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Published: 2007-08-08 05:24:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1445; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 13
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Top row: Dani's mother, Nikki, Savvas, Shay, Rico/Rio, RachaelBottom row: Razly, Dani, boy Dani, Kiwi, boy Shay, Shay's mother, Carrie
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I've been reading your comic for a little while now. You really should think about posting more of the pages on DA rather than just on your MySpace. You see, when I go on there my computer screws it all up and instead of going to the comic I end up on the MySpace homepage.
Seriously, I love reading about other people's problems like that but it get confusing when there's a gap in the storyline. What happens in Chap2 Pgs 5-7? Hopefully my comic, partly inspired by yours, will just as great.
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This will be fixed! woo! but first things first....Chapter1 is being redone as we speak to look new and improved and lots of new information that should have been there in the first place!
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I thought it was fine before but if that's what you want then I won't stop you from doing your thing.
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I'm looking to get it published but I dont want to self publish and chapter1 as it is would not cut the cake untill page16, thats when I started using a different process and I want that process to be consistant through out chapter1. While chapter1 offers enough info given for the two main characters, Nikki and Savvas had very little info, you know next to nothing about them and thats not a very good thing to do in an online comic where your not gonna see those characters again untill chapter3 and still its brief.
There, thats more of an explaination. I already posted the new page 1 and the next two should be up in a few minutes.
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I might be taking this the wrong way but thanks for the advise. I now know what to look out for future referance.
Yeah, having too many characters is trouble. Along the way one or two is bound to be dropped off at least once. Right now in my planning stage for later story archs I'm favoriting one character over many others.
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Yeah I kind of did the same thing, Shay and Dani were not the main characters at first but after a few revisions I started to favor them more and then did a complete rewrite following those two.
I would love to see your comic when you get done with it ^.^
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I'm working on posting page 4 but I'm going to use the excuse I've been busy. Perhaps I'll just end up putting a steady cycle to my peoples. They'll share their problems a few at a time every so many pages.
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They're all awesome! I started reading your comic a bit tonight, and it's great. :3
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