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MechanicMocha — For Rasuberi-chuuuuuuuuuu
Published: 2012-11-05 02:30:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 933; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 6
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The eyes are weird, I don't like the face .--.Finished: [link]
Artwork (c) *MechanicMocha
I am just not happy with it... any of my art lately... I really need to work on it.
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Comments: 48
When I first read your description, I was honestly surprised that you though this was bad at all c: There's a difference between bad and needing improvement, and quite frankly this is adorable and beautifully done : D
First off, I love the little pose you've made. It's so adorable, especially with that adorable expression on the face :,D One thing I would like to see, though, is a bit more posing in the legs c: They also look like adorable little stubs instead of legs, so try to keep some subtle defining- even though it's just a chibi ^^ I also love the expression, like I said, but the eyebrows are a bit too small ouo" I like eyebrows like that when there's a contrast with the brow color and the background it's on, but in this case I at first glance couldn't identify the two circles on her bangs xD;;
Something that also bothers me a little is the difference in size of the character's sleeves c: I don't think it was intentional, but if you look closely one is fat and the other is skinny xD
Also, her pigtails are longer than where her legs end x,D It's a mistake I usually make, it makes characters look like they're flying ^^ ; try to either make the piggies shorter, or use foreshortening on the ends to imply a floor c:
So yeah ^^ basically all the things I noticed were just little details, don't be so hard on yourself <3 this is a wonderful little drawing with an adorable character in it : D
Hope this helped, baiiiii ^^~~
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Don't put yourself down like that. I think you did a good job drawing her. Her facial expression is very sweet, her eyes are gorgeous, her outfit is adorable, and even if the pigtails are too long, I think they're very cute. She's so pretty, I wanna give her a BIG hug!
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I think she look precious! I love the over-sized sleeves >u<
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LOL And its done with a mouse 
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Thank you!!!! <33333333 >////<
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How can't you be happy? You did a perfect job and she looks very beautiful Q u Q
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Idk, I have been realllly down on myself I guess lately, I see a pile of poopy LOL <333
Thank you though sweetie <333333
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Aww.... I hope you'll get better soon. Your art is always great and I will always support you ~<3
And you're welcome~
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Ohhh, I am sure, Once I get my tablet and practice more, I will be more comfortable =3=
Thank you so much sweetie!!!!! <333333333333
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You're welcome~ I hope you all the best <3
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Ohhhhhhh Thank you!!!! >////<
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MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPUUUUU I LOVVVEEE HEEERRRRRR!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH I LOOVEE CHUU MOCHIITAAA
what did that person comment?? The one chu flagged as spam???
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Awwwwwww Thank you, And they said It was traced...? LOL
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Lol :3 to be honest it kinda was :3 from the original????? The one on paper??? Lol :3 you really didn't have to do this for me!!!!!!
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Its fine, I was feeling bleh so i did it, Some people are so fucking rude.
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Yeah they are :3 hehe but don't let it get chu down!!
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Its hard, Even small shtuffs like that make my feelings hurt.
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From what? How rude to leave such a comment.
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oh so cuuute<3 i always love your work>w<
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so cute! ^u^ her face looks perfect! tht dress totally goes with her face; lol
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awww so cute ;w; ... i think ur getting better o; .. awesome job
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Yehhhh I am trying LOL <3 Thanks.
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