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Published: 2010-11-30 01:26:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2583; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 15
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Compare this and maybe this and tell me how much I improved[EDIT] btw sorry people for the other lineart I kinda made some edits here lol, feel free to do so if you want to on the free lineart lol
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Okay, first of all - this is my first critique. XD; Whee.
So onto the actual critique... The coloring is fantastic, to me, but I have to take into account that it also looks a bit weird. Mimi's dress could be a little darker, but then again, the coloring is quite eerie so it works out quite well; but I think there should be less light, as having Dimentio's eyes be the only light source seems like an awesome, fantastically creepy thing to do.
I love the poses--they look good, but I can't see any part of her legs, so I'm not sure if she's kneeling or standing(it looks like she's kneeling, due to Dimentio's position, however, and also due to how tall he is)... The shadowy parts without yellow dots coming from Dimentio, at least above his head, are also somewhat unclear - I can't tell what they are, but I think they might be part of his cape?
And then I'm going to try and nitpick on something else that actually bothers me: Mimi's lips. They look a bit too big here, in my opinon; they look either like they're being stuck out a bit too far.
Overall, however, this piece is quite amazing, and I hope my critique wasn't too... unfair or harsh.
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omai thank you for the critique, I kinda gave up on getting critiques now lol :u
that's not harsh/unfair/idk at all o: it's perfectly alright, I'm even more severe with myself lol, given how Mimi's face came out. Her nose, her lips, her eyes... everything in her face is killing me ;a;
for the cape... I don't even know myself .-. I just tried to include his hat, nothing more :c
well thank you for your critique, it was a good one for a first try
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XD Ahahaaaa, awwww... I thought it deserved a critique, 'cause it's really good! owo Even with the small flaws~ X3 But you know, if something looks so... PERFECT, it's not fun, am I right? XD I mean, the Mona Lisa doesn't have eyebrows!
Hmm~ I think she looked good. ;A; Her face looked really sad. X3
Hmm~ owo Well, either way, I love it! And thank you! ^_^ Keep up da awesome work, yo! :'D I'll watch you now~
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I love the shadow effect sooo much
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..........................................EPIC! EPIC TO THE POINT OF NO RETURN!
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Oh, Dimmy, youcreepylittlestalker, you.
All this Dimentio fanart and fanfiction I've been seeing is what introduced me to all the SPM charas, as I have never actually played the game, so thankyouverymuch!
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Voici le seul mot que je peux dire...en faite, non! XD Mais en tout cas, je suis bouche-bÊe... 
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Holy snap...!
It looks like some sort of old oil painting. I don't know what you did, but you should keep on doing it.
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Oh no, I'm just amazed with your drawing, that's why. 
I hope "D:" didn't meant a bad thing, I'm sorry.
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Christ Almighty woman you draw huge lips
This is WONDERFUL! The entire scene, what with the smoke and the slightly disembodied look, looks like a dream. Dimentio's altered appearance is very nightmarish and sinister, which you portrayed and drew really well, and Mimi (for I assume it's her) looks pained and sad. Her whole body was done well, with the hair, head, and arm looking well-proportioned. The dress is a really good choice in colour, in my opinion, and goes well with who's wearing it and the scene around it.
All in all, you did an excellent job, and have once again reminded me exactly why I look forward to seeing your artwork. It's amazing, and your style is much different than most people's that I've seen. It's a good one.
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Wow, it looks like a painting, which is good. XD I love the whole effect, I mean, there's so much nice detail to take in everytime you look at it. It's not just "OH HERE LEMME LOOK, IT'S A DIMIMI PICTURE, HOKAY. FAVE. GOODBYE." It's a true work of art that captures the pair's relationship well, and there's so much amazing detail. I love how soft everything around them is, and the eyes and hat on Dimentio are so well done. I also love Mimi's hair, the detail of each strand. You did a wonderful job! 83
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YOUR IMRPOVEMENT IS OVER 9000.
JK.
IT'S ACTUALLY OVER 10,000.
NO BUT SERIOUSLY.
THIS IS WHY YOU ARE STILL ONE OF MY DA IDOLS, WAIFU.
THIS.
IS.
WHYYYY.
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IT...IT....*hyperventilates*
I see improvement here.
And it still makes my hyperventilate.
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M'DEAR U HAVE IMPROVED CUZ IN TEH PAST U DIDN'T USE TEH SMUGE THINGY THAT MUCH (or so i think) AND USED TO LOOK SOFTER. NOW U SMUGE A LOT AND MAKE IT A DISTANCE SHADING (i think that's how u call it in english :I) AND MAKING IT LOOK MUCH MOAR REALISTIC.
I love this
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uh idk if smudging is an improvement, I mean it was just an effect here :I...
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