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Mech-Maker — Creeper i.1 pg.1

Published: 2009-11-16 07:25:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1242; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 20
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Description Been wanting to do a comic with my Irken superhero for nearly a year and just now I finally got somewhat of a story for it. xD;

So, in this first issue we already have a strange goings on. What is with that intruder? Oo

Anywho, I hope this will manage to turn into something enjoyable for you guys.


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Shoutout to !Sirithiliel 's character Dyrit.
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Comments: 48

hierophant [2010-01-19 20:17:15 +0000 UTC]

:0 The paneling is simple but cohesive and really good ... XD plus who can resist something that features an irken that can morph its body to be paper thin.

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Mech-Maker In reply to hierophant [2010-01-19 20:37:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
Still getting my footing with this with the panels, story line, and what not since I have never really done a comic of this nature before. Glad to hear it is working out thus far though. : D


[also, thanks for the watch ]

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hierophant In reply to Mech-Maker [2010-01-19 20:45:13 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure XD <3 -stalks from the bushes all creepy like-

I think it is -nods nods- XD Specially the actual... ' action' of it, you can tell what's going on and it looks good <3 so far you seem to capture the poses/actions at the right moments so -saltes- XD I too hope to make a comic at some point - is a lazy bastard tho so >>;-

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Mech-Maker In reply to hierophant [2010-01-19 21:37:26 +0000 UTC]

D: Release the Hounds!....or Welcome!

Thanks. XD
You should make one. D: I've got the cure for the lazy right here.. *readies the cattle prod*

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sailorcelestial [2010-01-06 06:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Cooliesness!!! Can't wait to see~! ('Specially since our RP died... LIVE!!! *Zaps RP. It sizzles. Nothing else happens.* NOOO!!!)

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Mech-Maker In reply to sailorcelestial [2010-01-12 05:28:18 +0000 UTC]

D: I still feel a bit guilty for letting it die

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sailorcelestial In reply to Mech-Maker [2010-01-12 08:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I still have it in my notes! I was saving it, just in case you wanted to continue. (I have high hopes, you knows~!) Anyways, maybe we could try continuing it? After taking a break, we both should be full of new ideas!

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AgerianWriting [2009-12-18 17:36:32 +0000 UTC]

A very interesting looking power that intrder has there.
The panel with the hand looks especially cool.
Looking forward to seeing more about this!

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InvaderRaf [2009-12-02 12:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Irken super hero... now that was something I've never seen done. And you manage to pull it off VERY WELL!

I also like the villain in this comic, he looks pretty bad ass so far... C:

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Mech-Maker In reply to InvaderRaf [2009-12-02 16:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Precisely why I wanted to do it. XD I think superheroes + IZ Fandom has epic potential.

Thanks :3

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InvaderRaf In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-12-03 11:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes... epic indeed... xD Just think of the possibilities...

You're welcome.

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Mech-Maker In reply to InvaderRaf [2009-12-05 04:54:55 +0000 UTC]

already trying to get some other possible characters into the works >w>

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InvaderRaf In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-12-07 12:09:37 +0000 UTC]

lol how bout a Dr. Manhattan Irken... XDDD He'd have a huge glowing

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Mech-Maker In reply to InvaderRaf [2009-12-07 14:41:28 +0000 UTC]

What about a female one? |D With huge glowing b-

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InvaderRaf In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-12-07 14:54:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL what huge light bulbs...

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Mech-Maker In reply to InvaderRaf [2009-12-08 00:34:21 +0000 UTC]

That can bend space an time around them C:

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Riftcaller [2009-11-29 23:59:31 +0000 UTC]

That last panel is great, hurr~

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Mech-Maker In reply to Riftcaller [2009-11-30 23:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Thankies

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Riftcaller In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-12-01 23:47:44 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome~ :3

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Aphilien [2009-11-18 23:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Even on a page that overall looks simple like this one, there is an amazing amount of details ^^ I love your way of creating expressions with the figures bodies and faces...

I really like your guard and his expression in the second panel =3

Great to see pages from you I'm already excited about this story

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Mech-Maker In reply to Aphilien [2009-11-19 04:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^^

Glad you like him. xD

Hope to not get stuck on this story like i did with my last promised comic.

