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You sit as still as you can, crouching behind Feliciano's couch, in the most intense Nerf gun war you have ever had, even though your friend Feliciano (who represented the country Italy) was pretty weak and surrendered all the time, HE WAS GREAT AT NERF GUN FIGHTS.Suddenly you hear footsteps approaching the door in front of you. Alright, you are finally going to defeat Feliciano!! You get into a better shooting position, your grip tightening around the trigger of your hand-gun. Slowly the door swings open.
"HA! I FINALY GOT YOU!!" you shout jumping out of your secret hiding spot firing your Nerf gun as fast as you can!
"Vhat ze heck?!?!" a startled Ludwig shouts after opening the door to Feliciano's house and being harshly attacked upon entry. The Nerf darts you fired strike him in the face, one sticking to is forehead another on his cheek and the rest just fell off, because they hit his hair.
Unfortunately, you notice too late that the person behind the door was indeed not Feliciano, but Ludwig (whom represents Germany), one of Feliciano's best friends.
"Curses...Feliciano has evaded my deadly hail od Nerf Darts..." you sigh. "Sorry Ludwig...We're in the middle of an epic battle..." you say turning around spreading your arms out and overlooking your "war zone".
It was messy! During your heated combat with Feliciano, you two had managed to HORRIBLY mess up his house! Couch cushions ( used as shields) were lying discarded on the dining room table, various nick-nacks lying around on the ground because they got in the way of fire (or just hed the unpleasant luck of being the victim off poor aim). And THAT was only the living room.
Ludwig viewed the whole scene with disgust. "Vell, I'm glad it's some sort of training. But, this mess is un acceptable." he says face-palming.
"FELICIANO!! LUDWIG IS HERE!!" You shout into the depths of the house, knowing that wherever he is, Feliciano will hear you.
It takes a moment but Feliciano runs into the living room and ducks behind a potted plant, looking around a moment to make sure It really WAS Ludwig, and not a trap.
"Ve!! So greata to seea you again!" Feliciano says running over to Ludwig and shaking his hand ecstatically
YES! Now is my chance!! I shall win! You think while aiming your Nerf gun at Feliciano, but he spins around quickly shooting you in the chest first.
"No!! I had so much to live for!" You say falling to the ground in slow-motion, lying there sprawled out on the floor face down.
"Nice try though! You almosta had me!" Feliciano says flopping down next to you, lying down. "Veeeeh...I'm tired that was so fun!" he says exhausted "Oh!! We should eat pasta now!" he says catching his second wind and dashing off toward the kitchen.
Ludwig's hand grabs his shoulder before he can make it though.
"First, Ve need to clean up. Look at your house. It's a terrible mess...I honestly vish Alfred had never even introduced you to Nerf Guns." he sighs "Vell, I guess you can clean the kitchen, und after you finish zen make pasta...I'll clean the living room." Ludwig looks over at you, "Oh und (Your Name) you clean Feliciano's room. It might not be from your guy's "war" but it should still be cleaned." Ludwig orders.
"That sounds like a plan! I'll try my best!" Feliciano smiles and gives Ludwig a thumbs up sign. Feliciano often got board of cleaning and gave up, so trying his best often ment Ludwig or you would still have to help him in the end.
"Y-yes Sir" you say standing up and hanging your head. Ugh! Cleaning Feliciano's room will take such a long time! Though he's probably your best friend, he's VERY messy. He NEVER puts anything away, or even in some form of order! You think heading upstairs.
When you reach his room, you push open the door, bracing yourself for the worst. It wasn't as bad as you thought it would be honestly, but still not approvable as clean, by Ludwig's standards.
To start off, you clear off the top of his dresser placing things nicely in drawers or on shelves.
Ugh, now time to pick up all the dirty laundry strewn across his floor...gross...that pasta better be the best pasta I ever eat! You think as you pick up an arm-full of dirty laundry and drop it in the laundry hamper.
On Feliciano's bed all the covers were all twisted up along with the sheets that hung sideways off the bed, his pillow is lying on the ground on top of another blanket. The bed looks like it hasn't been properly made in quite a long time! You smile to yourself pulling the sheets up and tucking them in to the sides of the bed.
"Ok, nearly done" you say to yourself walking over to the other side of the bed to fix the covers. Suddenly your foot catches on something and I fall down. "Owch...what the fruit?!?" You say discovering that the blanket made you fall, you pick it up then realeasing a bunch of small pieces of paper with Feliciano''s handwriting on them, on to the floor.
UGH! MORE TO DEAL WITH. You think yanking the bed spread into correct position, throwing his pillow on top of the bed, then bending down to pick up the papers.
One paper in particular stands out, a pink one with a read heart on it, that's not what caught your eye though, it says "To: (Your Name)" on it. Normally, you wouldn't snoop around, but it WAS addressed to you after all. On the paper you read
To my Dearest: (Your Name)
Couldn't Sleep Last Night
Too Busy Thinking About You
Can't Get You Out Of My Head
But What Am I Supposed To Do
Every Night While I Sleep
I Dream About Me And You
For Us To Finally Be Together
Would Be A Dream Come True
I Can't Seem To Do Anything
Without You In My Head
Every Night I Sit And Think
About You As I Lie Awake In Bed
Everytime I'm Around You
You Take My Breath Away
I Wish That I Could Be With You
Every Minute Of Every Day
When I'm With You I Start To Shake
I Can't Think Of What To Say
My Heart Starts Beating Really Fast
And All My Fears Simply Melt Away
As I Stare Into Your Eyes
I Always Seem To Get Lost
I Would Give Anything To Be With You
No Matter What The Cost
I Think I'm Going Crazy
I Just Don't Know What To Do
My Heart Controls My Mind
I've Fallen In Love With You
Love, Feliciano
Written in Feliciano's handwriting.
