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Published: 2007-12-26 05:05:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 353; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 12
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Wind in the wiresItβs the sigh of wild electricity
Iβm on the edge of a cliff
Surpassing
Comfort and security
Patrick Wolf!
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fantastic colors! did you filter this is PS or just use a lens filter?
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it looks very cute. I also love the colors <3
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I like the focus on this. The only thing I wish is that it could be just a tad bigger to see more detail. Other than that, great work!
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very nice image...
i love the blurred colors of the background
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Here is the constructive critique you wanted:
The shot is strong and the focus is good. I like the color saturation as well. The composition is rather lacking however and is uninteresting to looks at. While you are making use of the 2/3s rule for composition there is also the golden triangle which I think would help you out a lot more.
I use the Golden Triangle rule which was used by the masters of the renaissance and which in part I judge a pictureβs composition by, as well as contrast, color use and over all creativity. The rule follows that you have 3 parts, figures, objects, or elements that create more or less a right or isometric triangle. It is a little bit like playing connect the dot with an imaginary line and the parts of the picture being the dots, no actual line is drawn. This triangle can be repeated many time over and over again for increasing complex pictures but with a strong composition. Other triangles can be used but cause a weaker composition.
OK, first off this rule is also known as the golden rule or the golden triangle. So lets use this [link] and this [link] picture of mine to illustrate. To start off first take a look at the position of the heads and hands in both pictures. You will notice that they form a link to each other in the form of an imaginary triangle, what this does is create balance for the eye. However using elements just from one figure isnβt always the answer but by using other objects that have some kind of strong element for the picture can be used in this way as well. Details of an object or a person can also create balance in this like in the human face where the eyes, nose, mouth and ears create all sorts of triangles. The stronger mathematically correct a triangle is (like Right and Isosceles triangles) the stronger the composition but close enough works just as well.
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Thank you.
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great colours... on the down-side it reminds me of one of the stock wallpapers from Windows Vista haha
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Haha, I can see that. 
Thanks, though!
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