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RICKX231 [2015-07-26 05:19:43 +0000 UTC]

nice work  although AJ could use a little more work.  

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Flutteriot [2014-07-04 22:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Me again, the main problems I can see here is edge control, you may be using soft round a tad too much, I would recomend using hard round way more offen, the backround floor looks like you wiped it with that smuge tool really.

The foreground looks off really, AJs face looks a little too cartoony and intended then the rest of the piece, she looks out of place thought her lower body does seem to have the kind of edge control you should aim for, can't really say the same for the armour however, comes off fussy too.

I do like what you did with the backround aliens thought, they seem to be done very well, nice form and highlighting, the one on the over pass really stands out.

Over all this is very very gud, better then most I have seen in the draw thread for a while so thats worth noting, k33p at it.

In the future thought remember a epic battle should probably have a ton more fighters in it, they don't have to all be as good as the ones you made in the bottom corner, use colour to hightlight a few of the better ones like you did with the one on the over pass, it will make your drawing feel less empty and you'd have more to look at.

Good luck it what ever you are going to do next.

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