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MemoryFinder — Attempting Contemplation
Published: 2006-04-22 03:57:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description If I talk through silly sunsets,
will you see this place I have become forgotten in?  
I wonder
where supposed friends hang their non caring heads
and dream of days when promises were kept-
“Let’s,
keep in touch” he would say,
sprinkle lemon on those blue eyes to bring out the shine
of the love of a man I used to know
caresses and kisses of.  Infatuation junkies,
sing your songs; write your books; I,
am, your Queen.  Better able only to understand you
because I despise everything about you
which I see
in my self;
the everything of nothing and everything again; at the same time,
intertwined, and I wake up
to a pill popping nation I have ever so lovingly become a part of.  
Where does the heart go when we die?  
Where does the soul rest when we are alive?  Why
think of these things like they are the end of things
when they are the beginning and so much more.  I want to know more-
to catch his fancy, to catch my eye, to contemplate ever the meaning of the afterlife.  
With a watchful shadow cast,
waiting for an act, and they tell me,
hushed voices in,
“This is what it’s all about.”  
Yes,
this,
is what it’s all about.
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Comments: 4

rwirtz [2006-04-22 13:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Open, yet a complex piece, with an interesting use of short and long sentences. Lovely, mesmerizing imagery and still very recognizable.

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MemoryFinder In reply to rwirtz [2006-04-22 16:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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platinummyr [2006-04-22 04:38:22 +0000 UTC]

where supposed friends hang their non caring heads ~ AWESOME LINE!

This peom, or is it a song? is really cool. So many great lines like the one above that are just eye catching and mind blowly well written. This is just so great! Not allot to say for critique, but I am amazed you got no comments yet.

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MemoryFinder In reply to platinummyr [2006-04-22 05:03:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for the comment and the fav... that means alot on that piece. i think its the first "finished" type thing I've thrown up here in a long time.... even though it could still use some focus.

Thank ya Thank ya

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