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Aphilien In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-19 06:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Well he's a guard in a hansom uniform gottal love that as well heh

Dont think about that ^^ as soon as it gets "forced" its not half as fun to draw up =3
But it sure looks great!

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Mech-Maker In reply to Aphilien [2009-11-20 00:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

That is true. I'll keep it in mind. ^^

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Half-dude [2009-11-17 09:13:05 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome short comic here man, that's quite a cool design for our little sneak here. Admittedly I've seen the second page already, that must be some special technology that guy is using to make himself flat like that.

I really like the armor you made for the guard there, you're always so great at designing that sort of stuff. I love how you introduced our hero/villain here by having it's flat hand come out from under the door.. that's pretty epic there.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Half-dude [2009-11-17 15:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes. The power comes completely from the suit. A great tool for any thief to happen upon.

Thank you!

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Half-dude In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-18 01:33:25 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah, I want one as a matter of fact. XP

You're welcome.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Half-dude [2009-11-18 03:15:11 +0000 UTC]

Who wouldn't? XD

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Darth-Millenium [2009-11-16 17:57:27 +0000 UTC]

oh wow
2D sneaker huh? awesum ^^

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Mech-Maker In reply to Darth-Millenium [2009-11-17 04:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Darth-Millenium In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-17 19:09:50 +0000 UTC]

i luv the bit where he sticks his hand under the door

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KalliahVerkauf [2009-11-16 14:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh jeezus, this looks creative. xD Can't stop looking at the 2D hand in the second to last panel.

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Mech-Maker In reply to KalliahVerkauf [2009-11-17 04:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. : D
XD Yes, the hand is rather neat

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Predatorspet [2009-11-16 08:13:21 +0000 UTC]

7wwww7 in my brain I can here the James Bond theme song going on as that wispy prowler is skulking about under that door slit

if I were a intruder I'd be easily caught due to constant distraction from concentrating on my personal theme music in my head

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Mech-Maker In reply to Predatorspet [2009-11-17 04:58:26 +0000 UTC]

XDD Hopefully you'd have the James Bond moves to back it up

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Predatorspet In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-17 05:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Lol I wish but no.. the best I could do for myself is be all

UUUUUUUHHHH?!! HEYGUESSWHAT?! then flashes 'em throw something at their head, hope it's a good enough distraction then run like hell

... or randomly burst into tears crying tends to make for an temporary awkward moment

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Mech-Maker In reply to Predatorspet [2009-11-17 06:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Both are simple, yet can be effective. XD Especially if the crying one involves a surprise uppercut to the crotch when they get close.

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Predatorspet In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-17 07:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Shit my tactics have been revealed quickly to the batcave!

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Mech-Maker In reply to Predatorspet [2009-11-17 18:05:10 +0000 UTC]

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The-Snowlion [2009-11-16 07:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeness! >w< Love the last panel especially. Did a nice job drawing a paper-thin character ^^

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Mech-Maker In reply to The-Snowlion [2009-11-16 07:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Critical-Error [2009-11-16 07:28:58 +0000 UTC]

O mai, a 2-D intruder. O:

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gdpr-2852538 [2009-11-16 07:27:22 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY! The Creeper comic 8D

And what a cool opening, introducing of one of the villains sneaking around

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Mech-Maker In reply to gdpr-2852538 [2009-11-16 07:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Yus! No more waiting! 8D....except for page three, which would be up but i forgot the backgrounds xD;

>83 Oh yus. Much sneaking will there be.

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gdpr-2852538 In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-16 07:39:16 +0000 UTC]

D88

Oh so much sneaking there shall be >w<

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Mech-Maker In reply to gdpr-2852538 [2009-11-16 07:40:42 +0000 UTC]

So sneaky..only this can describe it >>>

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gdpr-2852538 In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-16 07:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh yess XDD

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Mech-Maker In reply to gdpr-2852538 [2009-11-16 07:46:09 +0000 UTC]


(gonna go sleep now )

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gdpr-2852538 In reply to Mech-Maker [2009-11-16 07:47:35 +0000 UTC]



( Nighty night ^^ )

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