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MegaCrystalSwiftail — Alternate form of Chaos

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Published: 2014-04-20 20:41:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1670; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 10
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Description Man, I never excpected something like this: supersmashcynderlum.deviantart… would be this popular. i even made a digital remake of it using Poney Creator Ponies: supersmashcynderlum.deviantart… and yet my first drawing is still more popular. Holy cranberries! So it popularity ans success inspired me to make another MLP FIM traditional drawing.

As much as I love The Return of Harmony Part 1 and Part 2, I kind of felt a little not satisfied with Discord's plan. Don't get me wrong, His idea to make the ponies the opposite of the elements is sneaky and chaotic, it's just that it also felt too predictable, not to mention Angry Pie scares me somewhat. So for my idea, I have a what if Discord has the elements of harmony expose it's more darker and sinster side, combining both it's element and it's polar opposite together, (and he also makes them turn against Princess Celestia too. And how will he do it, you ask? By exposing Celestia's dark secrets to them!


First off, AppleJack's new corrupted element is Half Truthfulness (her cutie mark is now shaped like a parasprite.) When Discord tells and reveals to the orange earth pony about how Celestia actually had some involvment in Princess Luna's transformation to Nightmare Moon, she becomes dstraught, allowing Discord to tamper with her mind to beileve that She should now use secret decptions to save Equestria. Ok, it is similar to Dishonesty, but Apple Jack now has her lies mixed with a bit or some of the truth in it. When Apple Jack tells other ponies about this, almost none of them are able to tell if she's telling the truth or if she's lying that will cause some serious fighting and heart break among them. Ouch!

Next, Pinkie Pie's new Element is Insanity (her cutie mark is a cupcake with a knife. *shudder*) Discord ends up tricking Pinkie Pie into thinking Celestia doesn't really care about attending into other Pony's partys such as Her's or Princess Luna's and once completely heart broken, Discord meedles with her mind to activate her corrupted element. Pinkie Pie in this condition now is like psychopathic attacker (and her smile is creepy) and expects everyone to give praises to her and her parties, (something Discord doesn't mind doing everyday as he sees his meedling has givin her a love for Chaos as well.) Oh, Pinkie Pie can still get angry like her discorded form, but instead of being a grumpy stubborn pony she really takes her anger out on anyone who she thinks doesn't apreciate her or her parties.

Thinking of Rarity's new corrupted element was probably the most difficult thing to do. (not to mention doing her hair style.) Her's I guess would be Harmful Bargining. (her new cutie mark is a treasure chest) After Discord tells the white Unicorn about Celestia refusing to share her toys with Princess Luna, Rarity's mind becomes available for remodeling, but not before trying to deny his truth about her at first. Rarity in this status now will give something specual to other......only for expecting them to give something even more special in return. And they have a limited time to find it, otherwisw she will show her wraith to them. Sometimes, for whatever reason she may have in mind, even if they do find it, she'll back stab them and take back the item she gave to them. Yep, a little bit of Greed is stil lin her. 

Fluttershy's new element is Flattery (with her cutie mark being a broken heart) Much like the original story, Fluttershy doesn't fall for Discord's manipulations. Discord get's really ticked off, (since he expected that kind of resistance from Twilight Sparkle, but not her.) But now, it's peer preasure from the corrupted Apple Jack, Pinkie Pie and Rarity that makes her snap into his manipulation. For this sate, Fluttershy first starts off as being nice, saying words of kindness and respect for her victim, but as time goes on, she gets crueler and crueler bit by bit, she does this so the poor pony who tries to befriend her will not notice anything wrong with her. Finally by the time Fluttershy reveals her true colors, that pony will not be able to blame her for anything wrong but will only blame his or herself since he/she is so busy trying to impress her and be her friend. So it's basicly a kill them with kindness strategy.

