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Published: 2013-01-12 02:14:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 13492; Favourites: 751; Downloads: 109
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swiftpaw of thunderclanall grown up
ugh I hate the pose in this but oh well
I think a good warrior name for him would be swiftstrike, swiftclaw or swiftstorm
because of brightheart's quote of him fighting like all of lion clan
-spoilers-
Also if I were to animate or portray his death it would probably involve him standing over brightpaw's body defending her and then his final blow would be caused as he bites down on the ear of one of the dogs causing it to yelp and jerk its head back throwing him off and as in mid air he manages to claw at its nose this causes the dog to turn tail and go to run but as it does swiftpaw gets kicked aside and hits a tree, breaking his back,he is broken bloody and bruised but the dogs retreat... his last act is to crawl next to brightpaw to check if she is is okay, as he see's her shallow breathing he smiles with tears in his eyes and begins to slip out of consciousness.
because even though its never shown I'd like to think in the end he won the fight even if he lost his life...
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Me when Swiftpaw died: *Throws Book on the ground* TIGERSTAR I WANT TO TEAR OUT YOUR INTESTINES AND SHOVE 'EM BACK DOWN YOUR THROAGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yep thats seems exacly like me XD but dame it tigerstar DX
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That is actually accurate
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you'r design for him is amazing and way you the pictured his death is so sad i love swiftpaw and i cried when he died
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Very nice design! I like smile, and Swiftpaw's tail is so awesome. Good job!
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I`m not sure if its ok when I laugh about what happened to swiftpaw
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I love your design for him
And the expression. Like "hey guys, i'm cool."
It's just...
LOVELY
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I always liked the name Swiftspirit... but Swiftstorm sounds great too.
Good job!
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thats such a sad way to picture his death
love the warrior names
i like is facial expression, to me he kinda looks like hes saying "hey there ladies"
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Ms Flighty i cried just a little reading ur portrait of swiftly death... Oh yeah I love the mask markings u gave him
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I swear, I died a little when I read your version of Swiftpaw's death... ;___; Also, I think Swiftstrike or Swiftstorm are good names too...
I love this design! One of the best ones I've seen :3
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*le gasp* if her art sucks then what is your art..
Ehehe you do realise you could get reported to the police for saying that..
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LOL if I left your name in you could have been tumblr famous
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then explain why this has 587 favorites.
sheesh...
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stop trolling >:I its mean
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Aww poor Swifty. All he wanted was to be a warrior
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I imagined his death alittle like that. Only, i imagined that one dog sank its fangs into his neck and the other his stomach/back and nearly ripped him in half.... .3.
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I think SwiftStrike fits him perfectly. Your Swiftpaw reminds me abit of how i imagined AshyFured. Honostly, after SwiftPaw died, i hated BlueStar. Its techincally her fault he died and BrightHeart is maned that way.
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I think a good name for him is swiftheart cause he was brave
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wow, I thought I was the only person who imagined his death like that xD
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I love his design, it's a lot more creative than most others that I've seen where he just has black stripes/splotches uwu
My headcanon is a dog would be going for Brightheart, and swiftpaw'd jump in front of her to defend her and the dog would grab him in mid-air and throw his body in the air and pin him to the ground with it's teeth, then the other two dogs would go after brightheart. They'd retreat and brightheart would fall into a fevered sleep and see Swiftpaw's spirit telling her he's alright.
I don't know either ;_;
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Awesome name suggestions. I think Swiftstrike is my favorite, or Swiftclaw.
And if you ever did portray his death like that, it would be fantastic. I'd like to think the same. :')
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Tee-hee~ He's so cutie, yo :3
Plus, this design remainds me to all the Longtails you did (and not only you, all the people in general).
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I have nothing against this work or you, but I have no idea what it's doing on main page uvu
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what do you men? your main page?
this confuses me also
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I mean "Popular 8 hours" ...
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well popular is based on what people favorite or view it has nothing to do with good art sadly
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Yeah... and I know that isn't your fault uwu'.
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His bent paw looks broken. Legs don't work like that. x_x
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***ugh I hate the pose in this but oh well ***
I'm well aware of that but this was also attempt and flexible limbs similar to the style in oh say adventure type I like the idea of over cartoonist flexability
further more I can hardly say this image had time spent on it
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Wow... the way you described his death is just so beautiful and brave. I love the idea!
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askldjjahsf your headcanon is accepted and I am crying ;_;
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I love this little warrior! ;~; It's so unfair that he died! He had so much potential!
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That is the best version of Swiftpaw's death I've ever read ;u;
I'd definitely love to see an animation. It sounds really interesting <3
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You should most defiantly animate his death or so! I bet it would look
great! I also enjoy this picture a lot! C:
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now that i read that i would love to see you animate that :' )
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i love your design for swiftpaw so much ???? its really neat !!! and i think that is an excellent portrayal of the fight, its definitely a nice thought, having him win the battle even though he dies soon after
did you know that hearing is the last to go when you die ?? ??? i was just reminded of that fact
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whoa thats a full sentence. no periods... THREE MOONS ITS A PARAGRAPH IN A SENTENCE *doesn't know whether to scream or throw a party*
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;A; Swiffffttttyyyy!!!! Y is ur tail a mace??
Seriously, its all poofy at the tip and gives me the impression that Longtail tried to teach him to use his tail as a mace. xD Try erasing THAT mental image.
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