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Published: 2009-05-06 08:46:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Really old picture, this one. The land outside the window has been annoying me forever and a day, but I thought I'd throw it in my gallery anyways
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Oooh, I like this. She has an awesome castle scene just outside her window.
I don't know if this is welcome or not, but I'm going to try to give some constructive advice. I'm not sure if I'm very good at that though, so keep that in mind:
The window is a little big, or the person is a little small. If you were worried about her getting in the way, you could position her off to the side of the composition (like towards the bottom right of the window), or move the "camera". The inside of the building should probably be darker since the light is coming from outside (sunshine is always brighter than candles or typical lightbulbs). The land probably bothers you because, at least to me, it looks like you drew the castle as if it is being viewed at a high angle, but it appears she is looking at it from a low angle. (The curves are going "down", like at the base of the tower, instead of level or up) If you change that I think you'll find it easier to make a more believable cliff. Sorry if I went overboard, it's much easier to be a critic than to draw something nice.
Overall, I really like the colors and the idea here. The composition is pretty good too, in my opinion.
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Ahhh! Thank you! XD
The lighting on the inside bugged me, too. My brain likes to illuminate EVERYTHING.
And I think that sounds about right, with the cliff outside the window~
The window size WAS intentional, however ^_^ I have a thing with giant windows. The bigger the better!
Thanks again for your critiques~ always appreciated!
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Aaaaaahh you finally posted something xDD
Keep posting =.=
It's lovely!
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