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Published: 2015-10-16 04:40:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1940; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Second time using Adobe Illustrator. Of course I practiced on my favorite video game character everRelated content
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MiloCroft [2015-10-16 07:32:12 +0000 UTC]
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You did it again Melonie! You made another awesome artwork! I really like this one.. Even tho its so simple, its still.. Somehow very detailed.. But what i would do, is the change the b**bs. They look weird... I also really like her face, and the way she stands.. And ofcourse, the original braid! To be quite honest, you should keep making art like this! I love how this kind of art looks.. Simple but beautifull! Her eyes also look very magnificent, so realistic too! Not to small, not too big. Its perfect e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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tZuB [2015-11-22 21:53:24 +0000 UTC]
I have to learn how to use illustrator too. Have you used some kind of tutorial to handle freehand illustration on AI or are you self-taught?
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CharlesAaronMcCoy [2015-11-20 12:19:54 +0000 UTC]
You got the Wacom Cintiq and you made that?
Normally, you work with a bamboo and whatnot before buying a professional grade tablet to see if the investment risk would be with it yes? I just don't see it where it was needed yet, doesn't seem you're that focused, as this seemed to be an hour of work.
Not saying I'm better because clearly my only style is cartoonish and raise two children and have a day job while the mother shoots up junk, but you also don't see me investing into something so expensive unless I'm going to take it seriously.
Critique:
cross eyed
Boobs looks like as if she forgot her bra before raiding tombs, as where game wise they are perky
Too thick of outline on the zipper area
Very basic minimum shading, the belt buckle only area I noticed that wasn't bad in that aspect
Only areas you showed attention to is the mouth and eyes which look fantastic, everything else was like you said well I'm done...
The line work is very odd shaped, I'm going to assume this is from lack of structure, meaning you shouldn't go straight into the making the line work without making a very solid sketch of everything down to most little details, but focusing on the main structure of the body is always the first key.
I know, I was rough but these guys that are giving you all these complaints are nut riders because you're a Female youtuber and us men are pathetic asskissing "do whatever for female attention" natured from birth, so I thought I'd drop a real message instead. Thanks for reading if you even made it this far.
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Shinhoyo [2015-10-16 18:21:45 +0000 UTC]
That is so awesome! I'm jelly... Β (get it? Jelly? Jealous? xD... I suck at puns...)
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SuperSaiyan3Scooby [2015-10-16 14:07:03 +0000 UTC]
was this all done with vector lines?
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MelonieMac In reply to SuperSaiyan3Scooby [2015-10-16 21:33:38 +0000 UTC]
All freehand on IllustratorΒ
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SuperSaiyan3Scooby In reply to MelonieMac [2015-10-17 04:37:23 +0000 UTC]
Thats not at all bad. I have a hard time useing Illustrator
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Unoffoff [2015-10-16 04:58:30 +0000 UTC]
I like the great amount of detail you used to accent the eyes.Β Great work, considering you're using a software you're still becoming familiar with.Β I need to start creating digital art too.Β What kind of hardware are you using for this?
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MelonieMac In reply to Unoffoff [2015-10-16 05:13:31 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I used a Wacom Cintiq 21UX
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