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Published: 2015-06-27 22:53:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1164; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 1
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CHAPTER ONE: MEETING BY THE WAVESCHARACTER DEBUTS:Maricela as Flabebe :iconmelonstyle:
Yong Soo as Lucario :iconhimaruyaplz:
Li Xiao as Mienfoo :iconhimaruyaplz: (design inspired by pichuart)
Mei as Cherrim :iconhimaruyaplz: (design inspired by TUNSEM and F-iji)
CHAPTER ONE: MEETING BY THE WAVES
It started with a vicious thunder clap and the howling of raindrops raging against their skin. The darkness was overwhelming, and she could feel her grasp slipping from the other who was with her. A rough, panicked voice tried to reach her, tried to keep her holding on.
“Are you okay?!”
A lightning strike. She could feel her hold loosening.
“Just a little longer, I’ve got you..!”
Whose voice was this? It seemed familiar, but she couldn’t assign a name to it. She sensed the desperation in read chapter here!
While travelling with her friend, Maricela gets caught up in an attack that causes her to have a loss of her memories. She gets washed up on the beach and discovered by Yong Soo, a young man who recently became old enough to be eligible to join the nearby Sonrisa Guild. It's his desire to discover the stories behind a Relic Fragment that's been in his possession for as long as he can remember. Maricela, having no other plans, decides to form an Exploration Team with Yong Soo and join the Sonrisa Guild as its newest members. They'll end up taking on all sorts of jobs, and getting know the rest of their Guild and the citizens of Treasure Town, as well as discovering lost memories and hidden secrets!
However, the world of Poketalia is in danger. Time seems to be freezing over in certain parts of the world, and a mystery being is going around stealing the Time Gears... The world needs to be saved before it's too late!
In this AU, the Hetalia Characters are now Pokemon Gijinkas, meaning they are humans that possess traits of particular Pokemon. Do not design characters for this AU without my permission!
Find out more about the AU here: Poketalia AU: Explorers of Time MASTERPOST[adjust]
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So yeah I finally posted the first chapter! I would really love feedback here on both the artwork and the writing, so don't be shy! I really appreciate the support so far, so I hope to continue. More characters will debut as the fic progresses! <3
btw uhh... I don't have a fullbody version of Yong Soo yet. Feel free to interpret as you wish but use the above picture as a guideline! Please and thank you!
Philippines OC
South Korea, Hong Kong and Taiwan
Pokemon - Satoshi Tajiri
Art featuring is either mine or from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Sky game
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Comments: 13
rosalynthewolf [2015-06-30 19:32:59 +0000 UTC]
I love it with all my heart
The way you write is gorgeous *q*
I can't wait for the next chapter
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melondramatics In reply to rosalynthewolf [2015-06-30 19:35:06 +0000 UTC]
awww thank you so much! <3
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NeeHima [2015-06-30 05:04:14 +0000 UTC]
OMG
Mel this is so super amazing so far <33 I'm loving how the story is coming out !! : o
The fanfic is so neatly written and I love your writing !! ; v ;
And the picture is so gorgeous omg I can't <33 I love the colors and the background
Eyyy I see some Korpiri action too e u e
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melondramatics In reply to NeeHima [2015-06-30 05:08:05 +0000 UTC]
aww thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far~ ;u;
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cherrilu [2015-06-28 18:33:50 +0000 UTC]
omgg, I just finished reading the first chapter and I'm hooked *v* your writing style is really lovely!! I'm super excited to see what happens next
also regarding the drawing here, the perspective is absolutely amazing?? and the colours are so so so pretty and very aesthetically pleasing to the eye <33
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melondramatics In reply to cherrilu [2015-06-28 18:39:27 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you so much! ;o;
fkjshgdflk YES I'M MOSTLY PROUD OF THE ARTWORK THAN THE WRITING TBH, MOSTLY CUZ I THINK I DID A COLOURING EVOLUTION
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cherrilu In reply to melondramatics [2015-06-29 15:45:42 +0000 UTC]
AAAa not a problem!! ;v;
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Aix-la-Chapelle [2015-06-28 13:07:56 +0000 UTC]
ooc: YES YES YES
I immediately read it and the first chapter is already really really good! I love your writing style! I can't wait for the next chapter ;; v ;; <33
And the picture is amazing! You improved so much omg-- <33
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melondramatics In reply to Aix-la-Chapelle [2015-06-28 17:57:01 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it ;u;
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Chamomilliya [2015-06-28 08:45:38 +0000 UTC]
Ahmmm I'm not much enjoy with many fantasy story except SAO //shot but for this fanfic, it make me smoothly enjoy the storyline and the characters who appeared so far maybe we are familiar with the characters so it rly curious about what happen next? Idk
My favourite part is your description about Yong Soo personality and ambition (?) so Yesh get one side from SK dork--
Nah some pieces of art (?) quite help me for imagine what the setting--I love the bubble one lmao
And you very improved ayyy the hand tho <333
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melondramatics In reply to Chamomilliya [2015-06-28 17:58:45 +0000 UTC]
lmao SAO's average tho--//slapped good concept, poor execution is my issue with SAO even tho i like it
but I'm glad you enjoyed the fanfic. ;u;
ah yes, I enjoyed using the game's artworks in order to help add to the story feel. Thank you!
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Spirit-Okami [2015-06-28 04:11:01 +0000 UTC]
Jesus christ Mel the anatomy looks good ahhh <3333//kicked
Omg I could try to make a full ref of Yong Soo if you want
Hnng now I wanna draw some poketalia korpiri <33
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melondramatics In reply to Spirit-Okami [2015-06-28 04:13:40 +0000 UTC]
omg go for it ;u;
and thank yooouuu
hope the chapter was good! ;o;
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