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Between the LinesChapter 2: Shay
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Tenshiyasha [2009-04-11 01:43:07 +0000 UTC]
"brought to light" seems a bit at odds with Shay's usual informal speech. I already know you're re-doing this chapter, but I think that had to be said.
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Mekari In reply to Tenshiyasha [2009-04-11 05:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks that was something I missed. I honestly don't mind you going through the comic with a fine toothed comb. There has been a serious lack of criticism on BtL since the first time it was redone and to me that is a bad sign.
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Tenshiyasha In reply to Mekari [2009-04-11 13:42:16 +0000 UTC]
"Fine toothed comb", eh? I like that. I am glad that you welcome my approach, and impressed that you are wary of complacency. The reason for both is the subject matter. It seems that most of your current(DA, at least) audience are those who are a part of, or sympathetic towards the plight that the central characters face, and therefore are willing to sweep some things under the rug.
That is not to say that I am not, I just want the presentation to be better when I know it can,
[sappy]so that maybe, just maybe, it's message can reach others.[/sappy]
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Mekari In reply to Tenshiyasha [2009-04-12 02:39:21 +0000 UTC]
On deviantart yes. The myspace site is the place where the comic gets the most readers that have nothing to do with the GLBT community even posted a blog showing one of the letters so it is actually doing some good but i'm kinda imbarrased to have people go through the previous chapters just cause I know they are not up to par, while they are ok for an online comic they are not ok for print or anything else.
The other audience i'm trying to reach are trans people who do not useually read online comics cause I know that the story has the ability to faithfully represent many of them.
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Roxio41-50 [2008-02-17 16:04:39 +0000 UTC]
It's funny how people's thoughts tend to change when they grow older.
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