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Published: 2015-03-24 21:51:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 8024; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 16
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Description This was an idea by my good friend Erin (A.K.A. Mastergamer20) and his latest pictures -


Dr Finitevus had been spying on the Guardian of the Master Emerald, Knuckles the echidna, to find a way to accomplish his schemes.
He was surprised when one day, Knuckles was talking to a mysterious female echidna he had not seen before (Sky). Upon doing some research on the girl, Finitevus discovered about her history as the goddess Sora, and her creation by Dr Eggman.

Realizing her worth as a truly powerful being, the evil albino echidna decided to use her as his latest experiments.


Some time later, Sky thought that Knuckles was in danger, so she went to investigate in the last place he was seen-
Dr Finitevus' laboratory.

She had no idea that Knuckles wasn't missing at all, in fact it was a trap set up by none other than Dr Finitevus himself!
The female echidna was about to search another location when she was suddenly grabbed from behind, her arms were pulled away tightly, so that she was unable to fight back.

Sky was just about to use her powers to fight this unknown opponent when just then, the stranger let go of one of her arms and used some kind of knock-out device and inserted it in her neck.
The device quickly took effect and she passed out, making everything go black...


Several minutes later, Sky woke up to see that she was clamped down onto some kind of 'operating table'.
She looked around the room to see an unfamiliar figure walk up to her-
None other than Dr Finitevus!

He taunted the female echidna, telling her that he had many plans to use her powers and also her unique blood (which he took a sample of) to create more clones for his own purposes. He also told her that no one knows that she is here, and in her current state, she would never break free!


Or so that's what he thought-

Sky was so angry at this new villain and his plot, she began to channel her powers.
Her ocean blue eyes burned with sheer rage at Finitevus, as she waited for the perfect moment to strike....
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Comments: 25

FireballStardraco [2015-03-31 20:21:46 +0000 UTC]

That Finitevus never quits, I hope someone or Sky teaches him a lesson.

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Symphonic-Labyrinth [2015-03-26 02:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant as always, Mel.

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oreana [2015-03-25 19:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Great use of telling a story without the use of speech bubbles and or panels. It is unique to see panels acting as the characters themselves, and it flowed quite well here. Yes, that does seem like something Finitevus would do. XD; But, all the same, Finitevus is one that desires death and destruction over the world by any means: always spouting about using the emerald's power to cleanse the world and 'start over', so why he would want to make clones here...I am not sure. I would imagine he'd more use her blood to experiment on himself to get the power he needs to carry out his plans, or in hopes of bringing Knuckles to his grasp to get the emerald (as that's always on his mind).

It is indeed refreshing to see Finitevus in your style. It is a villain/character I've not seen done by you before. Everything here looks great and is well colored and put together, but that middle panel has a few things bugging me:

Her fingers shouldn't be curled like that unless she's levitating on the table. If she's lying flat on the table, a slight 'rise' in her fingers resting beside her would do better. (For a reference, put your hand on your computer desk or a wooden surface nearby and tell me what you see your hands do.) That's what I imagine hers would be doing.

Also, I am not sure why there's no headrest there on the table. O_O;; That looks downright painful for her head to be falling off into...nothing..Unless, maybe I am missing something? Are there a lot of dreads and hair in the way to where I can't see the headrest? Either way, her neck looks like it's about to snap, and that looks painful. Her head shouldn't be resting to the side like that--you should put it more in a profile means where it shows only half of her face and body. It looks like from her breast upward, it took an awkward angle turn, and that's where the problem occurred. Watch out for that in the future.

The first panel looks great, but Finitevus...what is he looking at? I know he's supposed to be looking at Sky, but his eyes shouldn't be going directly forwards, but over to meet Sky.

Also, contrary to fandom beliefs, Finitevus isn't an albino. He's a photo-negative of Knuckles (thus why they sort of look similar in stature), and it was written down as that in the comics. I am not sure where albino arose. XD; I guess because he's white, but not all white beings are albinos.

Yeah, I have a feeling Sky will make it out okay. XD She usually does. Once again, great work on the panels and expressing emotion without the use of wording. Sounds like the story is really coming along, and I am glad that a friend could certainly entice this story from you. Good luck on the panels and pages to come.

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Mel-Sky In reply to oreana [2015-03-25 21:51:06 +0000 UTC]

I always anticipate your brilliant critiques, and I thank you my friend.
You give me the best encouragement and advice, and you are 100% honest.
I am always eager to improve and, hopefully, I'll get better with time and practice.

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oreana In reply to Mel-Sky [2015-03-25 21:55:04 +0000 UTC]

You're more than welcome. Time and practice are indeed a great aid with any talent, and I am sure you will more than improve as time goes by!

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DarkCatTheKhajjit [2015-03-25 16:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh.. this isn't good for Sky..

Great picture and you did well with Dr Fintevius

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Sonic-fan17 [2015-03-25 06:10:00 +0000 UTC]

This' bad

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Wannabe-Fandomlord [2015-03-25 00:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh !

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Jimma1300 [2015-03-25 00:14:05 +0000 UTC]

Ooh do I smell a corruption looming?  

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KrockoArt [2015-03-24 22:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Wait she is a deity?

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FantasyRebirth96 [2015-03-24 22:15:30 +0000 UTC]

oh dear nothing can come good of this hope she'll be ok....

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Mel-Sky In reply to FantasyRebirth96 [2015-03-24 22:23:14 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about Sky. She'll DEFINITELY be okay, and ready for a fight!

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FantasyRebirth96 In reply to Mel-Sky [2015-03-24 22:25:44 +0000 UTC]

now thats more like it

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StacheHand [2015-03-24 22:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Boy, Erin sure gave you some interesting ideas. From the look of where this is going, Finitevus has big plans for this goddess reincarnation. I look forward to more of this series.

Finitevus looks spot on, and Sky, well, she's as good looking as ever.

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TheTodStar [2015-03-24 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh, he is SO getting a beating...

You've done it again, honey! Great job, especially with your first pic of Finitevus!

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Mel-Sky In reply to TheTodStar [2015-03-24 22:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks sweetie! 

Thanks, I wanted to do him justice, since he is a brilliant villain! And there are more parts to come...

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TheTodStar In reply to Mel-Sky [2015-03-24 22:24:33 +0000 UTC]

I agree. It's why he's the head of the Nocturnus in COM...

And I'm looking forward to every part!

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Erin-Gamer-90 [2015-03-24 22:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Great start Mel.

Glad I can inspire you to create this story.

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Mel-Sky In reply to Erin-Gamer-90 [2015-03-24 22:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but you should also get the credit for this, my friend.

There are several more parts to this, and something I KNOW you will like!

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Erin-Gamer-90 In reply to Mel-Sky [2015-03-24 22:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Awww....

Awesome.

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Mixedfan8643 [2015-03-24 21:53:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's great.  

I love the way Finitevus looks in your style.

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Mel-Sky In reply to Mixedfan8643 [2015-03-24 22:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Really?  
Y'know, this is the first time I have ever drawn Finitevus, and I wondered if the way I did him in this looks a little weird?  

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Mixedfan8643 In reply to Mel-Sky [2015-03-25 07:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Really. 

It looks just like him.

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Mel-Sky In reply to Mixedfan8643 [2015-03-25 08:18:15 +0000 UTC]

That's so kind of you, Scott. Thank you!  

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Mixedfan8643 In reply to Mel-Sky [2015-03-25 08:21:00 +0000 UTC]

Welcome Mel.

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