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It was supposed to be a regular crime scene. You know the usual, Sherlock drawn to the crime scene with John in tow. John, wanted a regular night. Sherlock, wanted in interesting night. And an interesting night it would be.
John and Sherlock climbed out of the taxi. The building was surrounded with people and police officers trying to keep the people away. The smell of smoke was in the air, meaning there had most likely been a fire. There were two police officers, Lestrade and Sally huddled together. John soon figured out they weren't huddling, but investigating something. And it wasn't a something, but a someone.
He and Sherlock went over to the small group to see a little child, no older than one or two. You were clutching a blanket covered in dirt. Your cheeks were tear stained and eyes puffy. The small group looked up at Sherlock and John. "Who's this?" John asked. "We're not sure, we can't get her to say anything," Sally said. Sherlock knelt next to the little girl. You looked at him, eyes widening in fear. You clutched onto your blanket tighter. "Hi," Sherlock said softly. You didn't say anything. "Can you tell me your name?" he asked. "(Name)," you squeaked.
"Where's her parents?" John whispered to Lestrade. "We can't find her dad or mum," he whispered back. At the mention of your parents, your eyes began filling up with tears. You began crying. "Shh, shh, it's ok. We'll find your parents," Sherlock said. That didn't do anything. It didn't even seem like you heard him.
Another police officer came out of the building and whispered something to the one near you. The police officer nodded and said, "There's no trace of her parents. It's like they vanished." You cried harder.
"We'll take her," Sherlock said. He picked you up. You buried your head into his shoulder, the cries becoming softer and softer. "Wait, what? Sherlock, you have no idea how to take care of a child, let alone a toddler. Neither of us do!" John said. Sherlock stood. "John, we can't let her go into foster care. We did good getting her to say her name," Sherlock replied. John sighed, "You're right." John turned to the police officer and said, "Are there any forms we have to fill out?" "Yes, but I don't have them with me. I can bring them by tomorrow. Where do you live?" he asked. John gave him the address, then followed Sherlock into a taxi.
You ended up falling asleep on the ride to the loft. Sherlock laid you on the couch and covered you up. You pulled your blanket closer and curled into a ball.
The next day, you woke up before Sherlock and John. You sat up, taking in your new surroundings, trying to figure out why you weren't in your bed. You climbed off the couch, grabbed your blankie, and walked down the hall. One of the doors was opened. Your one yr. old mind filling with curiosity, you walked in. Sherlock was lying in bed still in his clothes from last night. You walked over to the bed, somehow managed to pull yourself up, and laid on top of him. You drifted back to sleep on top of the detective.
Sherlock, who had woken up when he heard footsteps, smiled softly and went back to sleep.
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Comments: 14
Twice1nce [2020-02-24 10:48:16 +0000 UTC]
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Wolfewind12 [2015-12-12 09:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Awww!!! The last part was adowable!!! You should do more, although I'd make the reader a little older in the next part, coz how would a 1yr old walk...? I know a 1yr old and she's still a baby, so please do make reader at least a child or 12yr old or something like that. You don't have to though, it's your desicion, not mine.
Here's a suggestion: Moriarty should kidnap reader and Sherlock and John have to save her, and they find lots of cleverly hidden clues from reader, and there's a bomb stuck to her, and they have to get it off, and defeat Moriarty who's got her in a cell of some sort.
You should also add Mary into it as well, things would turn very interestingly then!
It's just a suggestion, and I make very bad long stories, but I like to give people great ideas so they can inspire me and lots of others to do better! I think your'e great btw!!!
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Memily4ever In reply to Wolfewind12 [2015-12-12 14:42:44 +0000 UTC]
That is a really, really good idea! I was having trouble trying to figure out what to do with the reader and I like your idea of making her older in the next chappy! Thank you so much!
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JustMadeThisUpMyself [2015-06-22 21:55:59 +0000 UTC]
This is adorable!! One thing, though, the reader is told to be one year old, but if I remember right a person can't walk or talk real fluently until they're about two years old.... Other than that, I absolutely love this fanfic!!
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izzibot [2015-06-17 10:32:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the definitely needs to be continued! Sherlock being all cute and fluffy is fun!
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iced-ninja [2015-06-16 18:38:02 +0000 UTC]
I think, what would help, is to start a new paragraph when someone new speaks.
Age needs to be consistent, not just oh, reader is one, next paragraph reader is a year older. Also, characters might need a little more work to stay in character. In all reality, it would be John would get the toddler to talk, while Sherlock would insist that they didn't have the means to take care of said toddler.
Goodness. I feel so terrible.
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Memily4ever In reply to iced-ninja [2015-06-16 18:40:59 +0000 UTC]
To be honest, that's how I had it in the first draft, with John getting the toddler the talk and Sherlock being argumentative. But I wanted try and get some Sherlock fluff in there, and yeah.
Why do you feel terrible? This what I wanted people to comment, so I can work on it.
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iced-ninja In reply to Memily4ever [2015-06-16 19:05:47 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, I kinda felt like I was hurting your feelings.
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iced-ninja In reply to Memily4ever [2015-06-16 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]
OK. :3 Great. I hoped I helped.
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