached the end of Chapter 4. I'm so used to the party increasing at least once per chapter that I almost expected Applejack or Rainbow to join the team.
Anyway, this chapter's been an emotional rollercoaster. Rainbow almost choked Twilight to death, Applejack and Rainbow's fight, the Shadowbolts kidnapping Rainbow and getting her to run towards the barricade of town where she'd be no longer safe to Luna's influence, Haze curbstomping Applejack without even throwing, Fluttershy attempting to repair her friendship with Rainbow, and a battle between the Elements and the Shadowbolts... who have more than held their own. This chapter really shows that it's going to be far from easy to save the world if other beings with magic are out there capable of fighting you at or beyond your level.
Pinkie's flirting under fire here is just plain awesome. But I really like how you elude to her having a tragic past here... was she deliberately lying as a distraction or does she not want to remember? The rest of the Elements, whether through flashback or through telling us, have eluded to some sort of back-story that made them realize their Element. Twilight's older siblings have left her and her foster brother and her sister has been forced to keep out of the city for a year while she fights the rest of Discord's monsters and keeps up with her adventurer archeologist lifestyle. Rarity had been an implied rich alpha bitch back in her earlier life until her mother needed a blood transfusion and a homeless man who had her mother's blood willingly donated some of his, making her realize generosity and volunteers in a soup kitchen on a regular basis. Fluttershy had been manipulated before and Rainbow even said Fluttershy was once suicidal, but yet is still a kind girl who volunteers at the animal shelter and takes care of animals. Meanwhile Rainbow herself had been forced to leave Gilda halfway across the world, and has loyalties to Fluttershy and Soarin... to the point that when Fluttershy finds herself additional friends, she feels so betrayed. Meanwhile, Applejack is heavily implied to have lost family members, and keeps to herself, yet she tells Fluttershy, with blunt honesty, that if she can't take care of herself she'd be a burden to others around her. So what's made Pinkie in this world so cheery, almost like she's so desperate to have fun that she finds getting into dangerous situations like this a good way to pass time?
Haze is clearly a badass. The guy immediately come into the fight, the tide changes from a pretty even two-vs-one into a very bad situation. If he wasn't still trying to figure out that Applejack really wants to be Heroic Neutral (she does good things but would rather be left alone than dragged into a conflict, so the plot has to make her give a damn before she does anything), he'd have probably taken both Twilight and Rarity down in a matter of seconds. Rarity, that wasn't exactly a smart move to attack an opponent who flat-out blocked your strongest attack at this point with one arm. Let's just hope Spike can turn the tide, if at all (due to the fact the poor little guy is still a kid while these girls flinging magic are teenagers, so he has a long way to go before being at their level). His ability to sense if people he cares about are in trouble, though... is Spike implied to be part familiar or something?
So, Fluttershy, you're finally calling Rainbow out on her jealous behavior. Not going to lie, it's satisfying to see Fluttershy stand up for herself like this, and while they should iron out the issues of their friendship, doing so while the fate of the world rests in the balance... we just really don't have too much time for that, right now, what with Rarity being tossed around by Haze and Twilight about to be forced to face both Haze and Nightingale by herself. Let's just hope Fluttershy can get through to Rainbow with Soarin's promise, because if that doesn't work, Fluttershy will probably be forced to fight Rainbow, and we know who is more willing to throw down.
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mauroz In reply to BladeSquall [2014-04-18 01:20:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks to all brilliantly summarized ^^
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yannoshka In reply to BladeSquall [2014-04-18 00:06:31 +0000 UTC]
fluttershy of course.
She can be cruel to be kind, but loyalty precludes harming those you are loyal to, and it is rather obvious that RD still hasn't given up on flutters.
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samuelcherilus In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 11:53:44 +0000 UTC]
I really love the comics so far! Keep up the good work!
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pupshackle In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 11:45:26 +0000 UTC]
Wow this keeps getting better and better!
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pupshackle In reply to mauroz [2014-04-18 10:25:56 +0000 UTC]
Your very welcome! We all love and look forward to more
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gizmo01 In reply to ??? [2014-04-17 11:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh Pinkie You can never make me sad
Amazing work on them I like how you make Pinkie to a reall funny badass here
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