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mauroz — Friendship Is Magic 10 P2
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Published: 2019-06-18 04:13:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 51044; Favourites: 560; Downloads: 352
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Thanks to those who donate me in patreon and paypal ^^ www.patreon.com/mauroz www.paypal.me/maurozFMThanks!! (the translation into English)^^
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
chapter 10 part 2 hope you like it ^^
sorry for the delay n_nU
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Ok now for a little bit more of my thoughts.
First the art is great. You, like always, have a great skill in showing expression and have great comedic timing much in the style of the manga I assume you like so much.
Now the one thing I do think needs some work is the use of a giant amount of exposition. Sadly this is also in line with many manga out there so I will not say it does not fit the genre but at least to me I think it is a weakness of those stories as well when they do this. Now this is not a critique of the content in the exposition rather just in having it all at once at the same time. Personally I think the flow of the story is better served if the exposition can be put into smaller chunks at a time. As an example I think you could make a joke in the comic (probably made by Pinkie) about the length of time it took to tell that story and all the while Pinkie and Rainbow are fighting for their lives with nobody even paying attention (not even the audience is getting to see at that point). The flow of action going on in the strip is stopped dead for a fair bit of time by characters participating in the events to listen to a few other characters give out a ton of plot background info. Then once the information is given we go back to fast paced action again by paying attention to the fight.
It is like we are watching a video, we hit pause to tell all watching what is going on, and then pressing play on the video again. That is not ideal.
Like I said to be fair this is a common issue in numerous volumes of manga and anime so one could certainly say that it fits the genre but I do think it detracts from the flow of what you have done which has marvelous art work, intense action, fun comedy, and great interactions and expressions.
You are doing really great work so I really hope that I am not coming across as being overall negative on your work or as not liking it. I really do like it and the work you have done is among the best of the fan works I have seen.
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thank you very much, I never bother the criticism while they are to improve the comic (as is the criticism that you have given me ^^)
I had to give an explanation because for the next part of this chapter I want to focus directly on the fight against spike
I knew it was going to be a bit uncomfortable for some but it was inevitable
thank you very much for watching ^^
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Well it makes me happy that I have not offended you or otherwise cause you trouble. It does make me feel better.
I had a hunch that the information being given will become important and soon and that is the difficulty that all writers get into at some point in a story that has a lot of background information to use. It is not easy and that is why we do see this happen in a lot of professional works as well. Still I enjoy this comic and the exposition is not something that hurts my enjoyment of the comic by any means.
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All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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Between rarity twilight & fluttershy I have no idea who has the most funniest of face of what pinky pie did.
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XDD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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SO MUCH AWESOME I CAN'T EVEN!
That's probably going to be my default comment for every page X^D
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XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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"hugs you"
Welcome back
I'm REALLY glad that Twilight vouched for the real Zecora, who then proceeded to show up and spoil Chris's impersonation.
Hmmm, so Spike is special after all. Could the other egg be Ember's??
AJ, I dunno what your trauma was and I'm fairly certain that it was indeed traumatic, and I've forgiven you for tainting Twilight's view on friendship for a couple issues, but dang-it, if the Old!You saw what you were doing now, she'd be right PO'ed. You can't avoid your destiny forever. You claim to be willing to forsake everything to be with your family, but if that'd been true, you wouldn't have helped Spike, Sweetie, and Twilight those times. You still care. It's time to face your fear of friendship and overcome your own toxic views.
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thanks ^^
All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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Twilight's back up from having her neck broken, but a huge plot twist with Zecora... plus a LOT of exposition.
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I had to give an explanation because for the next part of this chapter I want to focus directly on the fight against spike
thank you very much for watching ^^
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Ooo we're setting up some interesting pieces on the board, pinkie has an ominous voice or thought in her skull telling her she won't harm her friend, applejack is finally getting the call to action in full force, and we finally learn that's not zecora but an imposter hmm now who do we know in the series that is a cold hearted shape shifter. seriously this great love the banter between pinkie and dash about dash acting like a super hero lol.
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thank you very much for watching ^^
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you're welcome thank you for sharing ^^
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Mauroz, excuse me, but the part about dragons needing alicorn magic to crack their eggs doesn't make sens. How their species survived ? Also, Twilight openning it while not being an alicorn, but gifted unicorn is already making a plothole. Dunno if that is smiliar to the show, but as we saw alicorn magic doesn't equall the strongest, it's unique ,because it combines very different magics of three unique species, but it doesn't have to be the strongest (Starswil for example....)
