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EqDBot In reply to ??? [2015-07-11 00:20:07 +0000 UTC]

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mauroz In reply to EqDBot [2015-07-11 16:50:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for publishing ^^

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AnonymousWriter228 In reply to ??? [2015-07-11 00:11:45 +0000 UTC]

 Twilight with Big Mac.... I ship it so hard here. I think it has something to do with me wanting  Pinkie to be with Flash

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mauroz In reply to AnonymousWriter228 [2015-07-11 16:49:21 +0000 UTC]

XD  thank you very much for watching

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Klepack In reply to ??? [2015-07-11 00:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Funny that your Big Mac said more in 1 Page then he did in all 5 Seasons together...

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mauroz In reply to Klepack [2015-07-11 16:48:46 +0000 UTC]

XD with the personality I want to give you rare serious than just say two words in each chapter

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Maldrete In reply to Klepack [2015-07-11 00:44:24 +0000 UTC]

Eeyup.

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TM2-Dinobot In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 23:22:38 +0000 UTC]

So. Awesome!

If I may ask, did you lose a proof reader? Some of the language seems a bit stiffer than normal, and you only have one person listed as helping. I just thought I'd check. 

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mauroz In reply to TM2-Dinobot [2015-07-11 16:47:27 +0000 UTC]

if and regret that can not be understood well u.u

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TM2-Dinobot In reply to mauroz [2015-07-12 00:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Nono, don't worry. It's okay. It just seemed a bit off. Moreso than usual. I wondered what happened. That's all. 

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mauroz In reply to TM2-Dinobot [2015-07-12 01:08:05 +0000 UTC]

^^ ok

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Gkvfflowergirl In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 22:27:31 +0000 UTC]

I like the fact that you didn't make Gilda an instant jerk like in the show. You made her a character who deeply cares for Rainbow and seems to be enjoying herself around Rainbow's other friends. But who knows. Maybe she'll start acting differently cause of this mysterious character who's appeared. Can't wait for the next page!

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mauroz In reply to Gkvfflowergirl [2015-07-11 16:46:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^  I am very glad that you like the comic

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Hass555 In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 21:53:39 +0000 UTC]

a very good comic^^
GIMME MORE!

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mauroz In reply to Hass555 [2015-07-11 16:45:16 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad that you like the comic ^^

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0-DarknesShade-0 In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 20:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Can't get more AWESOME!!!!!!!

...Can... it?
 

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mauroz In reply to 0-DarknesShade-0 [2015-07-11 16:44:27 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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0-DarknesShade-0 In reply to 0-DarknesShade-0 [2015-07-10 20:16:42 +0000 UTC]

ps: "Flutterdash" makes me fell warm inside! XD so strange and i'm no "shipping" person! and fluttermoster is best flutter! ;3

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Amonasiel In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 20:01:18 +0000 UTC]

I love Your story and I'm waiting with impatience for next one, but, really Twilight was always the most out of character, but here she dosen't even resemble herself. Applejack is more like her pony counterpart than her.

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mauroz In reply to Amonasiel [2015-07-11 16:44:18 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad that you like the comic ^^

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mauroz In reply to wolf01master [2015-07-11 16:43:28 +0000 UTC]

XD   thank you very much for watching

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Maldrete In reply to wolf01master [2015-07-11 00:46:05 +0000 UTC]

And Pinkie has the smarts to stay the heck out of that one! Too bad she was dragged into it anyway.

Heehee, Fluttermonster. Perfect.

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LTblackcoat In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 18:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Hm, if its *NOT* the USA? then where on earth is Ponyvill, Canada?

Liked Bloom.

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mauroz In reply to LTblackcoat [2015-07-11 16:42:29 +0000 UTC]

ponyville in this story is a fictional island

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LTblackcoat In reply to mauroz [2015-07-11 16:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sir, carry on the good work.

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Silver--Dash In reply to LTblackcoat [2015-07-10 19:09:55 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking somewhere off of the japan area.

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LTblackcoat In reply to Silver--Dash [2015-07-10 20:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Possibly, lets see I guess. (its not a European country I know that)

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snakeanium In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 18:31:42 +0000 UTC]

This comic keeps getting better with every Page!!!! Incredible job Mauroz!!!!!!

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mauroz In reply to snakeanium [2015-07-11 16:40:02 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad that you like the comic ^^

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snakeanium In reply to mauroz [2015-08-09 14:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Ever since page 1

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BubblyProduction In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 18:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Ah I always love this comic, it's always worth the wait. Plus I see we have a new ship on our hooves. I can't wait to see how the talk with Applejack will go. Or how things are going to go with our changeling friend.

