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Published: 2010-05-20 21:31:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2337; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 44
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EDIT: I finally got around to adjusting her breasts thanks to some critiques I got. I hope it looks more correct now.
This was an older drawing that I recently started up again because I still happened to like it enough to give it some work.
Anyway, this is a character of mine, Sorba Strafe. She was created for the purpose of finding out more about a particular place that Christian and I have in mind, but doesn't really take part in the main story. Not that any of this information is necessary. >_> Just look at the picture and ignore my rambles.
I would be happy to know what you think. Thanks!
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Lovin' the details in all the little pieces and coloring on this--especially the markings on her arm. Her eyes also seem so alive~ Colorful haaaair<3
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Thanks!
I didn't realize it'd been so long since I posted it now. I still have to give her a "boob job." XD
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Well, I really love all the color, and the attention to detail(Her tattoos, all the feathery patterns and colors in her hair, beautiful eyes, all the details on what little clothing she does have, like the texture on her armband is awesome. 
But erm, I thought you might like somewhat of a critique, even though I'm not much of a critic because I usually don't like to over-analyze things, but anyways, her breasts just look kind of strange to me! I mean, I love squished breasts. Nothing wrong with squished breasts. Squished breasts are awesome. ...Uh. I'm not exactly sure what it is. Maybe it's the perspective? Her right one looks uh... Longer at flatter than her left, I guess it might just be squished more. I 'unno. =S You probably know a lot more about anatomy than me anyways though, sooo...
Er, I'll stop staring at her boobs, now.
It's a beautiful painting! I really like it.
d('.' )
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Thanks.
Like Christian said, it's probably the perspective that's making it look longer. I messed up and I'll have to go back and work on it. It probably should have had more time spent on it, but that's me being, uh, picky of my own work again.
<3
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The colors look great, especially in the hair, and her eyes are nice and vibrant. I like the streaks, and the balance of colors there. It's also asymmetric, which I always like in hair.
The border is neat and clean, and I really like how the feathers overlap it, while other parts don't.
As many times as I've looked at this while you were working on it, there's something I never noticed before.
Yes, it's about the breasts! >_>
It's a perspective thing, which is probably why I didn't notice until I could see it in a smaller thumbnail. Given the perspective, her right breast should not be showing above and below the left unless it's larger than the other.
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You didn't notice! 
Now I feel better. At least you did notice eventually. Now I guess I'll have to go back and fix it. The shame!
Also, thanks. <3
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Loving the eyes and the light 'tattoo' look on the dark skin. Her hair is mesmerizing. The little pop of red material at the bottom right is just what you needed to keep the eye circling around the image!
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Thank you.
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Aha! "General chest area." XD
Thanks! <3
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This is REAAAALY awesome. I love it a lot.
NICE JOB!
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Awesome coloring : O
I love the hair. Her boobs look a bit uncomfortably squished though haha.
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Thanks! XD Ha, yes. But when you've got big'uns and you're a warrior woman, you've gotta keep 'em from smacking into your face.
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True, true.
That would be as painful as it sounds hilarious.
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