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Published: 2011-07-09 09:45:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1398; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 9
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EDIT: changed the eyes, but it still looks strange somehow, lolzanyway this is final, I won't edit it anymore.
unedited version: [link]
I want to try a manga style, which I never tried before,
but... what the heck is this!!???
it's not manga like in my head... lolz
to #Improvement-Club : since this is supposed to be manga, and many of my friends complaining about the eyes,
I want someone to correct the eyes, or any other part of the images you see as necessary
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Wow! keren gan!
Gan Kalo Painting Harus Pake Pen Tablet ya???
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thx
yah, klo gw sih pake, ada juga yang ga, tapi sangat2 mempermudah kalo pake tablet
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Yw... Macama
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thx kk!
walaupun bakal jarang karya baru nih, hahaha
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Yohohoohooo.... Selooouuww...
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I loved it
The eyes look a lot better after the edditing
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wah thx, emank paling lama bikin rambutnya, hahaha
tp masih kalah la sm gambar2 bro, masih banyak flaw-ny ini hahah
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The lighting in the hair is amazinggg
But the eyes are a bit funky, but oh my gosh this is a beautiful picture. THE HAIR. I can't get over THE HAIR
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funky... hmmm... an interesting way to describe it, lolz
anyway, thx! I'm pretty surprised myself with the hair, it's my first time to draw a detailed hair like this ^^
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OMG.
HAIR! I love how you painted the light and shading in her hair.
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Thx!
I spend the time mostly to polish the hair, in fact this is the first time I paint a detailed hair like this
and I'm pretty surprised and satisfied with it.
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Thats so cool!
I love it when good stuff happens
when playing around with PS.
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yeah, experimenting is great
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I believe the eyes are too 3D. Manga eyes tend to have flatter colors and usually look sparkly. In fact your shading style is pretty realistic, so it's not really suitable if you want to draw manga. Cell shading should work better instead XD
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I intend to make this piece semi-realistic, but the combination is just weird, need more practice
and I'll consider to try cell shading next time, thx for your advice
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Wow! just... wow! I love how you coloured it, so profesional 
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Thx! I'm glad if you think it's professional, hope I could be a "real" one, lolz
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All you'd really need to do to correct the eyes would be to make the outline around her eyes darker, like in the corners and all. Her eyelashes can still be red, but if you were to darken the outside and brighten the sclera, you'd be set. Otherwise, this image is BEAUTIFUL and I love it!
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Thx! especially for your neat advice
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I can try to correct the eyes, overall the picture is very beautiful!
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wow, thx! can't wait for your correction
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[link] <--- there it is 
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woooow it looks so real! nice high lights and contrasts!
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thx! especially for the fave
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