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Published: 2005-02-28 07:26:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 27
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random comic of an idea i had in my head. it's in pure cantonese, so sorry to those mandos who can't read itthe long haired pale haired hair is hitomi, the ponytail girl is misuzu and the spiky haired girl is chisame. the guy is kaoru (the guy from the previous two pics)
here's the translation (read like you would read a manga):
hitomi: you know that guy's a new student here?
misuzu: you talking about kaoru-kun?
some guy: hoy! kaoru!
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kaoru: what do you want?
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sfx: blushing and heart beating rapidly
some guy: ...er, nothing
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kaoru: ...
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chisame: kaoru-kun's pretty cute! why haven't we noticed him yet, eh?
misuzu: ...but i did?
hitomi: those two >_<...
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hitomi & misuzu: she's always like this (note lit. is: nothing can cure her)
chisame: for my reputation, i must make kaoru-kun fall in love with me!!! ha ha ha!!!
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hitomi & misuzu: i heard that he's really talented! he's really smart and is really good at basketball! so cool!!!
chisame: hey, kaoru-kun!
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kaoru: ?
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hitomi & misuzu: she's really doing it!
chisame: *air kiss*
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sfx: *catch*
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sfx: *crush*
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hitomi & misuzu: it's all right! there are still plenty of cute guys in our grade...
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chisame: ha ha ha! kaoru-kun, you are worthy of my undying love! ha ha ha! (note lit. is "you are worth chasing")
teacher: hey, chisame! sit down!!!
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kaoru: she's pretty weird...
please comment... it's my first go at a comic
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Comments: 12
ADZL33t [2005-04-06 22:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Nice work I make my own comixs 2 nice work make more
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The1WolfDemon [2005-03-01 12:07:29 +0000 UTC]
gah!! cant read!! *frantically looks up and down at translation and comic*....heehee!!! AWSOME!! aww he crushed her heart!! O.O noooo!! lol!! but the ending is funny!! heehee!! but my fave is the heart crushing! lol!! that was mean!! *whacks kaoru with an overly large inflatable heart* bwahahahhahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!...oh...rig ht... really love the comic!! ^_^
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megakitty In reply to The1WolfDemon [2005-03-02 05:27:29 +0000 UTC]
thankies!!! i'll post up a translated one if i feel like it
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megakitty In reply to kiyahluv13 [2005-03-01 06:38:08 +0000 UTC]
lolness, maybe i should post an english version
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megakitty In reply to kiyahluv13 [2005-03-02 05:28:34 +0000 UTC]
yeah, np, soon when i have enough time
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aniki91344 [2005-02-28 10:37:02 +0000 UTC]
You and your crazy Kanji/Hanjja (Japanese and Korean way of saying Chinese characters) I'm supposed to have learned at least half of them, Being Korean, but my parents never taught me T_T. Oh well, it probably would've taken my whole life to learn it anyway.
Anyways, I'm guessing this is left to right format? OK, the framelines are drawn really good, and I'm impressed that you were able to put down so much in just one page. (however, for future referance, if you looks at manga, they usually have about 8 frames at most. Your format is more like a webcomic, showing as much of the story as you can in a smaller amount of space. Webcomic fans, such as I, would love you for that! lol. I wanted to start a manga too, but could never think up a good topic or storyline T_T.) Nice going with the facial expressions and everything too!
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megakitty In reply to aniki91344 [2005-03-01 06:40:52 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i would be very ashamed if i didn't know my mother language. and it's right to left . yeah, i agree with you and the thing about it being too long for manga... thanks for the tip and comments!!!
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aniki91344 In reply to megakitty [2005-03-01 22:32:28 +0000 UTC]
so, ya Mandarin or Cantonese? Amazes me to see you kids learn 100,000 + characters. How do you do it?! Hahaha, Korea only has 24 letters, and very seldom use Kanji/Hanjja.
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megakitty In reply to aniki91344 [2005-03-02 05:30:00 +0000 UTC]
uh... i know both to an extent though my speaking's much better than writing i've been learning for about 9 years already so yeah
... i wanna learn korean and jap!!
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