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Published: 2008-09-27 13:46:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1214; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 32
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This page... THIS PAGE!

I've been staring at this one for so long during the process of making this. Here's a list of why:

1. Finding problems, fixing them, then finding more, then fixing, then being forced to tell my inner critic to shut up because the deadline is really freakin' close.

2. Story considerations; I was unsure how to go from the first panel on this page. This could have gone through so many ways, and it took me a while to decide.

3. More color or not? It took me another long while to decide whether I should introduce color or not, and also decide whether I should try to shade it realistically, give it cartoony shades or none at all.

4. The 'real' monster: What was it supposed to look like?

I'm such an indecisive, perfectionistic guy sometimes. Normally I wouldn't agonize over most of the concerns, but this is for a contest with tangible rewards.

Anyway, I'm hoping at least this will be liked.

Next page should be done tomorrow. It's only 3 panels.
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Comments: 17

dimegod217 [2012-07-02 08:27:12 +0000 UTC]

wow cool comic i never seen any thing likr this

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ComradeK [2008-09-29 16:36:45 +0000 UTC]

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...Who else but Mayuzane?

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Heros-Muse [2008-09-28 01:10:08 +0000 UTC]

oooh wow yeah that is nice line work

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fyrenwater [2008-09-27 21:55:17 +0000 UTC]

It's not the Tooth Fairy! That's definitely the Sandman. Yup.

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Ridingshotugn [2008-09-27 21:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Does he talk out of each eye?

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Ridingshotugn In reply to Ridingshotugn [2008-09-27 21:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Ah, just now saw the mouth.

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crazymew [2008-09-27 18:38:21 +0000 UTC]

xD!! Wow...

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ptpeach [2008-09-27 17:03:32 +0000 UTC]

her dad!?

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Jim1088 [2008-09-27 16:09:29 +0000 UTC]

his dad?

nice1

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mayuzane In reply to Jim1088 [2008-09-27 17:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Her dad.

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al-saqr [2008-09-27 14:22:04 +0000 UTC]

I like this colouring scheme alot, it's simple and it shows off your vastly improved linework, and the different linework colours are really well placed and fit as smoooth as silk.

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mayuzane In reply to al-saqr [2008-09-27 14:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Looks like all that agonizing was worth it then. Thanks.

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StarBomber109 [2008-09-27 14:12:01 +0000 UTC]



Wow! I've just been blown away, good work so far! KEEP AT IT! You may win!

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e60m [2008-09-27 14:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, very funny.
I like it. (:

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Eddboy [2008-09-27 14:04:57 +0000 UTC]

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ElocL In reply to Eddboy [2008-09-28 01:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Exactly.

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MrKTE [2008-09-27 13:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Daddy? What a Twist!

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