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bumble-boo [2009-08-17 20:19:42 +0000 UTC]

This is looking really sweet! But I might have a few suggestions?

I think that maybe the brown/blue area on her chest, perhaps you should just make it all blue, or something? Like put all of her skin colour through there, and then if like you put the darkest blue at the bottom of her chest area, and then sort of gradate it up? (If that doesn't make sense, I can just show you tomorrow or something).

I like how you made her hair sketchy, but maybe if you added some lines through it it might add to the "sketchy" look? It's really preference though, cause it looks good the way it is as well!

Also, one more thing, I think that maybe if you sort of "smoked" out the bottoms, into like some kinda of twirly shapes, or just sort of faded it out again (you can do it with the lines too) it'd help it look not so "cut off" at the bottom. OR like if you took it and just streaked the colours down the page, like running paint, that might look really cool! But, yeah!

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wendystolyarov [2009-08-17 18:44:21 +0000 UTC]

I like the contrast between how cheerful she is and the bizarre death Xes on her eyes. X.X

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