WHAT!?!? Is all you could think! You quickly look at all of the other pieces of paper, seeing they are ALL addressed to YOU, with some sort of romantic poem or quote, or simply the words "I love you", you sit there and blush staring down at them.
"Y-you found them...My..ah, L-love letters...for you..." Feliciano quietly says as he enters his room sitting down next to you blushing and not making any eye contact.
You look up from the Love letters and stare at him. "Feliciano...I-I had no idea..." you grab his hand "But, why didn't you give me any of these! They're so sweet..."
"I-I wanted to! But I didn't think they were good enough for you (Your Name)...You deserve better than those..." He says back his amber eyes staring into your (eye colour) ones.
"Well, they are very cute..." you say pausing "But the only better thing than those love poems is...you." You say pulling him into a hug.
"Ve? Really!! Ti amo (Your Name) !" Feliciano says hugging you back with the cutest little smile on his face.
"I love you to Feliciano!" you say giggling with glee! He pulls away from the hug, looking you in the eyes.
"W-we can kiss! I-if you want to..." He says blushing his eyes darting to the left out of his embarrassment.
You lean forward slowly closing your eyes, untill you feel Feliciano's soft lips connect with yours. You two share the most magical kiss for a moment when
*AHEM* Ludwig says poking his head in through Feliciano's door, startling the two of you, and making you end your first kiss. ( :C I'm sorry )
"Sorry for interrupting. I thought you vere just going to tell (Your Name) that the pasta is ready..." Ludwig says awkwardly, leaving to go downstairs and eat.
"Oh! We probably shouldn't keep him waiting, huh?" you say to Feliciano standing up and dusting your pants off.
"Yeah!" he grins "I am pretty hungry, from beating you at Nerf Wars!" he laughs
"Whatever! Hey, let's race then! First one to the dining room table wins!" you say running downstairs as fast as you can
"Hey!! That wasn't fair!" Feliciano stands up and chases after you.
And yes, that pasta was indeed the BEST pasta you have ever eaten. Not because of how it tasted specifically, but just the fact you got to enjoy it with your new boyfriend made it taste a million times better!
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Image and Poem not made my me...
Hetalia is owned by the brilliant mind of Hidekaz Himaruya
But in this story Italy is all yours!
Thank you all for reading this! I'm sorry It's pretty bad! I'm new to this whole thing!
If anyone has tips I'll gladly accept them!!
If anyone has any requests I'll be happy to do them!
Thanks you for your time!
Have a great day! ~ MC-Sherlock
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Comments: 22
Miitu-chan [2014-03-30 10:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, what a nice story chu have here : >
Also, the image chu used is old and deleted from this site. But it haves a remake nowadays> miitu-chan.deviantart.com/art/β¦
Dunno why would someone want to use the older one, it's not that good ; 3;
But I don't mind that chu used it here really, just wanted to comment something. Have a nice day ! β₯
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Kazururuko [2014-03-30 08:44:16 +0000 UTC]
The image belongs to Miitu-chan //I think// but she deleted.
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MC-Sherlock In reply to Kagami7788 [2013-09-22 00:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!! I thought Italy would do something like that!
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MC-Sherlock In reply to RavenBraginski [2013-07-22 18:40:34 +0000 UTC]
XD You should read my America one!!
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SatoYuki3654 [2013-06-26 21:11:17 +0000 UTC]
so cute i love it and i love italy i suck at nerf so of course he beat me but i don't mind XD
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MC-Sherlock In reply to SatoYuki3654 [2013-06-27 00:11:02 +0000 UTC]
Haha!! Thank you!! Yeah, he was training a lot with the Nerf guns to!
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HetaliaSicilyFan [2013-06-15 03:49:22 +0000 UTC]
WAIT?! Italy...beat me in a Nerf war?!.............(Processing mode ends in 3.....2.....1....) THE WORLD IS ENDING!!!!
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MC-Sherlock In reply to HetaliaSicilyFan [2013-06-17 04:45:51 +0000 UTC]
*pats on shoulder* It's ok, He's been training hard!
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Jaina01 [2013-06-15 00:15:16 +0000 UTC]
but...but.....I never lose nerf wars....noooo Italy beat the pro...
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MC-Sherlock In reply to Jaina01 [2013-06-17 04:45:13 +0000 UTC]
He's been training quite seriously!!
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Jaina01 In reply to MC-Sherlock [2013-06-17 19:48:19 +0000 UTC]
then I am proud of him....but i'm still shocked that I lost
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MC-Sherlock In reply to Jaina01 [2013-06-17 21:40:17 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, It was the first time he beat you, you guys had 3 rounds. You barely beat him in the first round, and you both tied in the second... XD I have to much time on my hands!
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MC-Sherlock In reply to Pitchizhie [2013-05-22 15:44:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! I hope it wasn't to long!!
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