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mauroz In reply to BubblyProduction [2015-07-11 16:39:47 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad that you like the comic ^^

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SaryTheWolf In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 17:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I like your comic but there something here troubling me:
Why is Fluttershy so shocked to learn that Gilda eats meat? Eating meat is the norm for humans, Fluttershy must know that's she in the minority and have heard many people talk about eating meat, seen adverts for meat products, even eaten a meal in same room as someone eating meat (probably). It could be that in Ponyville, where most people are reincarnated ponies, vegetarians have the vast majority but that is only one city, it doesn't explain why Fluttershy is surprised that an out-of-towner eats meat, unless Fluttershy has lead a radically shelter life.

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mauroz In reply to SaryTheWolf [2015-07-11 16:38:56 +0000 UTC]

fluttershy became very angry about what they hunted animals, especially for fun

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SaryTheWolf In reply to mauroz [2015-07-11 16:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but she was still shocked and/or extremely unconformable to learn that Gilda eat meat, that's the bit I have a problem with.

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mauroz In reply to SaryTheWolf [2015-07-11 17:56:47 +0000 UTC]

si se sentía incómodo sabiendo que gilda comer carne. pero sabiendo que enfureció cazados

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SaryTheWolf In reply to mauroz [2015-07-11 18:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I don't speak Spanish.

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verdict2602 In reply to SaryTheWolf [2015-07-10 19:04:59 +0000 UTC]

I thinks its more about them hunting animals than eating meat I mean she was surpised when she found out but once she learned Raindow use to hunt animals thats when we see her get mad.

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SaryTheWolf In reply to verdict2602 [2015-07-11 16:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Still doesn't explain why she was surprised at Gilda eating meat, which is the part I have a problem with.

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verdict2602 In reply to SaryTheWolf [2015-07-12 16:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Looking back at the panel I wouldn't say she was surpised but more uncomfortable or distraughted of course I could be reading to much into it.

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SaryTheWolf In reply to verdict2602 [2015-07-12 18:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Well... what ever the exact reaction, it does imply that she's very under adjusted to the fact that most people eat meat.

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Maldrete In reply to verdict2602 [2015-07-11 00:51:13 +0000 UTC]

I think it was the hunting animals for fun bit that enflamed Futtershy, which is something that would be totally within her character.

I think the writer is writing Pinkie Pie most interestingly. Maybe a little more intelligently than the show implies, yet could very well be within her too, with her eidetic memory and all.

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XangelMusic In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 17:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Great chapter! I loved Twilight's interaction with Big Mac. And I ship it!

Not that I'm criticizing your English because its ok but I noticed several things here I just find so uncanny that I can't really ignore them. Several of them being:

"Hey, Big Brother, why don't you come in?" is supposed to be "Hey, Big Brother, why aren't you coming in?"
"Don't mess with this, Big Mac." can be rewritten as "Don't butt in, Big Mac."
And the big one being "Th... Thanks, Big Mac, you're very friendly..." should be "Th... Thanks, Big Mac, you're very kind..." I know that 'amable' does translate to 'friendly' in English, it also translates to 'kind' as well. Both words however mean very different things in context, and in this case it should be 'kind'. Ingles es muy extraño como ese.

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mauroz In reply to XangelMusic [2015-07-11 16:37:07 +0000 UTC]

ok
and thank you very much for watching I still hope that you have understood ^^

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TrueMadayar In reply to XangelMusic [2015-07-10 18:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm..first one I can see, yeah, it sounds better.

Second I'm not that much on board with, messing is a very southern word to use, which was what I was aiming for.

And the third - yeah, that slipped my radar, correct, kind is way better.

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FrostKuji In reply to TrueMadayar [2015-07-11 01:28:34 +0000 UTC]

If you want to get very southern words down just watch Forest Gump, Green Mile, and The Princess and the Frog. One book that comes to mind that would help is Huckleberry Finn. Mind you the book was written in 1884 but some people in southern US still talk like that. I should know, I'm from Tennessee.  Otherwise, It didn't really bother me reading it.

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Maldrete In reply to TrueMadayar [2015-07-11 00:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Friendly could imply that Big Mac was being playful, which is not something I'd expect from Big Mac with someone he's just met (or perhaps period, as he is a mix of easygoingness with a splash of serious kind of guy).

Kind would imply Big Mac just treating those with utmost respect, which I'd expect from him.

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sevalsa In reply to ??? [2015-07-10 16:53:38 +0000 UTC]

i am curius to see will twixmac ship dewelop lovely work as always 

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mauroz In reply to sevalsa [2015-07-11 16:34:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for watching ^^

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