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remember that it is said that a powerful being created them
maybe that being was an enemy of the alicorn
maybe he created them with the need of magic alicorn
about twilight and how he could open the egg
it would be a spoiler too big to reveal it now
and as the copy of Zecora says: nobody imagines that a unicorn would achieve it
thank you very much for watching ^^
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The *berserker* dragons didn't survive, just regular dragons
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That is not what I meant. Survived BEFORE. They attacked alicorns, because they needed their magic to open the eggs. What ?Their species shuld go extinct way beforethat ,why they are dependent in that area on ponies ?
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Hmm... Maybe there was another source of magic before? 
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From my understanding, and I could be wrong, but The Architect of Equestria modified the history so they wouldn't know what dragon Spike's egg was. However, Discord may have remembered (as I want to believe, and it makes sense), and if The Architect knew that, she probably did a spell so that it was undetectable to alicorns. If the spell was made with alicorn magic, it probably needs someone capable of it to break the spell. Maybe the dragons' eggs didn't need to rely on unicorns and alicorns to open, they are part demon after all. Maybe their demon side had magic just as powerful as alicorn magic and that's why they were a threat? It would also make sense if that was the case; they wouldn't need alicorns after all.
And you know what? I'm wrong, I realize that, ignore before. But taking that theory about the demon side having magic as strong as alicorns, maybe it needed to be replenished. When the Berserk Dragons kill an alicorn, as I assume they did, they could have absorbed the alicorns magic, effectively replenishing theirs enough to hatch some eggs. I could be wrong, though.
As for Twighlit being strong enough, as a unicorn, to hatch the egg, remember in the show that the only reason she could do that was because of Rainbow Dashes Rainbow Boom, which probably amplified her magic enough to do it.
...Does this help?
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It could be one of possible explanations, sure, but for me it is handled poorly, that exposition. Not yours, Mauroz. Thou, I think it would be better if I could understand original. For me race who relays on another race to make their next generations come to the world is a stretch, thou maybe I didn't understand. Maybe they would need that magic only now, after a spell of Fausitcorn which wouldn't make sense since Spike and as i presume, Ember, are the only ones left.
Twilight is embodiment of magic, sure, and rainbow didn't amplify, but awaken her magical potencial. I am just not sure if alicorn magic is treated here as just "more powerful magic" or "very unique magic". If it is first - makes sense if the latter, no matter how amplified, shouldn't be possible. We will see. Eventually...
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At some point, it needs to be explained how those who came from Equestria fit in to earths history so well and boy do I have ideas how that could work and what it could cause.
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All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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The facial expressions are the best part sometimes... though the lore just might have them beat. Still, it's gonna be weird if AJ is stronger than Rage Spike after just getting her jewel.
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All in due time XD
thank you
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you know, i'm an absolute sucker for ancient history, myths and stuff, so much so my own fanfic deals with extremely ancient equestrian history. A story about old gods and how their decisions shaped the world.
All i'm saying is... I FUCKING LOVE THE BACKSTORY YOU REVEALED.
Also, are we finally seeing applejack getting the element?
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thank you very much for watching ^^
All in due time XD
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Wow. What a twist. Let's hope that Applejack can let go of her doubts and get her butt into the fight. And maybe she can finally give the teamwork or friendship a chance
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All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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Didn't know you also read this comic book as well, other than Stingergirl.
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Some of it and it is interesting.
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Trust me. It is. After all, this is manga style or version of MLP. This is also what inspired me to rewrite some stories with action pack and proper lessons to tell (sometimes).
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Really. I knew about the manga style but didn’t know about the inspiration.
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Now, you know. mauroz’s comic has truly intrigue and inspire me to write the MLP Mystic Story. Always like it a lot.
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Applejack to the rescue! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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It's time, Applejack! You can't ignore the call any longer!
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All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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AJ, get your ass in the battle!
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XDD
All in due time XD
thank you very much for watching ^^
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Pinky Pie is totaly flirtatious and this is opposite to pony Pinkie Pie who friendzoned everyone. That hillarious.
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XD yes
thank you very much for watching ^^
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thank you very much for watching ^^
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