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Thelen has spent most of her career as a Starship Captain. Now, she carries a secret that could end that career- if an old enemy doesn't kill her first.Related content
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Geoffryn [2016-02-07 05:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Umm....hate to tell you this, but the "th" before an Andorian name is more male than female....course, there are four sexes in the Andorian species, but....
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mdbruffy In reply to Geoffryn [2016-02-07 14:16:30 +0000 UTC]
Well, I was going by the Original series when I created the characters. At the time of that series, no one knew much about the Andorians, so no one knew the details of names.
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mdbruffy In reply to Geoffryn [2016-02-07 15:58:41 +0000 UTC]
"Thelen" was originally written as a spec-script during Next Generation's next-to-last season. It was submitted, but Paramount didn't buy it. This was while DS9 was still on the air and Voyager wasn't even a dream yet. I usually don't come down in favor of Enterprise- in my view, they got a few things wrong- BUT I will give them credit for developing the Andorians. Every series had that one race- TOS had the Vulcans, Next Gen had the Klingons, DS9 actually had 2 with the Bajorans and the Cardassians. Voyager had the Borg. I don't remember his name exactly, but the regular male Andorian on Enterprise- didn't his name start with an "S"?
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Leopold002 [2015-06-19 02:46:24 +0000 UTC]
Captured and held my interest from start to finish. Nice!
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mdbruffy In reply to Leopold002 [2015-06-19 08:59:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
Have you tried the other stories in the series?
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mdbruffy In reply to Leopold002 [2015-06-19 20:01:25 +0000 UTC]
If you liked "Thelen", then I think you'll like the other, too.
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mdbruffy In reply to SPENCER789 [2015-06-15 20:05:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you sir. It adapted from the original script better than I expected.
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Wisky-08 [2015-06-15 01:34:44 +0000 UTC]
so happy and on my birthday exact
Lov it!!! Best gift ever...now I read happily, *Offers a slice of cake *
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Wisky-08 In reply to mdbruffy [2015-06-15 13:47:39 +0000 UTC]
thank you its much appreciated happy super fan.
love it all yay!!!
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mdbruffy In reply to Knight3000 [2015-06-14 20:18:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Hope you enjoy it.
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mdbruffy In reply to Roguewing [2015-06-14 19:21:43 +0000 UTC]
You must've read this one fast!
Glad you liked it. Had to make a few changes to fit it into the Nova Trek Universe.
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Roguewing In reply to mdbruffy [2015-06-14 22:44:29 +0000 UTC]
Read it not long after you posted it.
And I like the changes you made to the TNG mythos
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mdbruffy In reply to Roguewing [2015-06-14 22:45:58 +0000 UTC]
They were small, but they worked better than I thought they would.They were actually easy to make. Especially in Data's case since his background was never really filled in.
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