Rainbow Dash's new element is Counterspy (her cutie mark now being a thunder cloud with lightning) Dispite The blue Pegasaus Pony claiming she'll never fall for Discords tricks, the draconequus manages to conivince her about betraying Celestia by showing her the princess' supposed involvment in making Princess Luna evil. Rainbow Dash in this state is now Discord's personal spy. She will first trick the opposing pony into beileving she is on their side, having them foolishly trust them into giving her secret plans against Discord who she quietly tells him about and then when the timing is right, she betrays them and hands them over for Discord for planned Chaos. Yeah, she's similar to Traitor Dash, except she is still loyal......to the wrong side that is.

Finally there is Twilight Sparkle. Her new corrupted element is Black Magic. (I tried to make her cutie mark like a symbol for black magic.) Twilight Sparkle was the hardest to fully corrupt since she has so much will power and is very loyal to Princess Celestia no matter what. Unfortunetly, Discord knew ahead of time she would be really difficult so he takes a much different approach. He greatly torments her by showing her what he did with her friends and having them tell her what they know what princess Celestia did and all. While Twilight doesn't beileve any of this and tries her hardest to have her friends return to normal (with no avail) Discord can sense she is slowly but surely losing her will and resistense to his tricks. When Twilight finally gives up on her friends and attempts to use the elements of harmony with fail miseribly, Discord then tells her about a half truth of Celestia. She had another student before her who she loved very much, but was forced to banish her when she commited a serious crime. She never really cared for Twilight and only wanted her as a replacement for her lost favorite student. Twilight who was already weakened by the failure of the elements of Harmony gets a serious breakdown and submits to his powers.

Twilight in her corrupted form prefers to use chaos and witchery rather then the friendship of magic. She is very loyal to Discord and wants to do whatever she can to please him. (which also puts her in bad terms with Pinkie Pie because she shares her loyal interest in Discord.) She cares very little for her "friends" and merely sees them as her own associtaes for her own use. She grew bat wings out of her corruption and is quite a loner. If anyone tries to tell her to make friends, she'll severly go harsh with them and her Black magic is really dangerous.



*phew* That's all of them. Enjoy my pic and tell me what you think of this.

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Comments: 10

CatDasher [2014-05-12 20:43:11 +0000 UTC]

cool idea here btw great work on DIscord XD

have any closeup pictures on their "chaos related cutiemarks"?^^

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to CatDasher [2014-05-12 21:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha ha, Thank you so very much. I really wanna make that idea into a fanfic if I'm not too busy. XD

Hmmm....Now since you mentioned it, I should make closeup pics of the ponies with their Altered Cutiemarks ASAP.

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CatDasher In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2014-05-13 10:36:08 +0000 UTC]

why not a comic?XD im soo slow when it comes to fan fics (the tiniest distraction and i often need to start over because forgets where i was in itXD''.)

yeah it would be intressting to get a closer look on them^^

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to CatDasher [2014-05-13 12:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm....That may not be a bad idea. Of coarse, I'm not a good drawer, but.......Ouch, both ideas are really good. What to do? Hmmmm....I think about both of them. (I know how you feel, I'm slow when it comes to fan fics and drawings too.)

Ok. I just finished AppleJack's: supersmashcynderlum.deviantart… I'm gonna do Pinkie Pie next.

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CatDasher In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2014-05-13 15:41:49 +0000 UTC]

i like your art  

she looks good and good to put up the info there too.

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to CatDasher [2014-05-13 19:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, Thank you very much. ^^

Thanks a lot. I thought I needed to do that if anyone didn't read Alternate form of Chaos.

I just did Pinkie Pie now: supersmashcynderlum.deviantart… Gonna work on Rarity and the others asap.

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CatDasher In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2014-05-14 13:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcomes^^

well it was good thinking since info really help for those who is curious over the idea^^

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Lyriyale [2014-04-20 20:51:10 +0000 UTC]

I like Discord!

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MegaCrystalSwiftail In reply to Lyriyale [2014-04-20 21:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Me too. ^^

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Lyriyale In reply to MegaCrystalSwiftail [2014-04-20 21:28:49 +0000 UTC]

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