Picabo [2004-05-08 23:43:34 +0000 UTC]

very long piece...i like a lot of the lines in this piece...a truly emotional piece...nicely done

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Billy-X [2004-05-08 14:55:02 +0000 UTC]

These nights got longer
As I couldn't sleep
Laying here trying
I just think too deep

^^Well, thanks for writing about me lol... stupid lack of sleep... XxBillyxX

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Moonlitwolf [2004-05-07 15:59:05 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing...so sweet and soft in a way...

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DerEinzel [2004-05-07 06:53:38 +0000 UTC]

man, now i feel like running back to my old girl...
hurtful relationship, though...
but love is love

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FallThruStardust [2004-05-07 02:21:10 +0000 UTC]

I love it...that would make a very good song... specially love the last part

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sweething852002 [2004-05-07 02:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Exactly can't I just dream about my angel. We are too far to even touch each other. I'm strong. I have nights when I think too deep about my bf. He never hurt me. I do cry for him sometimes. I think that's a good thing.

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Umadyen [2004-05-06 23:58:09 +0000 UTC]

this one and "it was" are both excelent poems

i just realized... i had both your latest poems ("it was" and "for you") in a row in my message box... and i saw that they said: "it was for you"... was this done on purpose?

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tappergurl [2004-05-06 19:23:03 +0000 UTC]

Very emotional and awesome,
"This is the story
About what
Happened
To us"
Very good lines because when fools fall in love their is a lot of cheating and heartbreak. Well written deary.

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